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Review of Christmas Wish  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
We all love to read stories about grandpas/grandmas. "Christmas Wish" is one that brings to mind many tales about other grandpas/grandmas, especially the "love" that Andy has for his grandpa; especially as he remembers years in the company of his grandfather. I would say this little flash tale is just the right piece of work about Christmas...



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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (3.0)
"Untitled Moonlight-Chapter Four" is a light tale about animals and the friendship between animals. However, I would like to let the writer know of the following errors in spelling: Number one: "Her sent was stronger..." "sent" should be spelled "scent"
Number two: "I guess I'll have to try not to wake her ... try not to get "board". "board" should be spelled "bored".

Maybe the writer should scan her/his work before sending it out. Spellings are one of the mistakes that writers often do...


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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The "October 31 Plot Premise Revisited" is a one-line tale about an investigator who writes well... How great it is to write and write well... We hope to read more of this writer's work...


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Review of Ink and Graphite  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes, I believe I would agree with the writer of "Ink and Graphite", of the last sentence he wrote, that says: "The sterile design we would have made pales beside the vibrant forest of serendipity that springs forth from the seeds we call error." We all get there, I suppose...


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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
"Age Does Not Matter" tells a story of "Mary Josephine Moses", who was once married to a prince. She lived in a sanitarium after the death of her husband. Unfortunately the sanitarium closed down and Mary "was shuffled to a homeless shelter". In our present-day life, we learn of, and we become aware of, how Mary or any Mary for that matter, becomes a "bag lady". It is truly unfortunate that there are many Marys today, with a social problem that some governments are unable to solve. I appreciate the writer who shows us through this tale that there are people like Mary...


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Review of ROCKFORD ROCK  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very interesting tale of a stone, who once lived by the lake; lived in a cage with a turtle and then with a hamster, and continued to other "adventures" as depicted by the writer. I decided to review this piece of writing because of how the writer made his work really as interesting with the number of characters that became part of the story. Here's hoping the writer will continue to present more of his work...


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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (3.5)
There are many questions a writer asks in the piece of work, "Purgatory of Footsteps". What is life and what is death? In writing, writers do show and tell of questions that are sometimes unanswerable because in our earth world there is always "something unanswereable"...


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Review of ABANDONED  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
"Abandoned" is an interesting tale of a "house"... At first, it was a great, beautiful building that "shined with sparkle"; that unfortunately turned into a broken, "cardboard box". However, the depth of sadness was transposed into a "girl" who "jumps out" of a car, and said, "Stop"...
And there comes the beginning of a new life for the broken-down house... An interesting tale, indeed...


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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I feel I must review this piece of writing: "Unexpected Company (1st Place)" because it made me feel that there is goodness among us, earth people!!! I would consider the story a "rescue tale" because a man, almost "lost hope of survival", was rescued. The fact that two men in a sheltered place gave "life" back to another... We need more of this kind of stories...


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Review of Unmasked  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow, "Unmasked", is a funny (I really think it is funny!!!!) tale of someone who has a good sense of humor. It is but a short tale; however, it does convey a sense of "comic" situation. It starts with the "fox", better known as the "Zorro", striking again; the need to be quiet in the presence of a beauty; goes along with the "undressing"; then a sharp waking up of the sleeping beauty; and goes on off to "riding off through the desert night" and admiring the "handful of clothes" to fit his size... Thanks for the laugh, writer....

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Review of Excerpt  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The "Excerpt" tells of a girl's first day in an "elegant" school, chosen for her because she is the "future Empress", who "needs to be educated". The girl is probably a bit anxious what is in store for her at the new school. So it is only fair to let her fuss about going; however, the girl admits to herself of "two overprotective people" in her life, who cares and love her... This little tale is the author's piece of work that she/he plans to write, "eventually" It is an interesting piece that creates a tale of how children try to manage their feelings when school starts...



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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The "Review of Hidden Lies" is interesting because it tells how a reader became interested in a story, that not only interested her/him but also enjoyed the "unique culture" of the country that the book describes. It brings to mind that reading a book should not only satisfy but should also give a sense of being a part of the story, for the emotions that are aroused in a reader...


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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thank you, very thankful (441), for your "Writing Resources". Like you, I like to read books that are a great help to writers. And like you, I do prefer bookstores that give back to the community. I shall try and get the many books you suggested... Again, many thanks.


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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Yes, quite an adventure story, jackiesmuse (71), regarding your "The Adventures of Pinky and Porky". Your writing was done in a light tone, not joking of course but something light and interesting. There are many stories about children and the many wonderful things they get into, and yours has given me something to think about...really interesting, indeed...


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Review of Why?  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (3.5)
You seem to be writing something positive with your piece of work, "Why?", Black Panther. It is all right to ask questions, of course, whether or not you are able to write some piece of work that is interesting to readers. That is how writers start, did you know that? We write, and then we ask questions: are our writing tells a story or a just going round and round because we are stuck at one point that does not even say anything. However, your attitude, the questions you ask, and the manner in which you seem to want to write is really good enough. It takes time to know whether or not we are writers; we just carry on writing because that is all we know...


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Review of The Basin  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Reviewing the "Basin" caught my interest because it tells of how a "humble utensil" was fashioned by a "potter" into a "new and beautiful" utensil, a basin... and how the writer used a verse in the Bible to bring out the actual meaning of the poem: humility... Interesting, indeed...


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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
"The Academy of Twisted Topiaries"is an interesting tale of Robert who was terribly interested in topiaries. Very much interested in topiaries, Robert unfortunately ended up one of them, a "sentinel" on the grounds of the school he got deeply interested to undertake... Is this magic or what?????


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Review of Deep thought  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, there, writer (4) for your little poem, "Deep thought". I would just like to point out a little "missing" letter on your third stanza: "You" (I believe) should be "Your", right? Otherwise, your poem did convey some kind of thought to me...


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Review of Dog Gone Nights  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi, WW is Monk!(1892), you wrote an interesting piece of work, "Dog Gone Nights", that made me laugh because I did enjoy your little tale... It was interesting indeed because when people talk (or rather write) about dogs and cats and non-human characters, there is always a feeling of either a little bit of hatred that actually turns into a fun thing that relates to both human and non-human characters... Do write more like this, and I am sure your writing will go far and wide....


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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
What an interesting review, "A Rose by Any Other Name". If death comes as quickly as what became of the man in this tale, it is surely great. However, I wonder why such a man took it upon him to "kill"??? Here's to the writer; may you continue to write more interesting anecdotes....


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Review of The Queen  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I sort of wondered if the poem, "The Queen" is about the passing of Queen Elizabeth, the Queen of England? It is indeed a sad day for England as well as for people who have loved her as a mother, grandmother, friend or whatever... because I would like to join in my sympathies for the passing of a monarch who has given much of her life to her people... Thanks for the writer...


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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (3.0)
"Non-Humans R Us Welcome Letter" tells of a group of people who have decided to form a group with the intention of reading about and looking at pictures of non-humans as well discussion sessions that should not get to the point of anger. The intention is great and the rules are as well easy to follow; however, if any member is found to use the group as a "battleground", then the ultimate end is getting thrown out of the group. It is an interesting idea, of course, because there are many who are prone to anger and hate when their opinions become the reason for anger and hatred...


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Review of Wildling Girl  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
"Wildling Girl" is a little tale that tells us of someone who is "...slowly slipping away" from the memory of someone who cares... Quite an interesting tale...


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Review of Honor  
Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I agree with the writer of "Honor": in order to really honor a soldier, a sailor, an airman or a guard or for that matter, anyone who takes up a "sacred pact" to care for others, is to "act by taking care of those who guard us." It is indeed a "sacred pact" for each and every one of us to do as we memorialize the many who died...To Sacred Moon, thanks for your words...


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Review by elephantsealer
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The story behind "The Non-existent Family" reveals a truth that members of a family refuse to admit... One sister's experience of a father who abused her sexually was a revelation that made each family realize the abuse they each experienced in the hands of a father... It is indeed a sad tale, revealing, most probably, that each member of the family may have suffered in the hands of a devil of a father... Interesting tale...


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