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Review of A Love So True  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (2.0)
I really liked reading this. Maybe next time you could use a more "developed" vocabulary
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Review of Revenge so sweet  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
This was deep. I liked reading it. A lot of thought was out into this. Great job.
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Review of My Angel  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (1.5)
This was deep, I enjoyed reading it. I could tell a lot of thought was put into this
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Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (2.0)
I'm not a big fan of a story with all dialogue, but it had a lot of thought put into it
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Review by Alyssa
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
This didnt grab my attention.. Good job though
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Review of The Bench  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (1.0)
You lost me in the middle.. It was to plain
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Review of Remember When  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (1.0)
To me this was too plain. You did a good job, just add more detail next time
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Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (1.5)
I enjoyed reading this. You did a great job keeping my attention
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Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (1.5)
Good job, i liked it. try using more specific details
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Review of Life of Teenager  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (1.0)
This is on point. Good job
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Review by Alyssa
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Yellow Cab  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (1.5)
I liked this, it was great. Keep up the good work
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Review by Alyssa
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
I really liked this. Good job
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Review by Alyssa
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I really enjoyed this flash fiction story, it had a nice twist
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Review of The Morning Hunt  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (5.0)
Tyler, this poem is so simple yet so deep about hunting. You could used bigger words though. Great job bud.
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Review of Anger  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (3.0)
I like the repetition of the word anger. I can relate to stuff in this poem. You did a great job.
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Review of What is left?  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (3.0)
Girl, I love this. It was deep. I can relate to some stuff in here.
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Review of Not Yours To Take  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem was really deep. I enjoyed reading this a lot.
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Review of Good VS. Evil  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (3.0)
I really liked this poem. I do think you should've kept up the rhyme scheme though.
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Review of Five minutes  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (3.0)
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I can relate. One thing you can to to improve your writing is to avoid cliches
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Review of Freedom  
Review by Alyssa
Rated: E | (3.0)
To mean this poem is kind of choppy. Maybe you could add in some stuff next time so it wouldn't be so choppy. Other than the flow, I really enjoyed this poem.
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