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Review of Guilty!  
Review by ShellySunshine
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Marcus

So a diary entry is this all you have? What was the crime and the girl? How did she pay???? Dang you have the opening of a wonderful little story, were are you going with this and can I come along???

Welcome back to the writing world. I really missed you!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review of Thru The Dark  
Review by ShellySunshine
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Hello shaggypane

To walk in darkness takes internal light. I know I have had a long journey in darkness. Funny how only minute to minute I was able to make my way. I love the flow of your words and the deep meaning behind them. Without prayer would it even be possible to rejoice?

Write on!
Michelle
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Review of d:) =|--=  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Tysonroyal,

I am not really sure what your so happy about but hey, I'm just glad that you feel like sharing it. I have never been good with the symbols but I get the wee effect just fine.

Welcome to Writing.com and what else are you willing to share? Creative writing can come in so many forms!

Write on!

Michelle
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Review of Walks in life  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jimminycritic

I have to say your title caught my attention but the meloncoly flow of your words grabbed my attention. What is it about journeys of the soul? We can discover so much when we travel alone but we need to be a part of something bigger to feel accepted. Like our own journey is worth it. We have to believe in our own faith before we can take on others.

I am really glad I stopped over to read this. Thanks for sharing your walk and also for helping me with the Paper Dolls. I feel better knowing I am leaving it with someone I really trust.

Thank you for everything....and just what side of the country do you live in Michigan? I'm stuck in the middle. LOL

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi BScholl

Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" 

I Judge on the following three items:

1. Follow the prompt. I almost think your image should go after the story, cuz I was expected her to be young first but you have it reversed and that is very interesting. I like the way the image is a reflection of a dream as well...clever.


2. Easy to Read. I had to read this several times and I am still scratching my head over the ending...something about the fingertips gives me chills and did she forget that she had that dream before or that she is grown up? It's kind of confusing but maybe that is how you want it. It makes you think.


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. Nothing stands out as an error and I did enjoy reading your take on the image prompt. Thank you and good luck in the contest.



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Review of Climax  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Ken,

Where on the earth do you get your talent and wisdom? You have to know this touches me deeply. I love this kind of womanly power but she lost her value in all her perfection. What an amazing story you have here in poetry form. It really makes me wish I had your talent. I admire your poetry and writing.....A LOT!

I know you like praise but dang, even I am getting bummed out! lol Wait, I am not like this woman at all, cuz I know and can appreaciate the goodness in my life and that is having friends like you and enjoying your talent. Thanks again for bidding on my package reviews. I have enjoyed my little escape into your port. I miss my time here!!

Take care and best to you always!!
Hugs & Love,
Michelle
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Review of Masquerade  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hey Ken,

This has to be a bonus for both of us! Man, this was great. I could not only see her but feel your passion as well. I loved the excitement of it and the ending of finally being able to connect without the games but the reality of what just happened. Man I love sex and I also love romance when you can get both at the same time, you are getting the good stuff! I am happy I found this. Thanks for sharing your writing talent. Now you really have pissed me off a poet and this too! You can wrap me in ribbons anytime! lol

Write on my talented friend!!
Hugs,
Michelle
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Review of Admonitions  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ken,

I know you won my package of poetry reviews, but to be honest...I don't know what auction this is from or how many I am suppose to gift you. I am betting it was 5. *Smile* That is my normal package. LOL

So now about this warming going on. We are fools to think Mother Nature is not speaking to us! She is changing the planet earth and we just sit here on our butts ordering iced coffee! Would our moms have ever drank iced coffee? LOL
I love the message in your words and I hate the word goodbye!!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review of Wall Barrier  
Review by ShellySunshine
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jenny,

This poem seems simple but it is anything but! I love the complex emotions and that we can have the best sensations but get carried away from the reality of it by the walls we put up. At least this is what I feel and think when I read your words. I so love poetry that can make me thinK!!

Thank you again for all your creative talent. I was happy to surf your port tonight. Sorry for the delay in taking care of this package win. I will have your gift in the mail this week.

Write on!
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jenny,

I think you nailed the translation and the relationship sounds like its a homerun! Nothing beats that connection! I am such a romantic and I love this kind of personal poetry.

Thanks for sharing it and I hope the playing never stops!!

Write on!
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Jenny,

I loved this. I never could understand my moms addiction to coffee, but man as an adult I sure do get it! Now I love my creamed and flavored sweet! This makes me want to make some!!

Thanks for sharing the beverage of choice!

Again thank you so much for bidding on my package. This is review 3 of 5.

Write on!
Michelle
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Review of For Mike  
Review by ShellySunshine
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jenny,

This makes me wish I really knew exactly what Mike you are talking about. I know it was sent anonymously but dang, I think we should know! We are all blessed on this site when we share our creative hearts. It sounds like Mike has a very big one!

Thanks again for bidding on my package and for sharing your talent and friendship with so many!

Write on!
Michelle
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Review of Bathtub Haven  
Review by ShellySunshine
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jenny,

Thank you for bidding on my package. I really had to laugh at your poor puppy being so scared. I can see his little body jumping into the bathtub. I wonder how he knows to do that? My dog hates the bathtub! Even without water. lol

I love the flow of your words and how I can see his fear from the noise. Your words really paint a picture of it happening right now. I like that.

Great job of sharing your world. Write on!
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" 

I Judge on the following three items:

1. Follow the prompt. To take a picture prompt and bring into it emotions is what I am looking for! I love the way this drew me in and kept my interest. I'm such a sucker for emotional writing and this was deep and beautiful.


2. Easy to Read. I loved it. You did a great job of setting up the storyline and developing the characters.


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. Great Job and Thank you so much for your story. I am sorry for the delay in getting this reviewed. I promise to have the results of the contest by the end of the month!


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Review of Faded Hearts  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" 

I Judge on the following three items:

1. Follow the prompt. I love the twist of ages in this story. What a fun way of using the picture prompt. Great character development.


2. Easy to Read. Easy to read and an enjoyable and timely tale.


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. Great job I truly enjoyed your writing! Good Luck in the contest!



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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Sun*Hi Again Bill,

Okay I Love Haikus but I am not sure I get the modern form...still I just wrote about wanting to be a willow tree and I can see some of her charm in your words. It's amazing to me how something like a tree can be imagined into a symbol of something more then the orginal. Crativity at it's best. Thank you for sharing your talent!


I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Sun*Hi Khaki,

I have some bubbles with me and I am glad I found you highlighted with Showering Acts of Joy, I wanted to come visit your port. I had to laugh at the wisdom here and the humor. It's true we are all on some kind of path, it might not get us to the right place at the right time but it will get us someplace, as long as we keep moving forward!


I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review:
I think you have so many undercurrents here in this story, it feels so unfinished to me. These woman have a history and something to do with saving the next planet might make them friends again if that is even possible. Interesting concept and nicely written. Is there more to this?


Write on!
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Review of Meeting Him  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1

Okay I had to come back and see what else you held in your port, but this caught me by surprise and I so expected you to be sitting next to Jesus and I honestly think you might have been, as I often think of him as Santa! What a great way you have with spinning a tale in poetry form. Great job! Thanks for sharing your vision.

Write on!
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Review of The Jester  
Review by ShellySunshine
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sum1

What I like about the Jester is the open truth here about life. How we give for other's without realizing the "behind' the sceens feelings of our own insecurity. You have so many emotions and images dancing in this poem, I can see and feel it. I love poetry that inspires me. Thank you for sharing the jester.

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Review of Amour  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon

Does the heart protect itself in flight? I wonder if it can!!!! I love the image and how true your words ring in my heart and ears. Like a bird the heart goes were it can fly freely...No set pattern or direction, it just goes!

Wonderful poem and thank you for sharing it. As always I love to read your poetry.

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Abby Russel

Wow this captured my attention. I loved the opening line....can we only be together in death? What an interesting dream and is this the start of a book you are writing? I can see this being developed into something more. I like the emotional set up. I think this line did confuse me...She swam out to her, all Did you mean he?

Thanks for sharing and write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello bobsbaby

Oh man I can feel this, I get it and I totally understand the childs walls, I have been on both sides of this poem. For what girl hasn't? LOL Our mothers direct is in ways unseen but always felt with the heart. Great emotion and vision in your words. I bet you made mom cry!

Thanks for sharing!
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Review of Excuse me, who?  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello JCBWrite

So do we keep laughing because we are overwhelmed with guilt? Or do we keep laughing because we think, it will never happen to US? I wonder and I like poetry that makes me think and this is eye opening and thoughtful stuff. Great job, I can offer no suggestions for improvement so you get 5 happy stars from me!

Write on!
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Review of For An Angel  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Sherri,

This is stunning and so heartfelt. I feel horrible that I didn't know her better! We never grab a hold of all the blessings we are shown!!

I did notice that you have one typo...Those who knew here were truly blessed.
Did you mean her?

Love you!
Michelle
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