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Review of Autumn  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello ElaineElaine

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review: Autumn seems so far away, but with your words I can feel the chill and see the change of colors right in front of my eyes. Wow, I love imagery in poetry. Great job!



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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello StarNights

Breathe to my soul is a great poem of inspiration and emotion. I like the word choices and the flow. I love that longing feeling of before I say goodbye, touch me...so I don't have too. I so get that connection and empty feeling. I only have one suggestion. Check your spelling...Wich is which. experience...etc...

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Pepper
Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" 

I Judge on the following three items:

1. Follow the prompt. I love what you have done with this image. I have to agree, that the bronzed image is really space age and I like the direction you went and great descriptions of characters.


2. Easy to Read. I was so bummed she really didn't escape and she never will. Wow!


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. Pepper, I really enjoy your writing. Excellent job!

Good luck in the contest!

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Emk1991

This is my favorite kind of poem. It speaks of the heart, the relationship and the true beauty of love. It can be so painful and messy and wonderful. I espeacially love the last line. We only fell apart. Man, I can so relate to this. I want so much to give this a 5 star, but I have a personal beef with the little i. It needs to be captialized. Otherwise this would be just perfect! Thanks for sharing and keep on loving!

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Review of April  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Frankie Starr,

It is very hard to read this kind of rant and know what kind of feedback to leave. I don't think your looking for a grammar lesson. I don't think you need someone to tell you it's going to be okay. I just wonder Who April is and if you really know what you are getting into. I really like the emotional tone here. I love the strip of stars and the phone cord. You have some great imagery at play here. I do think you love her, but maybe not...it's confusing but isn't love great that way!

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Review of Must Be Heard  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Rick Goon

Your letter cuts right to my heart. I am so sorry for the trouble you have had to endure in the name of helping your/our country. It sucks to be put on such a defensive line. To have to play by the rules but they don't provide enough support when you really need it. What an eye opening letter this is! I suppose the good news here is that many VA hospitals are awesome. You will always have my respect. I think you rock! Good luck with the wife and baby, just take it one day at a time. Thank you for your service!

Welcome to Writing.com!
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Review of The Beginning  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Cal

Writing is a gift. Some can write easy and some can write with determination. I like blog writing if it is easy and comes from the cuff. I hope you enjoy writing here and sharing your new writing tools. We can all learn from each other. I alway believe that hope is what keeps all writers writing...The hope that the words will make sense. Plus, I can stop listening to so many voices in my head! Welcome to WDC!

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ~ Santa Sisco ~

This is every woman's fear! Not just for our husbands that go to war but for our sons!! You do bring the story alive in the grief and the poppy. It makes me think of my mother for some reason. She had a special place in her garden and heart for poppy's. Wonderful imagery and emotion. My favorite items in poetry. Thank you for Whome for gifting you my reviews.

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Review of One More  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tick

What an awesome idea for a poem! I love it. I love the image of his body curled up, I like the idea of the words trapped inside. It so interesting to think about! I am not morbid, but I liked it. I keep writing my poetry now, so that I don't feel trapped by my emotions. I hope when my time comes, I am done completely with no unfinished business. Thanks for sharing and 1981 wasn't really all that long ago....was it? LOL

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Review of My Love...  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Crimson Goth

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review:

I do so love a romantic poem that touches on nature, the stars...my favorite and you finish the poem with the touch and embrace of the words of a lovers voice. So soothing are your words. I hope they are returned.

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello woven yarn

I wanted to come over and visit your port, after you were so kind with your review of my poetry. Oh isn't this the truth! I do know love that has lasted a lifetime. Love can come in so many different ways and directions in one's life. I keep reminding myself, that my flame isn't really out right now, it's just dimmed. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Writing.com

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Moriarty,

Dang, I wish this would have made the contest limits. You have a real winner with this story!! I love the idea of having a famous Queen and her Leprechanun husband! What a clever twist for the use of the car. You have a great imagination and an easy short story style. Thank you so much for adding this to our contest.

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Prof Moriarty

Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" 

I Judge on the following three items:

1. Follow the prompt. I like how the Hand represents a business and what it means about destiny. Nice touch.


2. Easy to Read. I did enjoy the story, but lost a little at the part where Aron is fired and then she wants him back for the meeting. That part kind of confused me.


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. I only have an suggestion, I think this would read better, but it is up to you to make the corrections if you like. The line that this is office, would sound better if you wrote this is business, and to delete the word just in that line and add also that she is the president of the company. I think it might flow better. Other wise, I liked what you had.

Good luck in the contest.
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Review of ON YOUR FEET  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello open mind closed eyes

Wow! We are under attack and no amount of praying is going to keep the evil out. It is the life of a soidier. Your writing speaks a truth that is hard and reality biten. It is never easy to step into those shoes and see that kind of painful reality. It is why I sleep peacefully at night because other's have chosen not too. Thank you so much for a wonderful poem. Write on!!

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Star*Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon

Okay, this is deep and dark. I love it. Your fears are real when touched by the image. I love the voices and the way you descend into the nightmare of the book. It's true that evil can strike at any time of weakness. I am amazed again Ken, at your ability to write such a variety of poetry, that all speaks to the human heart. You are my hero and I would rescue you...If only to keep you writing poetry forever. Thank you for sharing your poems with me. I love it when you win my packages!!

I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review of Wildflower  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Star*Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon

Wow! All I keep thinking is about honey! I wonder why! Your imagery, the description does bring warmth and tenderness and a fond memory. Thankful that spring is here and perhaps the blossoming of more tender moments shared. Wonderful!!

Okay, now I need a cold shower!


Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Star*Hi Ken,

Tiny peaks of Terror? Oh my gosh, you make me laugh out loud!! I was thinking of that one short story you wrote for the paper gang, you really are freaked out by birds...huh? Do we need to talk? Thank you for sharing your pain. I say, you need to get someone else to do your shopping for you.
I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review of The Perfect Love  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Star*Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon

Oh nothing beats the love of a dog and no one should get in between that kind of attention and admiration. Once again you make me think, laugh and enjoy reading your poetry. I think it's time for a new pet? LOL

Thank you for bidding on my package, I am going to honor Showering Acts of Joy with your reviews, I hope you don't mind. It's kind of fun to share some bubbles with you.

I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello pandora9980

I can so relate to the twist and turns of your words. I love the laughing and screaming at the same time. Only someone that can do both really understands how real that painful feeling can be, and what is so odd is that sometimes it feels good and other times it is the worse feeling in the world. That complete upside down feeling of never knowing which one is going to be real. Life will always be interesting for a bipolar mind. Stay well.

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Review of The mangy cat  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello TheM4dH4tter

I wish everyone could take care of their animals like that! See what a little love and attention can do? It makes you wonder just what the spirit of the cat must be feeling and how poor her treatment was before she found a safe and healthy home. Keep sharing the love! Even ratty cats need love!

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Ly Ella

I love a poem that can touch the heart and that is sweet to think about. I like knowing that someone out in the night has a warm memory to keep with them. Loved the description of his blue eyes the same color of the sea. I only have one very real problem with this poem and it's your i. I is a proper noun and should always be captialized. If you did that to this poem, you would have a 5 star poem for sure. Every grammer book I have ever read tells me that i by itself is not a word. Thank you for sharing your poetry and I hope you keep writing and sharing your dreams.

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Review of A Good Soldier  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello DrJim

I have such respect for all our Soldiers!! I don't know if every Soldier is a good person, but the minute they put that uniform on and face the choice they have made. I know in my heart that person is special. They have something that is not like everyone else. They give something that I never could. I did find the middle stanza hard to read, but I did read it over again and that helped. It's not as smooth as the first two stanza's but still it works and thank you for sharing and Welcome to Writing.com

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Prof Moriarty,

What a cool and kinda funny template. I use a few templates but only when I want to impress, for the most part I have this really horrible habit of just saying whatever comes to mind when I read something. I know it's silly, but hey it works for me. Not everyone can get away with my creative charm. LOL Hope you have a wonderful day and congrats on winning the Newbie Challenge.

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Review by ShellySunshine
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sharkdaddy,

What a great user name! I am not one of the judges from Pat's contest, but I am finding these essays are so fun to read. It's interesting how a little play and creativity can come alive on the Internet. Good thing you have a sense of humor and that trampoline training!! Ican see you are using your talents wisely!!

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Review of No Such Luck  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Pepper

*Shamrock*Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" 

I Judge on the following three items:

*Star*1. Follow the prompt. I love how Da was able to make some magic with this car and contest. I think you did a great job with the image and story line.


*Shamrock*2. Easy to Read. Even in broken English, this girl was able to read this and enjoy the magic you created. Too funny and the message of finding gold in a father was not missed. Awesome!


*Star*3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. Great writing and story-telling. Thank you very much! Good luck in the contest.

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