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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Star*Hello warriormom

I keep forgetting the age of your son. I know he is still young and this is going to take some time to figure out. They always tells us, if he is still acting out, we have to keep changing the medications. It gets so old. It's so hard to live like this. Unless you have a child, you really have no idea what kind of pressure it is, to see the rage. To feel so completely helpless when they lose logic.
I just want you to know Pat, that I understand completely. I love you and you are so strong. You have no choice, but if you ever feel weak and need a hug or someone to cry with. I am only an email away. I am sending some extra bubbles and Love!

I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review of The Pirate's Love  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Sena Slaughter

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review: So he died for his crime and she died of a broken heart? Oh how sad! I like this sea chanty. I am always in awe of a pirates life and how they can be in love with the sea. It has to hold some kind of magic, that it could replace the love of a human. Interesting!!

Thanks for sharing and welcome to Writing.com
Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello kiyasama

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review: How awesome that Sapph wrote this poem for you and it was Highlighted. It gives everyone the chance to see you as the Star you really are. Sweet and kind to all. A purple we can all look up too! Perfect!!


Write on!
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Review of Together We Stand  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Rebecca Judah

What I wish with all my soul is that I could feel this way again. It get it. I love it and only wish that life and my own mistrust hadn't taken away my fairytale. I am still with him. I still love my friend but the magic is sorely missing. I only have one suggestion and really it;s just my personal beef, but I love to see the letter i, capitalizated. In my grammar book it states that you should always capitalize the pronoun I. I think it would make this appear a stronger piece. Thank you for sharing.

Write on!
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for entry "Black Male Blackmail" 
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Unratable.)
Hello a Sunflower in Texas

I found this highlighted and I loved the title.. You say this is just a draft but your writing seems very clear to me. I don't know what kind of direction you are taking, but it is interesting. I l ike the way it is jumbled in places, it's like the reader and writer are trying to figure it out together. You bring the writer into the story and that is cool. I say keep writing and let's figure out Benjamin at the end of the story. I never know what is fiction and what is fantasy, but you have something great here.

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Dr Matticakes Myra

The world of darkness! I don't think you can be a creative soul if you haven't spent some time in this place! I am not giving this a 5 star because this is the best writing I have ever read. I am giving this the 5 stars because it is honest. Reality can be a dark place to escape too and if you haven't felt a real depression you wouldn't believe this place is real.Oh but it is! I only have a few suggestions if you want to make this a stronger piece of writing. Personally, I am a snob when it comes to the letter i. When talking about yourself, always Cap the I. It reads and looks better. Also the word alot is two words, a lot. I'm not an editor and that is the extent of my knowledge. LOL Hope you are doing well!

Write on!
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Review of The Honey Bucket  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey Stinky Ken,

What a fun place to land on your last poetry review from your winning package. The honey pot! LOL

I am so sure that many kids have told this story and you really did fall in? Or should I say jump in? Oh man...This is yucky and funny. What I love about your writing is that you can take me on the journey with you. You bring your youth back and a laugh with your colorful words. I am just glad this is a time I don't want to smell ya. I keep thinking of your poor mother!!!! *Smile*
Thanks for bringing me joy and please always bid on my packages, you know I adore reading your poetry. Oh okay, you shouldn't have to pay me!! LOL

Love ya,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon

You have highlighted my biggest dream in this poem. I feel so much of my life is missing when my parents died and I lost my connection to the "older" generation. The respect I see missing in today's society scares me at times. Yet, I do see random acts of kindness too. It seems we need so much more. Your wisdom and words hit the target of my heart today with this poem. Simple words like Thank you seem so small. You have a piece of my heart in yours.

Write on!
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Review of Dark Music  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon

Now this one goes deep! I so get that she has a serious need to feel that dark music. I get that her bones are on fire. Oh I love reading something and falling right into the words. You have an amazing way of taking a prompt and bringing so much life into the poem. In many ways, she is the vampire not him...I like that!! I am so living that last line, Choices that can't be undone. Yikes!!

You are my hero!!
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Review of Vision Quest  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Brother 🌕 HuntersMoon

I knew you couldn't stay away from PI! LOL...

Something about this image makes it so amazing to write a poem about. So much is happening and you can really feel the spirit of her and the words that you chose. I do agree the journey is just beginning when we get that kind of enlightenment. We have to do something with the wisdom, we have to share it and give back. Thank you for always putting so much feeling into your words.

You rock!
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Review of Life's Dreams  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Sammie

This is the kind of poetry I like to read. It flows like the dream, full of energy, movement and an awakening of the soul. Funny how our body responds to the environment and our mind puts the play together in dreams. I am up late because I can not sleep. Too funny to find this poem. Perhaps I should find a better blanket! Thanks for sharing your dreams.

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello dollzell

Oh this is so tender and sweet and so sad as well. I have so many footprints on my heart. I have roads that are deeply covered with lovers feet. It is the story of my life. Not everyone we are destined to be together forever, but once the memories are formed they are impossible to forget. Wonder and may your heart always be open for more footprints.

Write on!
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Review of I am an orphan  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Bacia Saggezza

When my parents died 29 days apart...my sisters kept saying we were orphans. Let's just say at age 38, I really didn't feel that way. I felt sad, hurt and lost. But to be an orphan I felt I had to be a child and I wasn't that. I was a mother and wife and now years have gone by and at times I do feel like an orphan, but over time you plant your own tree and you learn that once you were strong enough to stand without them. It is all a matter of time and the of life going on.

I hope you know you are that strong plant!
Grow!

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Review of Hold On  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello jib_4ever

To hold on to something or someone is a big deal. Some times even the strongest bond can not keep that hold. This is a very emotional and strong poem. I love the feeling and the giving of self. You have your hands out. I hope the other person knows how lucky they are to have you. Never give up on what you believe in. Love is great!

Write on!
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Review of Tuatha Dé Danann  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Ken,

Thank you for your entry in the Paper Doll Short Story Challenge.

I am honored to judge this contest and find it so fun to see what creative words can come from a picture prompt.

I was hoping the little guy would drive away in the car, but he wasn't so lucky. He was a myth? You think? Okay, you got me with the play on words and his golden arm. Clever writing dear one, you actually went to some trouble to get your legends in order. Sham Rock...You slay me! Thanks and I hope the rest of the judges are just as impressed as I am. Happy Go Green!*Wink*


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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Retsced

You have nailed my personality to the wall here! I so get the confusion and the mask. I also live in this place that I pretend everything is filled with my love and I can never get hurt! Oh how I wish that was true! Life is best lived when we are honest, inside and out. If we take the time to own and believe in our emotions, we learn to trust ourself better. You have all the makings here of great wisdom and I am glad I read this. I can offer no suggestions to make this better. Only that you keep expressing and sharing your heart and own your emotions. Don't ever let anyone determine your worth. It is priceless!

Write on!
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Review of ETERNALLY YOURS  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Star*Hello ~WhoMe???~

I'm so glad to bring you a Showering Acts of Joy Review! This is my favorite kind of poetry. It speaks right to my romantic heart. It fills me with joy and awe! I love that Fate & Destiny gave you what your heart needed most. A soul-mate. Maybe you be forever happy in love!

I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Star*Hello fyn

I am back with one more Showering Acts of Joy Review! I had to read this! I love the eye catching title but to think you wrote this for a friend is even nicer. If your words jump off the page, I can't imagine what your friends must have done! I love the image of the summer ripe tomato. Makes me want summer all the more! Great words strung together! Thank you for sharing!

I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Star*Hello fyn
It is my pleasure to offer you a Showering Acts of Joy review!

What an awesome adventure! I don't know which one I liked better, Sarah or Sara's. LOL. I am in awe of this kind of writing and I love to travel out west. It is something! Your right, we have no mountains in Michigan. What a shame that we don't!! Your ending was so unexpected. I just assumed she would make it safely home. That would have been my happy ending. Still, I admire this kind of creative touch and leaving it the way you did add so much more to the mystery of it. Great job. I cannot think of anything to improve this great story. Thanks so much for sharing your traveling heart.

I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Star*Hi very thankful

It is my pleasure to offer you a Showering Acts of Joy review for your Guest book:

I love guest books that are so warm and inviting! I adore that picture as well. It's nice to think of a writer in there own little spot in the world. I can imagine if my laptop was wireless I would be outside every single day. Oh wait...In the summer, I am. LOL Thank you for sharing your port with open arms!

I hope you enjoyed the shower!

Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Joseph Whitworth Smith

Nothing beats a happy ending in a story for me! I can hear your laugh all the way to the bank! What an interesting write. I have to say, I love having my chart done and learning about signs. It's fun to think of all the possiblities that are available if you open up your mind and think. I don't mess with the IRS because they don't mess with me. I can see how human error can cloud up this issue. I am happy you got the results you deserve.

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Ski

Wow, that was one angry hawk! Your words visual and hurtful. Amazing vision and emotion. I can see that in the last stanza you don't want to be hurt, you want someone to befriend you and bring out the best in you. I get this emotional twist and hope that the hawk can always find someone to find it's worth. Scary to think of the opposite being true.

Write on!
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Review of Canyons of Light  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Circle of Sisters  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Thank you for your entry in this months "Rising Stars Shining Brighter"  I have never looked at a city as a cave. However, if you are standing on the moon, looking down...It very well could represent what you are talking about. You have a way of taking something so simple and making it complex, beautiful and interesting. Thank you for that and good luck in the contest this month!



Hugs,
Michelle
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello KristieS

When we love someone and they die, they never really leave us. Esp if you had a strong bond and it sure sounds like you had a great friendship. When someone shows us the best of every day, we are indeed blessed. Thank you for sharing what I am sure is a very sad emotional moment in your life. The heart never stops loving!

Write on and welcome to Writng. com!
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Review of Master  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello April Desiree-I'm back!

What I find so interesting with this poem, is how confused I am following it. I get the hurt feeling. I understand that you were treated poorly, that part I get. Perhaps it is the wording, the way that you ask questions but leave very little punctuation. In many ways I get this but to be honest, I like poetry that is clearer. It's just a personal preferance it's that last life I just don't get it. Well, don't let me stop you. Keep writing and sharing.

Write on!
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