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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Future Mrs. B

Thank you for sharing this poem. It hurts to read this. It hurts because it makes the life of something so innocent turn out so evil. I get the whole entire message and I love the story telling style of your poem and words. I am so glad they are going to publish this. It is a great reminder. Keep sharing your wisdom!

Write on!
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Review of The Atom's Heart  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating

Thank you for allowing me to give you a "Invalid Item" review:

I so admire poetry that can make me think and I can see something with the words, you go beyond that with this image and feeling. I am sad by this poem, but also so amazed at the power of the words and the white sand. It makes me think of what life is valued at, why do we use science to hurt? I have much to think about, thank you for sharing your wisdom.

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Review of Spamonnaise  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with Native First Peoples Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello bilwilcox

Thank you for allowing me to give you a "Invalid Item" review,

Oh I am laughing out loud! What a creative and scary image you have put into my head. I so love Thanksgiving...but I might never be able to look at spam or a turkey the same ever again! Thanks for sharing your funny bones!

Write on!
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I'm surprised this doesn't have a brown ribbon, green seems to healthy! *Laugh*
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Review of Butcher Run  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi markdaniels

I thought now would be a good time to read some of your flash-fiction. Okay...You have to at least finish your final sentance...did you pass out? Did you mean to say when they came home? So, I am not an editor and nothing stands out, but this story. OMG can you imagine the look of all that blood? Your so lucky you didn't pass out for good or that it was the middle of the night or a snow storm. Okay...so my imagination is going wild. I love a story that can keep going. You have a nice way of bringing the picture alive. Keep writing!

Write on!
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Review of I'll Take You On  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Sammie

Keep finding you sunshine! The story you have here is so familiar to me. I can understand a lot of this, personal journeys are hard to explain, but everyone has to find their own way and defend against the angry words that can haunt a life time. You can do it. I believe it and I can really see your strength in this poem. I love this kind of poetry. Thank you for sharng it.

Write on!
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Review of So Many Memories  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Christopher Conoley

What happened? How in the world can you walk away from all those memories? I am in awe of this out-pouring of your heart, your time and your love. It was really such a beautiful piece of writing. I think you are going to grow to love this more and more as the years go on. I enjoyed your walk down memory lane. The sweet innocent of the firt love. You have it in every word of this poem. Wonderful.

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Pepper

Thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item" 

I Judge on the following three items:

*Star*1. Follow the prompt. Okay, I am still laughing! I so love the twist you took with the picture and giving this a whole different feel. I admire that kind of creativity.


2. Easy to Read. I enjoyed this, although it was very sad for Marc, it can't be easy to be an ex in the first place, but under these circumstances, that makes it much harder. I liked getting the feel of the house, the bed and his feelings.


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. I didn't spot anything and I am so happy you handed this in. One day late is not going to keep this out of qualifying. I am going to be handing out the awards by the end of the week. So Thank you for posting.

Write on!
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Review of What am I doing?  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello slarg

I like the challenge you asked, but I was thinking you were outside shoveling, I so like sledding much better and smiled when I got to that fun part! It the only thing about winter that is any fun if you ask me. I'm not a skier so anything I can do while sittind down is darn good for me. Only I haven't been that lucky with much snow this year. It keeps missing me town! Oh well, have fun and keep writing and doing!

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Review of Wasted Time  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Michael Priest

Sometimes it is a waste of time to get stuck in that bad place of lost memories and unfilled dreams, but othre times being in that place is the only comfort you can find. Its a sad day when a soul feels useless and this poem really hits hard with that expression. I find it so sad to be lost in the past and for so many years this was exactly what happened to me. Life is such a funny teacher! I enjoyed reading this poem and can offer no suggestions to improve it. It wasnt a waste of time!

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Dr M C Gupta

I am not familiar with this style of poem, but I wanted to learn it before I could write something in Shelley's contest. Okay, Like I can compete with this? I don't think so! Not only do you describe the image but you manage to stay true to the form and it means something. I love that! I can see the image with your words and that is very powerful. Great job and good luck in the contest!

Write on!
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Review of Morning Ardor  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hey Ken,

Can I just lust over the list of Lexicon and forget the poem? You don't mind do you? I mean, you don't need more imput from me. I am not even sure what the heck your saying, I just want to get down to the doing. I so like your +18 side of writing! So have fun with the contest, I am sure they will adore it! You so have it going on!

Write on stud!
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Review of " I Wonder "  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello grzzdrdover

What makes a heart so fond? What makes a relationship spark and then burn out? It's always a wonder and it's always real the emotions. It hurts to read this poem, because I can still get caught up in these emotions and wonder myself into misery. It's hardly the kind of feeling that ends good for me. Just the way my heart loves. Thank you so much for sharing your moment.

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Review of Itzpapalotl  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Jeff

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review: I sure hope this is fiction! LOL...It sure proves that a woman's touch can be very addictive. I liked the way this twisted and changed directions in his dream. You ended on such a dark thought. I don't think she was a goddess of good!! I enjoyed reading this!!!

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Harry

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review:
Wow! What a great Dad!! I love this rich and interesting life and even if it has such a sad ending, you still can't miss the love that was and is your Dad! I lost my parents to poor health and in many ways it was so hard, but I didn't have to watch my parents suffer and for that I am always grateful. We sure have no control over aging, but loving and giving is something we can always find a way to accomplish. I am so glad that SP highlighted this important poem. I wish you father peace and all your family as well.


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Review of Metamorphous  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi 🌕 HuntersMoon

In poetry it is important to share an emotional connection. Or at least when I am writing and reading that is what I like to look for. So dear Ken, You have nailed a perfect union. You have given me a dream to think about and strive for. With words you burn a passions light on romance and desire. It's a great combo of all the elements that make a great romp in bed fun and enjoyable and why we want more! You know in so many ways I hate you and love you all at the same time! Great Job and I hope you do well on the contest!!

Hugs,
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Review of The Lost  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello spidey

Sounds like your muse is one hot momma! I love that ending line...deadly venom. Oh the written word can be so powerful. It is with grace that we write and express our passion. Each poet has their own way of communicating with words. I like the way you express yours! Write on and I hope you never lose your muse!!

Write on!
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Review of P.S. I LOVE YOU!  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Incurable Romantic

Okay, I have to admit. I am crying! Dang it, you did it again!! What a sweet and wonderful way to celebrate love every single day. Highschool sweethearts! I know you didn't have that many years together, but what you had was so rich and long lasting and I can't thank you enough for sharing it. Linda was a true beauty. P.S. I Love You! Did you ever see the movie? It made me cry as well! Thanks Jim and I will be back when my spirit can handle more!

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello jaya

I am so glad this has a pretty ribbon! I love this! I so agree with your feelings about love. It is so much of who I am. It is what makes me happy and keeps me sane. It is why I love writing poetry and reading it so much. I learn the value of the human heart when I can read poetry that is so honest and beautiful. May love live inside and outside of you always! I adore this poem!!!

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Review of A Little Bit More  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jennieb744

I bet he might push back! It's healthy to want more. It's refreshing to read a reality piece of poetry and still get a feeling of hope. It's true we can ask for too much, but can we really ever have it? You only over-do it, if you don't appreciate what you do have! So keep asking for more kisses!! Thanks for sharing and welcome to Writing.com!!

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Review of Clarity  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Ken,

Thank you for your entry in the Paper Doll Challenge! You got it!
Okay, here are the rules for my judgment...

1. Follow the prompt. Dang you got me! It was his heart! Oh You rock with this one!


2. Easy to Read. Oh you set me up and I love that. From the beginning I was with Audra hoping that Sam would arrive with the goods and the words. Oh you romantic fool, your making me blush!


3. Errors/grammar. I am not an editor, so for me to find mistakes, they must really stand out. Once again I can not spot nothing that stands out. Only a few minutes when the passion was a little hot, but it fit right in with my thinking so I loved it. *Wink*

You make me so proud to be your friend!





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Review of Wake Up  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Danny B

Hey your singing my song! I love Sunshine, morning and any time I can celebrate a new day and my life. This might be a simple Haiku but you have a lot of living in only a few words. You have given me a smile! Thanks I needed this today. In Michigan we don't have much sun in the winter, so I like to find it in writing!

Write on!
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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review: Okay, I think I might have a twisted and dark mind, because I absolutely laughed out loud! OH MY! This is sad and funny and I can't believe I am still laughing. Poor Jimmy is going to have to find a better friend, one that won't get him embarrassed for the rest of his life. Do you think he will grow up all twisted because of this? Should I be worried????? Splendid write! Thanks for sharing and what fun to think about!


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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Crickado

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review: Oh I hate unhappy endings! She belongs to someone else? Can you be sure? Why is fate so horrible to true love? Is it love or something else? I am such a romantic fool, thank you for touching my soul with your sweet words for Altarose. Keep sharing!

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Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Incurable Romantic

Thank you for allowing me to give you a Simply Positive review: I can not tell you the last time I have cried reading a writing.com story! However, right now I have tears in my eyes. Your ending was so intense and special. I don't know if this is a true story but it might as well be. It feels real. It was touching, romantic and honest. I have only good feelings and I'm so happy that Simply Positive highlighted this story! Respect and love! What a gift!



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Review of Strain  
Review by ShellySunshine
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear 🌕 HuntersMoon

Okay, are you sure this is not for the sci-fy comic channel? Porkalypse? OMG you have me in stiches... I hate to inflate your ego but damn it. You can write just about anything insane you want. I sure hope you don't have pigs on your farm. You better be careful! Thanks for askig me but I am going with YES! Now would you get serious about having a writing career!

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