Thanks for sharing your love of Fall and all the good things you believe that come with it.You can tell that you fully enjoy the season and all it has to offer.Your story is very detailed and filled with the love for the season.
Interesting short and sweet hummm very interesting can send the mind pondering,imagining,wondering.I think I like it very different.The mind could go so many places with this writing.Thanks for sharing your thoughts and work.
Well this is gloomy for sure not sure that I agree because I believe we all matter to this world you see in some small way you and I matter and we are loved and needed.Not by everyone true however by some we matter an awful lot and those are the ones that matter.We live ,we love we hurt and are hurt true however that all apart of going around this earth or sun.It will be worth it for most I think or at least in the end for those that truly choose to live and give life their all.Thanks for your share because how you feel matters.
This was a very interesting read I not sure how I feel about it really can’t say for sure I have to think on it a little bit more. I not sure of the ending and where the man being put to death thought he was ending up where there was going to be a better breakfast home,Heaven ,Hell?Although I guess it depends on if he made his peace with the Lord and was ready to meet him would determine he’s final location where he would be spending his thereafter . I not sure any of the locations would have a good breakfast really home,Heaven or Hell hummmm not sure never been don’t know?I would say his home maybe there’s a chance if the folks are still there and able to cook ,in Heaven there maybe a chance if they have breakfasts there and in Hell there is no chance of a good breakfast ever.Oh well maybe I am letting my imagination get away from me.Thanks for your share.
Okay nice try it’s something different for sure and over-all it’s pretty good.It seems to be missing something it’s not all that exciting really it kind of heads in the right direction and then however it kind of lets you down a little as it builds toward the end.Maybe because we can clearly see what’s coming and there’s no real build up or surprise,she just tells him not to cross the line and why and he does it anyway and turns into a chair.Keep working on this it could be really good if you can include a good element of surprise .
Not bad a pretty good read it has a few mistakes here and there very few however it has a good flow and it’s an understandable read for many.Thanks for your share keep writing many teens and young women need to know that it’s okay to be a little larger.Although it’s not okay to seek out revenge at least the young lady knows how it feels to walk in someone else’s shoes.
Thanks for this share I like how even though this is short and sweet it explains how a writer was born.I also like how the child was encouraged to use their imagination and also to learn to wait and why both are important .
Thanks for your share living in reality is very important for sure.Facing life on life’s terms can be hard however it is need in today sometimes I feel like the younger generation try and make their own reality.It important to face the truth and live in the true reality you are faced with no matter how hard.
This was a very interesting story.Not everyone of Santa’s helpers has to like him I guess.Being so kind and giving has to piss off someone just because I guess.No one is liked by everyone so why couldn’t Santa have helpers who have beef with him as well.
Thanks for your share and sharing with us what your God means to you.You can hear the respect and admiration in this writing that you have for him.This kind of love needs to be known by the world and his children always need a reminder of this love,his love.
This was a cute story the romantic in me says right on the realist says nope that story is not possible no matter how much I might want it to be.I do like that the writer seems to believe in love and happily ever after though.Thanks for your share.
Thanks for your share this is a pretty good poem it does have some soothing qualities as you read it. These days we need all the soothing things to read and to think on. Keep writing and sharing soothing thoughts with the world.
Short and sweet thoughts about what Thanksgiving is to you.Thanks for your share a lot of people see it just like that so your poem is very relatable for sure. I hope your Thanksgiving is a good one filled with good things to eat for your and yours because in the days and times we live in that is truly a blessing.
Short, sweet, interest, not a kind of happily ever after thanksgiving that some may want to think about, however that is not the reality of many. Things happen many times in life to interfere with our best-made plans. Thanks for your share keep writing.
This poem seems to be about seeing a person for who they really are. Sometimes we see but we don't see sometimes we see what we want to see. Seeing can be hard depending on what you see, however, once we truly see then we have some decisions to make. To love or not to love, once we truly see a person, we will choose to stand by their side, will we or won't we, it's for us to decide. Seeing sometimes we don't want to see because seeing is knowing and that can hurt real bad sometimes you see.
Interesting story I guess we all wonder what will truly usher in the end of times and how far or close we are to it all being a wrap. Not that it will truly matter I guess how the end comes and what time frame but because we are human it kind of matters you know. We want to know who, what how, when we just do.Thanks for your share.
Thanks for your share this was a great reminder that God can do anything but fail.Seems like the babe also had a will to live and fight which is important too. My son had a few close calls as a small babe as well anyway thanks for sharing about the walking, talking, blessing.
Not bad this is pretty good short sweet and to the point. Yes, sometimes reality can kind of be a little cruel, to say the least. Thanks for your share young love can be hard too. There most likely will come another and it will be right in due time.
Wow, this was different thanks for your share God was sure on your side or the young woman's side that night if you aren't her. That had to be a little frightening, to say the least, but with a small child in the house, I think I would have had to grab a frying pan and try to talk to his head if need be.
Short, sweet sounds like a cool fall day to me good description very vivid. Thanks for your share fall can be nice it has its good points like all the other seasons I prefer spring myself. Fall does have beautiful changing leaves, the start of hot cocoa drinking, fewer bugs and it leads into Holiday season.
This is a cute sorry and it's a good reminder of what our service men and women go through when they have to be away from their families and what the families have to endure as well. Thankfully this one has a happy ending many however do not but it's nice this onee does.Thanks for your share.
Interesting thanks for the share the sea it can almost put you under a spell sometimes. It is it's on serin sometimes because it most assuredly will kill you pulling you into its depths. Then again it can give and hold so much life on the flips side of the death thing, therefore, it needs to be respected at all times.
Love it and I feel you and have been there many, many times this is so relatable. I feel like sometimes or much of the time writing should be relatable because that's when it's good. Thank you for your honesty and your share, hope you have or will learn to fly.
Interesting, short and sweet a little cold but honest. Wonder was this someone you use to date or was thinking about dating or worse still chose to marry? Thanks for the share not everything shared has to be a happily ever after kind of thing maybe this is because you did realize you were not in love with this person really so maybe therein lies the happily ever after.
Well okay long as nobody gets hurt that is cool I GUESS. Some people can do so much with lego's and even as a child I never really could build too much of anything really, legos were the toy back in like the '80s.Thanks for your share.
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