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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Samantha feeling jealous. The narrative moves the story and its message forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about.

What I liked: My favorite part of the story is the lesson Samantha learned. I like the the lesson because it gives the reader something to think about.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the lesson Samantha learned.

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Review of The Warrior  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Elby Wordsmith .

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, mood, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like that stanza because it repeated the warning.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the smooth flow of the rhythm.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, Mastiff .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the idea of repairing an old washing machine. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while describing the difficulties the washing machine caused.

What I liked: My favorite part of this story is the way the washing machine was destroyed.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the subject.

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Review of Flip It  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, Daedalus Chaos .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the question. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: My favorite part of the story is the hour glass. I like this part because it suggested a mystery.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Genipher , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "It's the End of the World as We Know It " , because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with nothing outside the darkness. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it was a happy ending.

Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story, because they revealed the speaker's personality.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Happy Anniversary, RatDog .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the death of the author's dad. The author suggested good reasons why he began to question the religion he was born into.

What I liked: The logical way the author stated why he left his birth religion.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this because of the subject.

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Review of The Bike  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, essjk001 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Bike" , because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (January 31, 2024)" .

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the bike being a birthday present. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: Even though the descriptions are part of the action, the speaker proves the unreliability of memory through the narrative.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the subject.

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Review of Poetic Canvas  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Dan Sturn , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Poetic Canvas" , because I discovered it in "Romance/Love Newsletter (January 31, 2024)" .

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it closes the poem with tranquil and serene emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it left a peaceful feeling in my mind.

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Review of June 11--Sew  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Happy Anniversary, Nikola~Loving Her Gracie Girl! .

First Thoughts: The conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I liked: The climax was my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story of friendship.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, bn skinner , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Genocide Misunderstood" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The second paragraph of the introduction hooked me with the way educated people misuse words. This thought-provoking editorial is a warning to everyone not to misuse worlds.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The conclusion is my favorite part of this editorial. I like this part because it states the theme of this editorial, which is to use words properly according to their meaning.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written editorial a 5.0 because of its thought-provoking content

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Ritzy Vampi , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Dragon Slayer Saga" , because I discovered it under read a newbie. The title aroused my curiosity.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the scent of sulfur in the mouth of the cave. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to make this story the beginning of a longer short story or novel.

I like: My favorite part of the story is the description of the dragon slayer's fear. I like this part because it gave me insight into the man's experience.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the dragon and the slayer's dilemma.

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Review of Lovely Dementia  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Happy Anniversary, MD Maurice .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Claudette's mental condition. The descriptions of Claudette's life reveal a strong woman who cared for her family and make the sacrifices necessary for her family.

What I liked: My favorite part was about baking brownies for the Pope. I like this part because it revealed her strong faith.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this tribute to Claudette.

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Review of The Devil  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, J.R. PETE , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Devil" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Mary's question. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the story is when Michael talks to Mary. I like this part because of the way it inspired Mary.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Too Much To Ask  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, AmyJo- only 2 steps behind - , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Too Much To Ask" , because I discovered it under online authors.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it hooked me and drew me into the poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem because of the subject.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Winchester Jones , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Long Journey Home" , because I discovered it under online authors .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the difficulty the speaker has walking. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while describing his difficulties and the assistance he gets from acquaintances and strangers.

Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.

I like: This is a sad story, which causes the reader to sympathize with the speaker.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it does an excellent job of show the difficulty people with blood-circulation problems have walking.

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Review of Speak in Love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, wb , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Speak in Love"  because I discovered it on the religious genre page and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the scripture verses. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while emphasizing the point about speaking with love and researching what you hear.

What I Like: The appropriate use of scriptures to make the author's point.

Suggestions: My only suggestion is to give the translation of the Holy Bible that the scriptures are taken from.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this thought-provoking item because of the scriptures used.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, lbidler , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I discovered it on the inspiration genre and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The first paragraph establishes the location of the guided meditation and draws the reader into the item. The narrative moves the meditation forward at a good pace, while letting the reader visualize the situation in their mind.

What I Like: The fourth paragraph is my favorite. I like this paragraph because it suggest that we worship in more places than just churches.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this piece because of its subject .

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Review of We Are Loved  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, lbidler , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "We Are Loved"  because I discovered it on the inspiration genre and the title aroused my curiosity.

First Thoughts: The division of this prose piece into section with the appropriate scripture verse gives the reader something to meditate on.

What I Like: Placing the translation after each scripture verse was a good idea. I like this because it lets the reader consult the Holy Bible to read the rest of the chapter.

Suggestions: My only suggestion would be to consider adding a paragraph under each heading with examples from life.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspiration piece because it encourages meditation.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, lbidler , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Our Little Corner of God's World" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (January 24, 2024)" .

First Impression: The questions in the first paragraph hooked me and drew me into the essay. The author moves the narrative forward while giving some answers to the questions ask in the first paragraph.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of this essay is the questions. I like these because they give the reader something to think about.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this essay because of the thought provoking questions.

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Review of The Secret Book  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, brom21 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Secret Book" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (January 24, 2024)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Galus feeling a presence behind him. The descriptions are part of the action the move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I suggest checking this phrase and serene[/b}.

I like: Galus is my favorite character. I like him because of his determination and faith.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Galus.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Writer's Haunting Quest" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of Dreamwood Manor. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The metaphors and similes used in this story are fresh and descriptive. This is my favorite metaphor a skeletal silhouette gnawing on the fading light.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the descriptions.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, BeeSmith , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Man from the Blue Glow" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Matt's attention wandering. The conversation between Matt and the man from the TV moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the characters.

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Review of The first battle  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Beck Firing back up! , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The first battle" , because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Artemis standing atop the knoll. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I suggest placing a blank line between the paragraphs so that the story is easier to read.

I like: My favorite part is the climax. I like this part because it showed Artemis at his best.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the action.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Rekindled Friendship" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Sophy's statement. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it was a happy ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Teeth of a dog  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Kåre Enga in Montana , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Teeth of a dog" , because I discovered it on The Hub under Recently Awarded Items.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and hopeful emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it expressed both hope and faith.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the message.

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