First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Sammy Masters being dead. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters builds the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problem.
I like: I climax was a surprise, without being a disappointment. The climax fitted the story.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other while rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxes the poem's plot with a happy ending.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and inspiring poem a 5.0 because of the way it showed love can come to a person again.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Katydid's gift for music. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
What I liked: My favorite part of the story was the climax. I like this part because it showed the friendship between Gracious Lady and Katy.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with dinner date. The conversation moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: My favorite part of the story was the mother's change in attitude at the climax. I like this part because it showed that seeing an old friend can help a person.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the concealed class. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
What I liked: My favorite part of this story is Tobias' transformation into dragon form. I like this part because it made Tobias' transformation natural.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Tobias.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Xristan Elmun waking up before dawn. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
What I liked: Xristan Elmun is an intriguing and sympathetic character as shown by his treatment of his daughter.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Xristan Elmun.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The descriptions are part of the action and move the theme forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is a thought-provoking metaphor about life. I like it because it give details on each game piece.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with flashes of events filling the speaker's mind. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, without revealing anything specific.
What I liked: The last sentence is my favorite. I like this sentence because it climaxes the plot, while revealing why the speaker is haunted.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the questions the speaker asked.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the changes the Crab Racing Circuit had undergone. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: My favorite character is Hercule Crabrot. I like him because he reminds me of one of my favorite movie detectives.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.
First Thoughts: The poems follow the forms and looks good on the page. Each of the poems in this group give the reader something to research and to meditate on.
What I liked: The shaped poem is my favorite. I like this poem because of the way its shape helps the reader focus on both the words and the concept.
Final Thoughts: I am giving these beautiful and well-written poems a 5.0 because of their thought-provoking subjects.
First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, plot, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.
What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it states the frustration of every poet. I also like the way the rhythm encourages this poem to be read aloud.
Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expresses a poet's frustration.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Ms. Sandoval adjusting her glasses. The class room conversation move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: My favorite part of this story was the class discussion. I like that part because it revealed how well Ms. Sandoval taught a class.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the class discussion.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite line, When all love stories hold their quiet solitude? I like this line because it closes the poem with a mystery.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the arranged marriage. The narrative moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to consider adding a description of Princess Lovely.
I like: My favorite part is the description of the dragon. I like this part because the dragon is not the type I would expect.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story and am looking forward to reading more about this dragon.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Albert feeling the bump on the back of his head. The speaker move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
What I liked: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it made me smile.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of Albert.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxes the poem's plot and gives the reader something to think about.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Sydney forcing one eye open. The conversation and interaction between Sydney and the child move the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it made me laugh.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny story because of the characters.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the plot, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxed the poem's plot with good advice.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it reminded me of the song.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Sherry hoping she did not snore or drool. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last paragraph is my favorite. I like this paragraph because it made me laugh.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny story.
First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of faith forward at a good pace.
What I liked: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it closes the poem with a statement of the speaker's faith.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the theme.
First Thoughts: The title of this poem aroused my curiosity. The speaker moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotion of this poem is depression and sorrow.
What I liked: The main emotions are express through the person's shrinking. This is a good way to express these two emotions because it shows the emotions.
Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it shows its' emotions.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, speaker, theme, and plot of the poem. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxes the poem plot.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the fish.
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