Wow! This is really, really great! It's so much more in depth than the first part. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and hope there is more in the works (?). I did find a few typos, or misspellings, and also a few misplaced quotations, as well as a few missing quotations. I do have a list of all that I caught, if you'd like that let me know. But all in all, a very readable story. Write on!!
Ha ha! Really good! Love the whole thing. Well written, very readable, and very funny! I've had a few interviews that were just about like that, believe it or not. Ok, so maybe my thoughts never actually turned to murder, and I never actually saw moles growing eyes, but some were very very boring, and I did wonder if......ah well. So sorry for my ramblings! Hope to read more of your excellent works!
Nice story, but I think it needs some work. Found several spots where words seem to be missing, and some words that could be type-os. Good idea though, with a little work, this could be really great!
Loved it!! I know, another snappy review, but unless I find something WRONG with something of yours, and I do like them, that's prolly all you'll get.....lol
If that bothers you, please notify me, and I'll just rate ya.....
I guess I should count myself lucky, because for one, I got to read it and help you edit it, but also because I also got to hear you read it yourself. Your oral presentation of your works always leaves more of an impression on me than even your well written works themselves.
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