Beautifully written. I too wish that the world was peaceful. Although I can't change the whole world, I can at least add to someone's life by being kind.
This is beautiful!!! So descriptive and flowing. I'm too Claustrophobic to go deep sea diving or anything similar to it. But through your words, I was able to feel like I was there with you. I hope you've been able to publish this. It's that good. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Where can I find series 1? I read a little of the final chapter and was intrigued. I didn't finish reading it because I didn't want to know the end before I knew the beginning.
Finally! Someone has put into words what I've been going through all of my life!!! I never really knew how to describe it, but you did it perfectly. Bipolar disorder almost killed me twice. Fortunately, I failed both times. Plus I have a few amazing friends and a great therapist that helped me get through those dark times. It took over ten years for doctors to finally find the write medication. It's a win lose combination. Because the medication works so well, most people don't know or forget that I have this disorder. It can be really frustrating at times. Thankfully, most of the time I'm happy and content with my life. I still have bad days but they are much fewer and not as severe. Thank you so much for sharing your writing this. It just made my day even better!
Jon...this was fantastic!!!! I felt like I was watching it on tv. The way you described everything made it easy to picture it in my mind. I've been a Star Trek fan for most of my life. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to enjoy it once again. This should be a pilot for a new series. As long as you're the writer, each episode would be amazing!!!
I totally understand the wanting to break the cycle of abuse. I also understand self loathing.
I struggled a lot with that when I was younger. I'm a service connected disabled vet, so fortunately I was able to get help from a wonderful therapist that I didn't have to pay for.
My heart broke for Soph and I came close to crying. If this story is about you or someone you know, I pray that you or the person you know seeks help. There is no shame in it.
I hope that you will continue this story. I'd love to see what happens next.
Sincerely.
Sandy Williams
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