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Review of Diversion  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The poem is mysterious. The description gives as romantic and relationship. it helps to understand the poem , still the theme is very different as its expression. ITs very short but he message is not obvious. I had to read it three times, still not convinced about really understood.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Ten Loves to One  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The poem speaks for a miles of life events. In the name of love, all activities are documented and the flow is well achieved. Still the first love beats them all. it's a tribute to writing.com-the website. I liked idea of writing this poem, as a theme is well expressed with rhythm and rhyme.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Lost with thought  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The confused mind can see anything at a spur of a moment. There is a saying "idled mind, devil's home' the process describe in this piece, reminds me of that saying. the analysis of this situation is not possible for a confused mind, where thoughts scatterd in no direction.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Seasons  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Of course the Nature teaches us a lot! Not only to survive in adverse conditions but to be brave and to face the changes in life. it teaches us discipline, to be on time and plan ahead . The topic of the poem is multi-faced and covering an aspect of it well.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The universal truth is 'whoever is born, going to die.'
We are given the human life as a gift and how we use it is our choice. Any death is a loss for somebody but there is no point in dwelling on the pain, we have to look forward . The poem is written well, expressing pain due to the death which unbearale but unavoidable also.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Presence  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A weird story of the ghost. It wants to be friendly, wanted to finish its loneliness but nobody seems to stay there with the presence of the ghost. a ghost story is written from the ghost-point -of- view. it's clever idea but hard to write it in 100 words. still it's done well,
Jaya h.


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Review of NIght Walk  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A poem which runs like prose. It's a fantasy experienced in night walk. all events are unexpected as well as unbelievable. it seems like mind -play. and it even suggesting that mind has been wandered and imagined all the places and characters.
It's like reading a fantasy.
an interesting story,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The definition of a love is only one sided here in this poem . Love has many kinds and expressions. The love depicted here is only between a man and woman, like lovebirds. there are many aspects of love is ignored in this free verse. The definition is limited here but done well.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Runner  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's an interesting work of fiction. the surprise well-kept. what kind of fear the hamster had which made him run to his death is not clear. But a message is that this could be happening to any human too. If the hamster was a pet why wasn't it clear to the owner? or the writer didn't want to clarify to make it surprising?
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of contradiction  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's the contradiction of our own to live by. These are depicted well in the poem, The theme is good but interpretation of it incomplete. there is an age-old question of who am I? What's the purpose of my life? these questions are insolvable even if everybody settles in life with their own version of answers.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It's a story of obsession. until the love fulfills, it never ends, the story never changes. It looks like a mother-goose chase and it could be mad behavior but it 's a hopeless act and no magical rescue from it. The feelings caught thoroughly in this prose -like poem.
A good read,
Jaya h.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The desperate feelings expressed well. The memories which wanted to be forgotten could not. and tearing the soul unnoticed. I think the poem could be shorten into 3 stanza. a reader can grasp the feelings in few words. The appropriate title I think is ' the revolving door'
Thanks for sharing the burden,
Jaya h.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
The Acrostic based on some picture is hard to judge without seeing the picture. It's composed as well as it can be with limitations involved. The subject is odd, and there is not much to be said about it . But the poem tried to catch the feelings behind and left the subject enlightened, as possible.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A story is told in this poem. if the footnote was not there, it's hard to pickup the disaster from the poem. The poem is flowing well. it reads as if the dam is being built but the footnote explains the real story then the whole view changes, until the last stanza. that explains the whole drama.
A good read,
Jaya h.
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Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A bad experience is described in very well versed poem.
It reads well without any rhyme or rhythm. The love story flows well with realistic situations .
the terms like 'flowered basket' , 'a yarn of tangleed yarn' are very appropriately used with a lot of meanings behind them.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of LightWorker  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Unratable.)
Honoring angels in simple words here. Ther is an error of using thw word 'your' instead of 'you are/were' (second stanza -first line) which is very disruptive. The sporadic rhyming seems elaborated. The flow is little patchy, but thought process is clear here.
A good read,

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A poem of reality in life. The flow is good with a rhyming scheme. Is it a pet talking about the master? it sounds like that, but it could be a metaphor too. whatever it is, it reads well.
A play and obey is what is followed here. The style and language used here is simple and flowing.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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Review of White Balloons  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A touching story at the cemetery. Such an unusual theme for writing, is done well. The piece expresses the very emotions through white balloons, umbrellas or not, grey skies with drizzle and the people trying to cope with a loss, a child who lost his fight and had to depart.
A good read,
Jaya H.



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Review of SUBTLE ACHE  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The emotions displayed by a pillow could be a metamorphosis form. To feel for someone is a normal thing for humanbeing. The poem flows well and full of surprises at the end. Some people can't express the real emotions to anybody else but mourn in private, that is the scenario is portrayed at the beginning of the poem, but it turns....
A clever writing,
Jaya H.
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Review of Once in Silence  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
The fiction is written with a plot which is not suspenseful at all. It could have been more like a mystery with a different flow, where all the things were not spelled out but in like a dream-like sequences. With little bit of editing the story could improvrd a bit.
A good job,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A delightful poem. Guardian angel could be baby's mother too. to watch the baby grow is always mystical and brings joy to all. The baby boy described in the poem, is not any different too. The poem written with feelings of love and pride.
A flow is little patchy with no rhyme or rhythn, sometimes reads like a prose.
An interesting poem,
Jaya H.

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Review of Crimson Vengeance  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A mysterious fiction keeps a reader in dark even after the end. It suggests some necklace issue but then talks about a thosand souls, may be dead ? May be the fiction had some limitation on word count and can't be simplified for reader within the limit?
A plot is well developed and suspense is kept very well.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A free verse about hope. Wants to be recgnized for what its worth and follow the simple act of living. The poem speaks about the agony of a lifestyle and war of thoughts regarding morality and values in life. The message is not clear but situation has beed posed and confusion in thinking is documented with a need of angels's help.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of Dear Me  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A new year's resolution well documented. The portfolio doesn't have that many entries so writing must be done elsewhere. It's also hard to keep the resolutions true to the word. The suggestions made here are very good and worth following. But the muse has o respond that well.
A good read,
Jaya H.

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Review of A Translation  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's difficult to follow the poem,may be the gist of it's original poem can't be transferred. One can understand if they know Bengali poem beforehand. It reads like a prose but the flow is lacking. To me, I didn't get the concept of the poem at all. The thinking in here is not clear. I thought Tagore used to write in simple words, I have read many of his translated poems.
Jaya H.

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