Random Review time and oh! I found a song! Delightful!
A hard feeling love song I think, why we listen to inner voice? Why we make the same mistakes? Why so much time has to pass, so much hurt and distrust before we truly let go, before we see what they both are, for I feel it takes two.
Sad and true indeed, Great!
Thank you for sharing and enjoy your day wherever and whatever you may be doing.
Random Review link took me of my comfort zone. When we share, everyone cares. Such a bond is great, and I respect everyone right to believe in whatever they may. I see no errors, and it kindhearted almost tearfully happy thought. All the best, and thanks!
Random review link brought me her and pleasantly surprised,That would be scary to have [ return. No spirits memories, Thank for sharing.
This cab be very hurt and not for everyone,
Good afternoon, Emiline Random Review link must be feeling romantic today, you the second poem I read of this type today.
I think love is pretty special, but my own experiences are only love for my children. To be in that haze of feeling silly, special, and fuzzy all in one all at once is magical and you portrayed that in a simple thought your last breathe. Creative. I read once that our souls are starlight, not true but a sweet thought.
Thank you for giving me and others a glimpse of your feelings for wife. Kind and well written.
Good Day Tommy Gunns Random review Link review and you it!
The wonders of love and relationships that are fluffy and full of romance. It has the flow of lyrics, and was enjoyable to read. This reminded of me a song I enjoy with the opening you wrote, though no romantic in any way. Thank you for sharing and enjoy your day.
Hello, Ken, Random Review link brought me and I can't but share my thoughts on this creative poem. I found this neat on you describe Penny as money then got to a person that gets on your nerves and ends up dying anyways, all in some great flow with not over exhorted words that I would have to look up. Sometimes being easy is great!
I enjoyed this and all in all don't have any suggestions to improve it, but I like the twist and honestly I don't think its easy to to do. Thank you for sharing and providing some detail on how such thought came to light. Have a good one!
Not sure why Random Review took Little me here but Ok, A review.
Raffles are fun, and a great way to let your friends know your thinking of them when you gift tickets. Very long list, in writing/ml user links, divided into rounds. I don't know a lot of the list but did a few.
I don't see any errors, though some accounts are no longer active. Thank you for doing a raffle in the past it takes time, and not everyone has lots of time. Thanks and have a good one.
This is small but very deep. Almost monk like, to look into the night sky and wonder. I can't say I've veer wondered myself about animals, we have birds, and some small wildlife, foxes, pheasants, raccoon, skunks etc. nothing else. Early settlers killed all large game off the island. I have wondered about the night sky though, why the stars shine, why some planets rotate one way and their moon the opposite, things like that, I enjoy learning about stars.
Is having a soul a human word or all living things have such? Very thoughtful poem that could lead the wondering mind down some interesting paths. Thanks for sharing, simple well to the point. Have a good one. Kudos!
This might not be the best but its a sad and happy day for me.
I always enjoy well written poetry forms and this is no exception. I not well versed in form but like how some really shine when committing to a certain poetry from.
Very creative look at death I think, and honestly some words I don't know, so I appreciate you sharing their meaning at the end. Starts off kind of careful and somewhat musical then gets dark. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing and the superb editing.
Oh My! What a twist! This review Prosperous Snow celebrating is for "I Write in 2024" [13+]
Good luck! I was super surprised with the ending, and found it interesting enough to get me there. This could continue and I can some serial killer imagery happening. I'm always amazed with your creativity.
Very well written and edited, Thanks! And good luck!
There is some simple punctuation errors, that's all I see.
Depression is a serious thing, and I don't think understand till it's something they experience. I have never had any anxiety of any kind till my son died, and when I've drive I'll would fall apart, cause the whole time I had him, he came everywhere and I could see him sitting in the front seat with me. It is very much both a mental problem and emotional. Some people are medically depressed, others are emotionally depressed, sharing helps so much, and sometimes you realized others struggle just as much.
To not want to get up. or do anything because of that voice in your head that is not your friend, it's sad we react in such ways. Truly human I guess.
Fight every day, I do, and so many others, we all got one hand deal to us, and we might not decide the deal we can decide the hand.
Thank you for sharing and the wee warning at the first.
Kudos! StaiNed-House Targaryen
Random Review Double Down! Beholden I am back again. Reading your neat poem, not something a would normally read. Sounds like a old mysterious place, a lot of imagery, and I saw some things from "The Nun" movies which I'm sure wasn't your intent, but you wrote:
to understand your beauty
beyond the stained glass warehouse
raised in place of the burnt out shell
of the cathedral alongside,
This is crazy! It like seeing the beauty of old broken down things, abandoned properties, forgotten places. So much horror is placed in old churches and Cathedrals now. I enjoyed this very much, see no errors and have no suggestions.
Creative! thank you so much for sharing with Little me.
First let me wish you good luck in the contest if that's why you choose to prompt yourself.
Neat creative, a clown fish like those in Finding Nemo. Perhaps some coral since your were the sun rays shine, and the open ocean it would be the waves. I see no errors but feel it could go on, and that you stopped in mid sentence but that's my opinion.
Thank you for giving me the chance to share my thoughts. Neat poem from an unusual prompt, Kudos!
Beautiful! I normally don't get much from small poetry but this is so sweet. Just warms the heart. I enjoy a gentle morning and get myself flowers often only my cat will eat them and then I'm cleaning. Thanks for sharing and making me smile.
Random Review link brought me here, and it's always great to find something I would never find on my own. Thanks for sharing and I'm glad you found something that works for you and you kindness to want to share that with other people shows. We are in the moment and in that moment responsible for the choices we make, we don't just react we have presence, and interact only in our choices. There's a lot of this stuff around. My job shows me the worst of people, so this is a nice change from that. Thank you again and write on.
Good day Happy to write Random Review Time and little me found this.
Growing up is hard, I agree, though more for seeing the expectations for my young men as they grew, where sometimes unfair, and when based on the fact they were becoming adults. The pandemic did change things, and being in a mask all at day at work wasn't fun.
Its was a fun read, fast paced and enjoyable. A some what positive note. Thanks for sharing and enjoy your day. /font}
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Oh, I envy people like yourself that can write about the book, and not come across as all knowing, and this is something I don't believe in but can respect the feelings and imagery put into this lengthy poem, It's like a story so profound the feeing are in this, no errors that little me sees, even though you can't have heaven without hell, just my opinion nothing more.
Thank you for sharing. StaiNed-House Targaryen
Well said and I think I write for similar reasons, to make some sense of the feelings I have. Fancy word usage, I had to look one up. Writing for whatever reasons is always good, you share and in that sharing give to others. I don't have any suggestions and appreciate you taking time to write this. Thanks! and enjoy whatever is left in your day.
Good day💙 Carly. Little me is here with the help of Random Review Link, and hope my review is helpful. A relationship ending by such a way it truly changing, and as we become that living dead, we see others in a more new negative light. Thank you for sharing how you view heartbreak.
This is well written, and bring a lot of self reflection to my own experiences. It is good to always have a little hope.
"Be with the one who won't leave you and stay until the very end.
Sing and dance under the hot summer sun, or pass a drink around the fire
with friends and loved ones."
I couldn't of said it better myself. Thank you for sharing and enjoy your day.
random Review link brought me to this flash fiction and I want to say I enjoyed it. Very easy to read, and not too made me interested enough to want to see where the Duo goes. I suggest maybe a more imagining description, as the current may make pass by this neat read, and is just another flash fiction. Thank you for sharing and write on!
I enjoyed your poll, and I'm sure many more will. I choose other as I use my air fryer more than anything else, crock pot would be a close second. I'm also going share a recipe I do very often to help with my poor eating habits. Thanks for sharing this, and for all you and your bees do for all us.
Random Review Link brought me here, and I wanted to share my thoughts.
I always find mermaids stories interesting, and have even happened on some horror with the pretty singers of the sea. I see no errors, and appreciate the footnote explaining further, Thank you for sharing.
Very well written, opinion. There is so much to think about now, so much that's happening to nature and the weather and the planet, it can be overwhelming. I agree with what you wrote, and am not not sure I could could express my thoughts as kind as you did.
I see no errors, enjoyed the good natured tone you vented so so speak. We need to talk about what were doing not fight, thanks for sharing and caring.
Random Review link has brought me here to your heartfelt poem, trying to come to a new normal, as you called it for your mom. The simple expressing of seasons to rerate mood is nice. I'm glad you find peace, and wish you the best.
No errors and sharing does feel like caring and sometimes is so needed. Thanks!
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