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Review of Rose  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Amazing poem!
I loved the way you used the bee and the rose in your poem.
I thought it was different how to said the bee (everyone hates) wasn't as scary
as the rose that everyone likes.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the excellent work! :D

I would ask you to review my work but sadly I've lost my ungraded membership because I couldn't make enough reviews in time so have a wonderful day! :D
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Review of Doctor's Orders  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hahaha!
This story was extremely funny I loved the whole thing.
I especially liked the part about going to see the eye doctor, I laughed out loud when I read maybe he can see the problem...
This story was very entertaining to read, it kept my attention the whole time.
Well Done!
Good Job!
Keep up the amazing work.

I would ask you to review some of my work but sadly I've lost my upgraded membership because I couldn't do enough reviews in time to save it :( So have a wonderful day! :D
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Review of Little Johnny  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Awe this is very sad poem.
You captured the emotion of this piece very well.
For some reason I imagined an old western movie
while I was reading this I'm not sure why though.
I also love how your rhyming was really on point.
My favorite part was
"Johnny don't worry. Come home to us now

Your dreams will come true, 'though your father is dead

Johnny move the cows out of here

We'll bury him in the shed."

I love how Johnny is encouraged to move on in his life even though his father died.
But I think the bury him in the shed part was a little disturbing to me.

I would ask you to review some of my work but sadly its invalid right now. You see I lost my upgraded membership because I couldn't do enough reviews in time to save it. So have a wonderful day and keep up the good work! :D
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Review of Love is selfish  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Fantastic Poem!
Excellent word choice.
I loved how to poem didn't rhyme.
This poem was very interesting to read.
I could feel the seriousness of the poem.
I really enjoyed reviewing your work I hope you would take the time to do the same to me. I have recently revised my book called "My Best Friends Brother." I would like to know what you think about it. I would really appreciate it if you read it.
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Review of What if?  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome Poem!
It was very catchy and interesting to read.
I loved how every line had a question.
I also loved how the poem told a story.
I thought his poem was very romantic.
Amazing Job!
Keep up the good job! :D
I really enjoyed reviewing your work I hope you would take the time to do the same to me. I have recently revised my book called "My Best Friends Brother." I would like to know what you think about it. I would really appreciate it if you read it.
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Review of My little heart  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Wonderful Poem!
It was very rhymey and catchy.
I loved your word choice as well.
The words flowed together perfectly.
I could feel the emotion in this poem as well.
Amazing Job!
Keep up the good work!:D
I've really enjoyed reviewing your work I hope you would take the time to do the same to me. I have recently revised my book called "My Best Friends Brother." I would like to know what you think about it. I would really appreciate it if you read it.
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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Nice poem!
I loved how you wrote it in a dialogue format.
But i think maybe you could have explained the poem a little more.
Maybe you could describe the beautiful stranger.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the wonderful work! :D
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Review of I AM  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome poem!
I thought it was very funny and interesting to read.
This poem kind of reminds me of myself.
Amazing Job!
Keep up the fantastic work! :D
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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Excellent poem!
I loved every minute of it.
Everything you said was true.
This poem was the most interesting one I've read all day.
Good Job!
Keep up the amazing work!
5 STARS FOR BEING AWESOME! :D


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Review of A Strong Word  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Fantastic poem!
I could feel the emotion in this poem.
I can also really relate to it.
My mother used to tell me the same thing.
But sometimes you do HATE people..lol
Awesome Job at expressing your feelings.
Keep up the amazing work! :D

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Review of The Rose  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Fantastic poem!
I loved every minute of it.
It was very catchy and true.
Your word choice was awesome as well.
All the words flowed together perfectly.
My favorite part was: "But may our friendship,
like the grass be seen,
To be ever there,
And ever green."
I thought this part was very sweet.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!
5 STARS FOR BEING AWESOME! :D

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Review of Key  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Amazing Poem!
This is a really cute poem!
I loved your use of imagery.
I could picture in my mind everything you wrote.
I also feel like this poem has a deeper meaning as well.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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You have an excellent start here.
But maybe you should add more to it.
Like a little bit more description or add some feelings to it.
The way it is now I don't even think its a complete thought yet.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!
If you do decide to edit it I would love to read when your done.

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Review of Full Moon  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Fantastic Poem!
Your word choice and use of imagery was excellent.
I could picture a Full moon as I was reading.
Even though you didn't use alot of detail you had enough.
I loved the words you used as well some i have never heard of before.
It gives the poem lots of character and creativity.
I can tell you put alot of thought into this haiku,
Amazing Job!
Keep up the wonderful work! :D

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Review of Waltz  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Awesome Poem!
I think you have a wonderful start to a fantastic poem.
But I think you should elaborate on your idea a little bit more.
You should keep the first 2 lines there really good, I'm just asking if you could add on it.
Maybe tell us your feelings about the waltz or gives us some more description.
Good Job!
Keep up the excellent work! :D

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Review of A beat of blood  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome poem!
Even though it was short you did a wonderful
job with your use of imagery.
As I was reading I could picture a person waking up to the
beat of a drum in the middle of the night.
Good Job with your word choices as well. They gave just enough
detail, not too little not too much.
Fantastic Job!
Keep Up The Good Work! :D

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome poem!
I thought it was cute and interesting to read.
I love little poems like this that talk about simple random issues.
My favorite part was "And the best of them, I have not tasted
Yet, but they are hidden somewhere
In a woman’s spice cabinet, I think.
I can smell them when it’s windy."
I loved the part about the lady's spice cabinet.
I thought was very creative.
Wonderful Job!
Keep up the amazing work!

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Review of Imagination  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)

AMAZING POEM!
I really enjoyed this one.
It was very catchy, and I could feel the emotion again.
I loved how everything didn't rhyme so much like the last poem I read.
I loved how you repeated the phrase "Set it free your imagination
Wandering without a destination
I’m only hoping this time you will find
Us together outside of my mind"
I thought it was really cute.
This poem almost sounds like a song to me.
Good Job!
Keep up the excellent work!
5 STARS BECAUSE U ROCK! :D
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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Fantastic Poem!
I love your use of imagery.
I could imagine everything that was happening.
I loved how you used the poem to tell a story.
I thought that was very creative of you.
You described things very well.
All the words flowed together perfectly.
I didn't spot any errors.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Review of That's you  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome Poem!
I could fell the emotion.
I loved the way you expressed your feelings in this poem.
Everything you said was true and very understandable.
It cool that you like all the attributes of your lover.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome Poem!
This poem was very real and inspiring.
I really enjoyed reading it.
I loved the way you expressed yourself and told a story about yourself.
I also like how you didn't put your self on a high-horse. '
I can tell you are really down to earth.
Good Job!
Keep up the amazing work! :D

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Review of I Miss You  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awe!
Beautiful poem!
I think its nice and sweet of you to write a poem about your grandma.
I loved how you started ever line with "I miss you" and "I think of you"
I thought it really added to the cute factor of the poem.
I really liked this part "I think of you when I pass a little girl with her grandma"
This line really spoke to me.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work!

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Review of Darkness  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Amazing Poem!
You did an awesome job for not being a skilled poet.
I don't know what your standards are for skilled poets but to me you were good enough.
I could have never wrote any poem this good lol.
You had fantastic word choices.
Everything flowed together perfectly and flowed the dark tone of the poem.
Wonderful Job!
Keep up the wicked awesome work!
5 STARS FOR JUST BEING U! :D

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Review of Is it Love?  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Great poem.
I love these parts "Tip, tap, tip, tap"
"in, out, in, out"and "you, me, us, we"
They really added and unique rhythm pattern to the poem.
I also loved how you used lots of details and imagery.
I could imagine everything you were saying.
Good Job!
Keep up the fantastic work! :D

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Amazing poem!
It was very interesting and catchy!
All the words fit together perfectly and flowed well.
Your word choices were fantastic.
Everything make perfect sense.
I could also feel the emotion in this poem.
I loved how you explained about the relationship as well.
It really spoke to my heart.
I have two favorite parts"My feelings have never changed,
But for you our life rearranged."
and
"With your loving kindness in tact,
And always knowing just how to act.
I remember the kindness we shared
but I never left you,
I never dared."
Awesome job!
Keep up the spectacular work!
5 STARS FOR JUST BEING U! :D

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