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Review of Rebellion  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Wonderful Poem!
It was very inspirational.
I love how you used the old language in your poem.
It gave the poem its own unique style.
I'm in the process of reading Romeo&Juliet at school.
This reminds me of the story a little.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the fantastic work! :D

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Review of HE NEEDS ME  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome poem!
It was very interesting and catchy.
Everything you say is true, even though I don't have and have a long way to go before I have kids lol.
I thought this poem was very touching and true.
Reading this poem gave me a little insight on what it's like to be a parent.
I loved your word choice, the poem flowed together perfectly.
Wonderful Job!
Keep up the amazing work! :D

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Review of Sprinkles of Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Amazing poem!
I loved every minute of it!
Your poem flowed well and has spectacular word choice.
All the words just fit together perfectly.
I got a happy party vibe from this poem.
As I read it I began to smile.
I have no favorite part of this poem, I love it all.
This would make an awesome song by the way.
Keep up the wonderful work!
5 STARS FOR BEING TOTALLY, WICKED, AWESOME! :D

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Review of Shades of Me  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome poem!
When I read the first stanza I was hooked.
I loved "Nothing is lovelier to see
Then the color of the sea.
Unless, of course, you speak of me"
I thought this was really different and cute.
I especially love your poem because it has my favorite color in it,Blue!
Wonderful Job!
Keep up the wicked, awesome work!

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Review of Through My Eyes  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Amazing poem!
I love every minute of it.
I thought this poem was very touching an romantic.
I think this belongs on a Valentine's day card.
My favorite part was "I drop to me knees,
To thank God for everything,
Especially for you,
And whatever might the future bring,
For both me and you." This part made me smile.
Usually everyone thinks that their lover is like an angel.
But I love how you didn't make the poem sound cheesy at all like some romance poems do.
Excellent Job!
Keep up the fantastic work!
5 STARS FOR JUST BEING U! :D

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Review of HOMELESS  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Fantastic poem!
It was very interesting.
I love the "No place to live,
No food to eat,
Our help to give,
Hard times to beat."
It was very catchy and added a rhythm to the poem.
Everything you said is true.
Sometimes I feel sorry for the people with out jobs especially the ones who deserve them.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work!

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Review of My Body  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome poem!
Your poem was very interesting and truthful.
This is one of the shortest poems I ever read but it has so much meaning.
It very hard being a girl sometimes I wonder why god gave me this body in the first place lol.
Sometimes I think life would be so much easier if I was a dude.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :D

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Review of Words of a Rose  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Great Poem!
It was very interesting that you spoke of ever use of a rose.
I love the way you started ever sentence with the word I.
It added a rhythm to the poem.
In some ways this poem sounded a little bit like a riddle.
Amazing Job!
Keep up the fabulous work! :D

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Review of We danced  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Wonderful Poem!
I loved how everything rhymed so well.
This poem made me smile.
It was very sweet and romantic.
My favorite part was the ending line, i thought it was so romantic.
Great Job!
Keep up the amazing work! :D

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Review of I love you  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome story!
I could sense lots of emotions in this poem.
I could also tell this story had a lot of interesting drama in it as well.
Its sad when boys can't make up their minds about relationships.
Good Job!
Keep up the great work! :D

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great poem!
I could feel the emotion in it.
I loved the way you explained how you felt.
I could picture what was going on.
But you did have a couple errors
"Ha run" and "I look at those luck ones and feel blue."
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Review of Love, to me  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Fantastic Poem!
This poem was so romantic and sweet.
This would make awesome wedding vowels.
I usually don't like poems that rhyme to much but since this is a romantic poem i think it works well.
Good Job!
Keep up the amazing work!
5 STARS FOR BEING AWESOME! :D

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Review of Smile  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Excellent Poem!
This poem was very happy and cheerful.
It made me smile when I read it.
"They think that I,
Just need a nappy."
This part made me laugh lol, need a nappy....
"I jump in fright,
Then I smile,
I started thinking,
Its been awhile."
This was my favorite part I loved the ending phrase it fits so well with the poem.

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Review of Lazy  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Great Poem!
I originally thought this poem was going to be about some one laying in his house doing nothing.
But you put a new meaning to the word lazy.
I think the poem talks about a person that stopped trying his best and now people want to give up on him.
I loved how you repeated the last line at the end
"I’d rather give up on you.
Give up on you.
Give up on you.
Give up on you."
It really added to the dramatic feel of the poem.

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Review of Lies  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome poem!
I could feel the emotion and mystery.
It was almost like you were narrating a story.
Your descriptions really kept my interest to the poem.
Your word choice was excellent.
Everything fit together and flowed nicely.
Good Job!
Keep up the Wonderful work! :D

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Review of What am I  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome poem!
Ummm...
I think your a fire fly?
Your description was very good.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :D

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Excellent Story!
I was interested from start to finish.
I thought the kiss was a perfect ending.
I can't wait to read the rest.
I only found 2 errors.
"but I was busy glaring at across the table at him."
You put at twice.
"I wasn’t really sure what that meant t my age, but I figured it wasn’t good so I made a face. “No… I’m going to the closed room.”
You forgot the at.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Review of Valentines Poem  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Great Poem!
It was really romantic and sweet.
I could feel the emotion in this poem.
I love how you expressed your love by using examples.
My favorite part:"In an imperfect world, you are the only perfection
The beating of my heart as my eyes meet your reflection
Our love for each other is our protection
I always knew my heart lead me in the right direction"
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Review of Always, forever  
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Excellent poem!
All love poems she be as awesome as yours.
I love how you explained your feelings and gave us examples as well.
The word choice was great everything flowed together perfectly.
You have an awesome gift.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :D

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Review of My Pain  
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Awesome Poem!



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Review of Have To Wait  
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Excellent Poem!
I could feel the emotions.
I love how you contradicted yourself in ever sentence.
That was cool and very unique.
I think that helped me see the different emotions better.
Fantastic word choice.
All the words fit together perfectly.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the excellent work! :D

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Review of Creature  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome Poem!
But versions of the poem were great.
Personally I like the original one more.
I love how you made it descriptive but not to much detail to give the reader a chance to imagine what's going on.
I think the revised version was more descriptive almost like a story.
I also thought the original had more of a rhythm to it.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :D

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Review of Summertime  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Awesome poem!
Even though I hate the heat, the summer time is still the best part of the year.
I loved the way you painted us a picture with the poem.
I could image all the things you said.
I also loved how you used examples to explain how summertime is great.
Wonderful word choices, everything flowed together perfectly.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D


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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Excellent Rant!
You made some very interesting write points.
Awesome argument.
But some of these rights turned wrong, is because of ignorance.
For example the smoking thing back in the 1970s no one knew that smoking cigarettes could kill you.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Awe!
This is a very sweet poem!
I loved every minute of it!
Friendship is an awesome thing!
This poems reminds me of me and my best friend.
I loved how every stanza didn't rhyme.
I could feel the emotion in this poem.
You're word choice was excellent, everything fits together perfectly.
Nothing was out of place too me.
You are an fantastic writer.
Keep up the awesome work! :D

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