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273 Public Reviews Given
273 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I will give an honest review but never harsh. If I see something that I believe will make your writing better, I will point it out but it will just be a suggestion.
I'm good at...
Can usually spot misspellings, errors in formatting etc.
Favorite Genres
Emotions, depression, dark, nature and animals
Least Favorite Genres
adult
Public Reviews
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Review of Reading the Clues  
Review by Trish
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a wonderful story and such a great lesson. Truth is indeed stranger than fiction most of the time and this proves it. Great job.
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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful little poem about driving in the rain. I enjoyed it.
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Review of Angel Dog  
Review by Trish
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a wonderful story. This massive dog showed up just in time to keep her company through the fearsome storm and then to probably save her life from the men who wanted into her car. He truly was an angel dog. I always stop at dog stories. So many amazing dogs and their stories all need to be told. Great job.


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Review by Trish
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What a great story. I love anything creepy or with a twist. This is fantastic, especially if the banker has the right DNA. I find the best stories to read by returning reviews or help as you just gave me on how to refer new people. Thanks for the great story. I really enjoyed it. Sending a few GPs a I forgot to send them with your helpful answer. I'm still trying to learn how to use this great site.
Trish


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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (5.0)
An amazing piece of poetry. I really enjoyed reading it. I loved the lines: Naked wind clattering the leaves of old trees
Dancing whirlwinds of sunshine and moonbeams
I think the third stanza was my favorite. We really can't expect the species of the insane to gather what is so freely given them.
Very well written and no way would I attempt to make it better.
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Review of Broken Promises  
Review by Trish
Rated: E | (5.0)

Absolutely beatiful, and sorrowfully, also to true. I have written severable items lately on what we are doing to our world, leaving not much hope for future generations. I hope it's not too late to turn it around but with our present leader in office, all protections for our earth a being repealed as quickly as he can get it done. I guess he is only worried about one generation, his own.


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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a beautiful way to acknowledge a great friend. Some friends are just so much more than just a friend and when you find one like this, It is truly life changeing.You are truly lucky to find one that will be there through all life exeriences and that can be so close and help you so much. Wonderfully written.


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Review of Dogs A-Prowling  
Review by Trish
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very impressive write about dogs prawling at night and what they may be up to. I enjoyed it .
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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a wonderful vision of a lighthouse. Beautiful descripions. I could see, hear and feel it. Well done.
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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a beautiful poem. I loved the lines: I sit with my memories
Not all that is past hurts
Very nicely written.
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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a wonderful story and so amazing you were so close together. You can make such friends on a site like this. I really loved your story and it is so true. Everyone writes differenty. When I'm in the mood to write, I have no set ideas of what I will write. I quite often write on word down and then go from there. I seldom know till the end of the story how I will end it, but more usually, it will end with a strange twist that I didn't even see coming. But it is so much fun and I enjoyed finding out how others write. Good job.


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Review of Yesterday  
Review by Trish
Rated: E | (4.0)
A beautiful, amusing poem about yesterday. I enjoyed it. We must have joined WDC about the same time. Still getting to know it but I'm trying to return reviews. Thank you.
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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for taking me back to the fifties. I remember it all well and they were my happiest times.
Thank you for the reminders.
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Review of Dear Me  
Review by Trish
Rated: E | (5.0)
Believe me, you are a writer. When you can write sentence after sentence and make every word sound like poetry, this is beautiful. I wish i could write like this and I would never put my pen down. Deligtful imagery. I love your interaction with everything nature has to offer, from the sky to the insects below.
This is beautiful.
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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel like you are describing me. I have suffered from depression for so many years. I really don't think I have ever experienced joy. I describe my religious beliefs much as yours but I always feel something is missing. You have described everything so well. I just never separated joy and happiness, but they are different. I have at times, been happy but joy is something different. Thank you for giving me something to think about and try to change.
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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have painted a beautiful still life of life after strife. Great writing. I really enjoyed reading this.
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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a wonderful poem and so much for the average man to aspire to. Lovely words to live by. I loved reading it.
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Review of Garden Scene  
Review by Trish
Rated: E | (1.5)
An amazingly descriptive poem and a beautiful walk through your garden. I loved reading it and will read it again. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem.
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Review of ISOLATION  
Review by Trish
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a wonderful poem. Isolation indeed. Describes so much of our world today.Isolation even in the middle of crowd. Very emotional study of people showing no emotion at all. I loved it. Keep writing and I will read.
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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (4.0)
I loved this letter. With a bit of imagination, all things are possible. That's what I love about writing. A very intriguing tale and I bet you never have a boring day. Well done.
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Review of Saving Maximus  
Review by Trish
Rated: E | (5.0)
I just had to read another puppy story. Been there a few times myself. My girls never had trouble giving birth but a had a cat when I was younger and had a late, tiny kitten that I brought back and had with me until he grew and was out of danger. That tiny kitten, the runt grew into the largest cat I ever had. He was 20 lbs and not fat. We named him paws because his feet were so big. I'm so glad Belle did okay and Maximus lived. A very nice story and must be what I'm looking for today, because I keep finding them. I loved your story and if I read another, I will try to review it instead of telling you my life story.
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Review by Trish
Rated: E | (5.0)
So funny. I enjoyed it so much. It really reminds me of a poem I just posted here, 'Those Sounds.' I bet you would enjoy it. Read more later.
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Review of Absurdities  
Review by Trish
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sounds like you got all of them in there. Great job.
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Review by Trish
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Adorable! But to be truthful, as a country girl recently transplanted to a large city, I miss being awakened by the call of the lonely rooster. I haven't heard one for a few years now. This is a delightful poem and of course, it is perfect.
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Review of The Diver  
Review by Trish
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a very good poem. We each have things we must do in life to exist. The last stanza wraps it all up so nicely. Well done.
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