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Review of Too Late  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
[the laughed] they laughed

This story of family relations is realistic because sometimes families or some members tend to want the inheritance without having any concern for the family members. Your story about a last-minute effort to get this inheritance shows characters at their best or worst depending on the point of view. I really enjoyed the ending because neither party got what they thought they would. The Uncle and Aunt thought they had thwarted
Sam Adams and his wife Maria Lee just before they died, but i suspect the lockbox would eventually be opened with great effort.
Sam Adams and his wife Maria Lee probably figure there is a lot of valuable stuff in the box, but my guess is they will be disappointed.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the lockbox with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hmm, your poem is a challenge and requires of me several readings, but I think I got it. The person is enjoying Turkish coffee and someone is talking to them, is this the scene? Or, The person is Turkish? I could visualize someone drinking coffee while another person was talking with them.

Thank you for writing and sharing your coffee poem sword art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
When I finished reading your words I felt like you were inviting me to join with you and simply know we were not alone in this world. One aspect of "Are you okay?" is sometimes people ask and do not intend to know the answer to this question for whatever reason. Sometimes people feel they can not give a detailed and truthful answer to this question. I take things at face value if someone asks or I ask either way I want to know or share. I hope people read this and take advantage of these wise words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members. "Are you okay?" I may not respond in a timely manner for various reasons but I will reply.


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Review of Belly Dancer  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As I read your poem I felt the intensity of creating it. It seemed the repetitions hammered and echoed the ideas firmly in my mind while the rest eased the force and slowed down the pace. I could visualize the sliding and fluttering as the belly danced to a strong and exciting rhythm. I was not distracted as I read your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Olympiad  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem I pictured several Olympic events and thought about the efforts athletes invest in competing. It reminded me of the times when my family and I watched these games. Your words work well together to tell the Olympic story. I was not distracted as I read your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your Olympic story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
You created a strange and twisted story about spooky shoes that caused me to shudder considering the weird and strange stuff that's probably available now. Of course, not everyone is privy to new stuff in the beginning. Your story is believable, the character acted normally, and the scenes are realistic.

Thank you for writing this weird shoe story word art and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Review of still  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see your description of a nice day as you relaxed and enjoyed nature. While reading your words I felt as if I was with you taking in the elements and scenery of an adventure we enjoyed. Your poem's story is easy to read and understand.

Thank you for writing and sharing your relaxing nature story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an amazing story of love that took longer than expected to appear and blossom. Your words showed intense emotions related to finding a wonderful girl who captured your heart and changed your life. I could see the two of you gazing at each other and feel the magnetism.

Thank you for writing and sharing your love story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The value of time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree that time is very precious. You wrote wonderful words of wisdom. As I read these words I thought about the tic-tock of time that does not wait for anyone. Your article about time is easy to read and understand.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about time with me and wdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The love they have for each other seems to be cut short or to be slowly advanced because in another life they want to be husband and wife in their new life. The rhythm of your words is smooth and carried me gently from the beginning to the end of your poem. It was like reading music in my ears.

Thank you for writing and sharing your love poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Listen  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see these words in a mirror image floating on water as I read your poem. The art of listening is an important activity to master. I could imagine a writer sitting and listening to the flow and rhythm of words. My imagination created a parent and child listening together.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of We Did It!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story very much because it shows how anyone can conquer some obstacle simply by not giving up. Your story shows how determination and persistence become progress and then success. I also like the idea of not quitting even when it seems that other people are doing better than you.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the joy and love of your words as I read them. My spirit is happy. Your poem is easy to read and understand. The words show a glorious journey in life. I'm glad I found this poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Leslie Ann  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your story seemed to be about a veteran or someone who did something heroic. As I read the ending, it seemed to be a dream or daydream. It felt weird to me as if there was something mental or spiritual going on. It could simply be lust at work.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As I read this story I could imagine the police investigating the crime scene. The story is believable because there have been other similar stories of people finding fortune, taking trips, and having various personal reasons for doing this. I could feel the mixed emotions of the loss of a loved one and the joy of finally living a dream for a loved one.

Thank you for writing and sharing this love story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Fragile  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am positive as much as I am able because it is better than being miserable. I get it! It's tough in this world, but there is hope. I could feel your pain. I could see your struggle. I could hear our cries. Your words showed me the challenges you have. Please feel free to write to me whenever you want or need to do so. I may not reply quickly at times because I have physical challenges. The weather affects me also and slows down my progress. When there are thunderstorms I turn off the computer and router as well as other items because I don't want them hit by lightning. Sometimes I'm too tired to do anything. I hope this is helpful. Your story is clear and easy to understand.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
My favorite part of your poem is the angelic smile. I could see that wonderful smile from Willie in my mind and it looked heavenly. I know about bowling enough to appreciate the ideas in your poem. I was not distracted while reading the story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem story word art about bowling with me and WdC members.


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Review of Play  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Children can be very cruel for sure. I was able to see the character's actions and responses to the new girl. It reminded me of when I was in school. Your story is easy to read and understand It is believable, the characters are believable, and you elicited emotions through your words. It felt like the new girl was under a microscope and being demoralized because of the children's response to seeing her.

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Review of I Forgive You  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the deep heartache and disappointment as I read your poem. When I read the last part of your poem it seemed that you had some relief from the disappointment and heartache ache and I was glad you were able to forgive and let go.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry word art about forgiving with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That gave me a creepy feeling as I read your words of horror. I could see the action and hear the sound effects as I read your life-and-death words. I wonder how this poem would read if it were turned into a story with emotions and actions described in detail. What would the words show me?

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art of horror with me and WdC members.


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Review of Fading Summer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the rhythm of your words as they guided me along the path of your poem. The coolness of fall blanketed me and I could see the sun dipping below the horizon as the days became shorter. There was nothing to distract me as I read your poem.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I enjoyed learning about your Teddy Bear collection and what you thought they had to do with Christmas. Your ideas make sense and I think they have merit because people do like these bears for many reasons some, that you mentioned. I could feel the warmth as you told me about your experiences with these bears. Your words are inviting and kept me interested in reading.

Thank you for writing and sharing your Teddy BBear story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Faster  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh my! This story is very eerie and heart-pounding from start to finish and beyond because the scream continues as the last words are written. I could see in my mind the scene, characters, and the woods and hear the screams. Your story gives me the shivers.

Thank you for writing and sharing your horror story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of intro to Anna  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Anna is very determined and stubborn about what she wants to do, I wonder where she got this and why. Your story is believable and so is Anna. As I read your story I noticed a few typos. I was able to get to know Anna.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about Anna with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Weaver's Tale  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel love with every stitch and every story told. You showed me someone who is dedicated to making the world better through art. I got to know Raj through your words. I could see him weaving beautiful colors to create a picture of his Village and the villagers.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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