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Review of Gone Wrong  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The picture you showed me is vivid and I could feel the pain of love and heartbreak even when you used opposite statements. Your poem cried to me yearning to be freed from the pain and yet longed for love. I could imagine the situation and hope things are better now.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of A New Rule-r  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Thank you for writing an uplifting and joyful poem because it is in my opinion exactly what people need to focus on someone's best side and realize they are valuable. It also explains to people that they have value and that outside appearances are the most important aspect of who they are.

Thank you for writing and sharing your uplifting and happy word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Surprise  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The ending of your story made me chuckle, thank you. I followed your characters and listened to them talk as they proceeded toward the surprise. Your plot is believable and kept me interested in your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the trip to the surprise with me and WdC members.


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Review of REVIEWING SECTION  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Blog City has a nice collection of resources listed that I want to read after getting a huge list of other things completed. The design and layout of the items are orderly and easy to read.

Thank you for writing and sharing this resource word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Great Unknown  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt like your words were giving me a hug because of your respect for respect. I agree that this powerful emotion is something we need to be mindful of every day. You wrote clearly your thoughts and showed me a vivid picture. Reading your word art for me is easy and I understood your point.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art of thoughts with me and WdC members.


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Review of Life, huh  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You created intriguing characters that are believable because they acted as many humans do under such circumstances. The scene and plot are realistic and the story is delivered in a way that shows the reader what is happening keeping the reader in the story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about life with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote an interesting and informative article about water and the effects of not having clean water available that I can relate to and understand.

Thank you for writing and sharing your informative word art about having clean water with me and WdC members.


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Review of Charon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It seemed correct for me to read this poem very slowly and take in the sounds of the words listening to their dreary and doleful song. Images of desperation and despair floated into my vision. I could feel the coolness of the environment. The taste of death danced in my mouth as the words flowed along. It smelled like dankness and swirled about the fallen then into my nostrils.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem's story wth me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fortunately for me, I have no hammock. I guess I'm in good company, right?

Lead on my friend and let's get this movement into gear.

I enjoyed your story because my imagination pictured someone stuck in the hammock. They were very, very thin. I guess you could admit their bones were visible without needing an X-ray machine. Another image was of someone quite old and frail needing a crane to lift them from the hammock. I had a lot of fun reading your story. Now where's the lounge?

Thank you tracker for writing, lounging, and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt as if emptiness grabbed me and dragged me into a dark hole because the story about a nice weekend turned into the grip of Alzheimer's. You showed how this disease can rob a person's mind and also take others with it on a journey nobody wants to experience. In the end, I felt like it was the end because as this disease continues people often are the living dead.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Alzheimners with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This story is easy to read and I saw no errors. I was able to visualize the reindeer running on the ice and then rescuing Blitzen. Maxwell's foolishness seemed to be something he didn't realize was very dangerous. The moral of this story I believe is to be aware of your surroundings. I'm glad everyone is safe because this story had a nice ending except for Maxwell who I could see cleaning the stalls.

Thank you for writing and sharing your cool word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I remember a movie that featured huge spiders but remember not the title. I had no trouble visualizing the mirror and huge spider and the end when it devoured its meal. As long as spiders are not big enough to eat people I don't mind them but am cautious about dealing with venomous spiders. I like tarantulas.

Thank you for writing this horror story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It does cost to be nice but it is a treasured investment because I find friends, am able to put smiles and faces, and my time is well used for the Glory of God. I follow Jesus' example to my best ability. My time invested gives me fantastic returns and I want to emulate Jesus as much as I can.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Learning to Cry  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is sad when emotions are suffocated because of someone or an event. I could see the tears as I read your story and then it changed to a dry desert. The emotions were stolen. Toward the end tears again were able to flow. You showed me these events well and I was not distracted while reading your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the stolen tears eventually returning again with me and WdC members.


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Review of Broken  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is quite a contrast between then and now in reverse which I visualized as if looking in a mirror that changed from a child of old and in need of parenting and reassurance to a young woman who is assured and strong. The image seemed to waver and fluctuate in a weird way because of the description that is unusual but understood. I hope things are better for you now. I'm not implying what you describe is weird but this is the best way at the moment for me to try to explain what I got from your words. Your fears versus your assured emotions opposite of what usually happens gives me the idea that something very traumatic occurred. Please feel free to write whenever the need arises. I appreciate what you have gone through because I experienced a real-life horror story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art experiences with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine a battle of wills and emotions as the characters endeavored to be heard and understood. The ripping apart of cohesive family relations screamed and then slowly quieted. Still, there seemed to be a strength which nothing would put asunder. Family ties sometimes come loose but fortunately they seem to stay together most of the time. This is what ran through my head as I read your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art in poem form with me and WdC me members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I appreciate the cars built from the beginning of engines moving people from place to place. They are art. I also appreciate the horse these creatures worked hard moving people from place to place. Cars have horse power which I believe is a tribute to the horse. Your poem is a very nice tribute to cars. I enjoyed reading your poem and visualizing different cars traveling beside the horses.

Thank you for writing and sharing your car word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Tell Em All Now  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I could fee the fierce and devoted intentions to spread truth and bring people to their right minds so they can decide which way they would go. If a person is hot for God or cold for God He can do something, but if that person is warm/on the fence He will spew them out of His mouth.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Ignited  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Love is a curious emotion and can be intense especially when it is true and forever love. This is how your poem spoke to me as I read it. The words vividly show this deep love and the scenes are realistic. The characters behave normally. I can believe this because the sincerity exudes as I contemplate the arrangement and meaning of which you write.

Thank you for writing and sharing you word art with me and WdC members about true love.


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Review of Only I  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This seems to a version of the Blitz Poem structure. It is a fast moving poem as I read it. I felt like I was in a hurry, being twisted round about, stressed, and finally at the end relived to be able to take a breath. It reminded me of traveling a rough road and having a fast and fun adventure.

Thank you for writing and sharing you word art fast moving poem with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As I read your story I could see the scene with the two boys freaked out of their minds. They reacted in a believable manner and their reactions to each other are authentic. The scene is spooky and realistic such as this type of story should be for the readers. The plot can be expanded and the emotions of the characters shown if you decide to extend this story. I was kept in the story and didn't have any distractions.

Thank you for writing and sharing you word art of the spooky kind with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Devils Deal  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Those ideas are very scary unless the rest of the story is known. I could feel hands reaching out drawing in someone who know not the truth of the matter. I could feel and see the heat licking at an unsuspecting person. For me this is very real, but I trust God and Jesus.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about one side of spiritual warfare with me and WdC members.


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Review of To The Pit  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your last sentence made me feel like I had fallen through the trap door because the ending was a sudden drop of my heart. I felt sad because another soul had been deceived. It is a good story. There are no distractions to take me away from your story. The characters and scene and even the plot is believable. I could see in my mind the action and imagine the conversation with the insistence of the clerk for Aaron to sign the paper.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of His Fate  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a very sad story poem. It felt as if there was no hope and the hands of death were so close there was no escape. I realize there are different deaths scubas physical, spiritual, psychological, and also those that come during defeat in activities. I was not distracted by errors while reading your poem. Your words work well together.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt like I was joining in the fun with you as I imagined the scene, characters, and foolishness. Your words smoothly carried me from the beginning to ending of your poem and did not distract me. I could feel the emotions of joy, happiness, and love of life through your descriptions.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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