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Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful story. I have two cats and I love the personalities of each. I know that the story reminds me about how I love my pets. I think that this is written with a cute picture behind it. This is one of my favorites that I have read tonight.

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Ida


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Review of Greed  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love this story. It is a total example of true Karma. I felt a broken heart with the way their relationships were as a family. I really find a fear in this story because my family could be this family. My parents don't have much, but I would hate to think that my siblings would fight for the scraps.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.

Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really love this item. I will not lie I was caught up in the beautiful pictures for a good minute. I can see that family is a strong part of your world. I can feel it in your reading and in the lovely faces. I feel that you have allowed the reader into your life a little.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful picture. somehow this was found inside my work in my port. I am not sure how, but when I opened the item, I found that I had not reviewed it. So here goes. It is a vivid picture in its colors and imagery. I like that the book seems to be moving its pages all by its self.

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Ida
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Review of Questions  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh boy, you were able to get to me in such a few words that many cannot in pages of writing. It must have been hard to become the killer. I felt a little scared with the events unfolding my eyes. I wanted to reach into the story and stop you from your evil deeds.

One mistake I think:

I’m not the only that’s changed

should it be

I’m not the only (one or thing) that’s changed.

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Ida


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Review of Who Am I  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a form of poetry that I have not been able to accomplish well, but you have. I find that I am carried effortless though your poem with deep thoughts of my own. I have found myself asking the same questions of myself. I really feel that this is well written.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this poem, and you will find a couple poems on this favorite season in my port. The flow is smooth, and the emotion of the season is captured in such a few words. I like the format. It is easy on the eyes. I think that the beat is well done in the lines.

Thank you for sharing this with us, and welcome to the writing.com family.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this story. I love the flow. It really carries the readers throughout the story in a gentleness. The dialog is well written. And I have a bias for the storyline. I love this type of writing. The ending was a surprise for me but it was profound.

Thank you for joining our family and for sharing such a well written story.
Ida


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Review of REMEMBER  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First I wonder what "djembe" is. I love the emotion, and it brought vivid images of my own memories to my thoughts. In my opinion this is one of the deepest items that I have read. The flow was smooth, and the format is one that was easy to read.

Welcome to the writing.com family, and thank you for sharing this nicely written item with the readers.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this little story. It is well developed in such a few words. The image is so greatly described, and I felt that down home feeling from fishing in Kentucky. I know that I would not smell salt water, but the dirt road in you story took me back home.

Thank you for sharing such an excellent story.
Ida


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Review of New Beginnings  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a well written story. The descriptive imagery is wonderful. I can relate to the emotional and physical abuse. After a sixteen year old emotionally abusive marriage, I had a physical abuse. I made the trip in a Uhaul from KY to FL with two children. It is so beautiful changing atmospheres like that. Thank you for a very vivid trip.

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Ida


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Review of My Mother  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I love this story, and I am a single mother. I hope that my children think me in much the same way as the mother in the poem. I can feel the emotion in this story, and I am so happy to have found this poem. The flow was good, the rhythm was smooth, but the message and the emotion was more than excellent.

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Ida


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like this story. I love the character Noah. Of course I would, my youngest son is Noah. That aside, The flow of this story is smooth. The events are well described. The dialog is really flowing through the storyline well. This story could grow a little more, but it is a very nice read.

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Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. It has a smooth read. It is hard for me to explain, but it gives me an emotion of longing for freedom. I love the A,B,A,B rhyme. I use this format a lot in my work. This is a wonderful poem and it is well written. I am truly glad that I have found it.

Welcome to the writing.com family, and thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a serious problem brought with a smile. I have been there done that after my divorce from a marriage of sixteen years. Then I just went from one "in-love" moment to another for about six years. I am now with my soul mate that I met while I was married.

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Ida


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Review of Early Bird Entery  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is well written, and the family relationships are strong in the story line. I found the flow nice, and would love to see this cute little story was written well and kept my attention. This is worth the read for its ability to put a smile on my face.

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Ida


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Review of My perfect day  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this form of poetry. This is how a lot of my poems are written. I like the A,A,B,B rhyming pattern. This is a smooth and entertaining read. The emotion and we all have been there. I think that this brings back memories from when I had this kind of feelings.

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Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I had to laugh. The flow was excellent, the word choice was amazing, and the message was one that everyone can relate with. I loved the way it made me laugh. I also think it deserves to be highlighted in the "Comic" newsletter. I am so happy to have found this poem

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Ida


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Review of My Four Seasons  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is beautifully written. I love the form and the beat of the fluent lines. I really found this a smooth read. The emotions were strong, and the ending was unexpected and welcomed. I had to laugh and think about the many days that I have gone to the park and just filled up soul up with the nature around me.

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Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really appreciate the information in this item. I am going back to visit the sites that are highlighted on this page. I am always looking for a way to get noticed, and I really find this a wonderful place to find the help all in one place.

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Ida


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First welcome to the writing.com family. I hope that you find that this is a place of encouragement.

I love the vocabulary in this item. The flow is smooth, and I really liked the skills that you show with you dialog. Dialog is a skill that I need a lot of practice with.

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Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have not read many of these, and this one creates an interest for creating a post for this page. Each post seems to flow together easily. I find that so many people working on the story line and doing so well is amazing. I love the way that the story is going, and I may be back to try my hand at a post.

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Ida
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I really tried to read this, but either there was a language barrier or a barrier of me not understanding gaming lingo. The letters were scattered much like pig latin, or maybe the translator from another language didn't do a good job. What I did understand, I loved.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful picture and handsome face. I really think that this is a cute picture. I remember loosing my first tooth, and the story that my mom told me about growing a gold tooth in its place if I didn't put my tongue in the empty spot. Of course I could not stop that tongue from playing in the hole.

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Ida
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Review of The Temple  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The flow is smooth and the story rhyme creates a great read. I think that this story is vivid. I really love the descriptive work in the events and the character's behavior. The sounds, the scenery, and the actions were so real that the reader felt that as though he/she is there.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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