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Review of The Bathhouse  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is well written. The flow is smooth and the description is such that the reader feels as though they are watching the story line unfold. I like the characters and the emotion that you were able to give them. I think that it would make reading a little easier on my eyes if there were extra line between the paragraphs.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is poem that is well written. I can see a young man searching for his lover. I feel him getting closer nearly touching her. Then he begins to realize that it is only a dream. I can relate to this. After years of waiting and dreaming, I am with my soul mate.

Thank you for another sweet poem.
Ida


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Review of An Inhuman Place  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a very fast and exciting story-line. I love the emotion. The fear could be felt as the reader read the details in this story. The usage of questions to get the feeling of desperation. You covered the events and atmosphere well with descriptive word choices.

One suggestion; I have read three items of your, each has a nice reward for the review, my suggestions is for you to enter as many contests, review as many auto-reward items, and do as many activities to collect gps as you can. Giving gps takes a lot out of your bank.

Thank you for another great read.
Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Welcome to the Writing.com family. I hope that you find this as supportive and caring place as I have.

I would offer a couple suggestions. 1. It is easier on the reader's eyes if you leave a blank space between the last line of one and the first of the first. 2. Also I would suggest that you can change the font and color of the letters as you want to at the top of the text box when you create the item.

I really admire the dialog. I have problems with this skill. You used conversation that kept the story-line flowing smoothly throughout until the end.

Thank you for sharing this for you.
Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting story. This story could be stretched and continued. I would like to read more about how the spell was done. What items did she use, what words did she say, was she torn between knowing how he felt about witchcraft and wanting him healed?

This has a making for a great story.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the idea. I can see the story develop in these few words. I can also see this story go in so many directions. A couple with one pretending for years to be a happily married person. Other dramas that can be happening within the main story. Some couples could be silently killing their mate. Other couples could be fighting all the time.

This is a great story beginning.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like the image in this poem. You have written a poem that many office workers can relate with. I used to be a telemarketer and this sounds like that thoughts that I entertained everyday. The word choices are well chosen and carries the reader effortlessly through the poem.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of My Love For You  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is another read. I think the flow is great. The emotions are easy to relate to for those of us that have been in love. I really want to say that your girl friend is lucky that she has someone who is inspired by her. The feeling came through strong and vivid.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very great little poem. I have read your work before, and I have never been disappointed. I love the flow, and the content is a message that inspires the reader. I think that the A,A, B,B rhyming pattern works well in this poem. I really love this poem.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of FOREVER  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the way you write. The paragraphs are well written and begin and end in a good place. You use great description and you are able to bring the reader into the story. I found myself on a journey as I read your words. This is an inspirations for me.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a good poem the flow is good. The message is relatable. I was interested in the phrase of poetry Prom. I like the conversation used in the poem. The storyline is smooth. I have just written a review using Shakespeare as an example and found him in this poem. I guess I might read some of his work soon.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I had to smile as I read this story. Today we buried a member of our family. Her name was Snicker Noodles Doodles the Poodle. She would have been eighteen May 26. She was a happy lady. She loved being petted, and was a adopted grandmother to two Jack Russell Puppies. She had been raised with a black and white Border Collie who died a few years back, and tonight I can see them playing together again in my mind.

Thank you for the nice picture.
Ida


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Review of For John  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved this poem. However, it holds both good and bad meanings to me tonight. This morning we woke up to our 18 year old poodle Noodles unable to wake. She had decided that she was tired of being old and less than she once was so she left us during the night. All that was in here bed was a tiny furry peaceful-looking shell of who she was. The kids (witch she was older than except one) helped to bury her tonight beneath a palm tree in the corner of our back yard.

Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Ida


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Review of Days Of Our Lives  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a well written poem. The flow is great, and I love to write and read this A,B,A,B rhyming pattern. I find that it is the easiest for me to read the beat in the lines. I love the descriptive wording that you use, and the way you use the window and the kitten in the poem.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Until I read the words in her finally empty apartment, I thought that this woman was mentally ill and the voice was an orderly that was taking advantage of her condition to amuse himself with a laugh. Now reading to the end I find myself needing more. More information, what had happen, who was she hiding from, and was the voice in her head?

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of "Hey."  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very good story. All the words were used in very interesting ways. The story line is well developed, and told well for the few words that you had to use. I really admire that you were able to tell almost the entire story through dialog. I have always had a problem with dialog.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I find it interesting that you use the words that these stories are braided. I like that phrase.

I am sure that you meant in this statement, "Fingers wriggle through the mud. He grabs it and breaks the surface." "Fingers wriggle through the mud. He grabs the weeds and breaks the surface."


I like the stories. I see that the stories have the warnings of what can happen, and what the conaquences of what does happen when the warnings are ignored.

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Ida


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Review of SimpliCity  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like the way you have written this story. I always have trouble knowing exactly where to end and begin a chapter. In your work, you make it look easy even though the chapters are short they make since. Maybe that is the secret of finding that hidden point to end the chapter.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of short story  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting little item that can be taken in different ways. It is written in such a way that a farmer is taking his cow back to the barn. The poem gives the animal emotion. I can also take the story in a totally different way. I can see a farmer taking a portly girl with low self-esteem back to her families home where she is vacationing.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Together Forever  
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
First of all I love the pictures. The color and the brightness really catches the eyes. I have read three poems covering these words of this prompt. I found each so different, but each is so well written. This poem was more story like than the rest. Less religious than another, but I loved that this one reminded me of my childhood.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Upon A Pale Horse  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is very good poem that carries a deep message. This message is one that is true to those of us who believe the Bible, and held close to our hearts. I find that it is a very strong skill to take the words that you had in the list to create such an amazing poem. I feel that this poem is one that can touch hearts. I found it inspiring.

Thank you again HuntersMoon for another wonderful read.
Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First of all, the picture is beautiful and totally eye catching. The title is what caused me to stay to read the poem. I was surprised to find that the lines were numbered at 72. It flowed and told the story so that it seemed that I started the story line and was finished in no time.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
First of all welcome to our writing.com family. This is a well written poem that is very relatable for me. I was married for sixteen years. We had three children together, and I prayed ever night for God to show him that he did love me.

I can relate to very well to the emotions of these words.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Starving anger  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
First welcome to the writing.com family. I hope that you will be as comfortable here as I have been these many years.

I love the writing of this piece. I am not sure why you have a three star rating because I found the raw emotion so relatable. The trying to feel things and being afraid that you don't, is one of the most isolating emotions that a person can feel. You have done well relating these feelings to us, and I am one to tell you that this story is relatable in most people's lives at one time or another.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Skin Crawl  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I like the format and spacing between paragraphs. I do wish that the font was a little bigger, maybe a three. I enjoyed the flow. The skill of sensuous writing and flowing conversation in this item is something that I could not miss because I find that these are my hardest challenges. The characters and events are written so that you take the reader into your work as a witness.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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