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Rated: · Poetry · Emotional · #1008804

hmm this is my first poem well first not forced

When there in the lake it was magical
being together, talking together.

When there in the lake I felt warm
being together,talking together.

Now when there, I feel cold
leaving a rose in the water.

I leave wearing black,and I wonder
why did it take you away..forever.
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