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*Penbl* Author: willy          [Dec 11, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Comedy :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: What do you think of my latest poem, which was a bit of a struggle against writer's block. I don't you know if you can write until you prove that you can't.

 Excuse Me I'm On My Way Out  (13+)
Confusion in Dunelm
#2176247 by willy

*Penbl* Author: RavanaRaven          [Dec 9, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Cultural :: Dark :: Horror/Scary
*Penr* Details: Let me know what you think, this is something new and something I really enjoyed writing.

 Wasteland Monarchy  (ASR)
Poem about myself and society
#2176901 by RavanaRaven

*Penbl* Author: Sew-no-more 🤗          [Dec 7, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Children's :: Comedy
*Penr* Details: looking for feedback on my story's flow, likes or dislikes, character visualization and tenses.
Is it interesting, or does it need more work? Thank you in advance! :)
  [Short Story]

The Bronco Riding Rooster  (13+)
Tom Leghorn makes a life or death decision to ride a bronc or not. Which will he choose?
#2166667 by Sew-no-more 🤗

*Penbl* Author: Beckyb          [Dec 7, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Activity :: Hobby/Craft :: Other
*Penr* Details: Please review my short story in my blog.watch me.thank-you.

Blog  (18+)
It's for any book items and any notes I have to make.
#2176582 by Beckyb

*Penbl* Author: BrokenPen          [Dec 6, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Action/Adventure :: Other
*Penr* Details: First few chapters of my sci-fi novel. It's still in its early stages, but I want to know how it is so far. All constructive comments are welcome.
I am happy to do a review of your work in turn.

 Dawn of the Gods  (13+)
A galactic empire of various species has kept peace for centuries, but something is amiss
#2176658 by BrokenPen

*Penbl* Author: Joe Nelson          [Dec 6, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Fantasy :: Steampunk
*Penr* Details: This is the start of a dark fantasy novel I'm working on and I would greatly appreciate any feedback. It's the story of an elf who travels to a dark land in search of her missing brother.

 Elfsong  (18+)
The beginning of a dark fantasy novel. An elf journeys to a dark city ruled by man...
#2176135 by Joe Nelson

*Penbl* Author: Tevye T. Garland          [Dec 6, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Philosophy :: Spiritual :: Self Help
*Penr* Details: Please read and review. Thank you!

 White Pepper  (13+)
An abstract stream of consciousness poem.
#2176380 by Tevye T. Garland

*Penbl* Author: Robert Edward Baker          [Dec 6, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Medical :: Inspirational :: Spiritual
*Penr* Details: I've written a story about redemption for the What a Character contest. I'd love general feedback. I'm particularly interested in medical or military background reviewers to know if my facts are both accurate and plausible. Thank you! Bob :D
  [Short Story]

The Repentant Bully  (18+)
Ronald regrets bullying Sam in high school and wishes to apologize - for What a Character.
#2176534 by Robert Edward Baker

*Penbl* Author: Taylor Eggers          [Dec 5, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Internet/Web :: Computers :: Technology
*Penr* Details: Any input would be extremely helpful, I wrote this in a crunch so lots of comments are expected. Wrote this for a college class, deadline is Friday.

 Internet Bullying   (E)
A brief essay on the reasonings people give as to why they bully over the internet.
#2176584 by Taylor Eggers

*Penbl* Author: WriterAtHeart          [Dec 5, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Biographical :: Emotional :: Relationship
*Penr* Details: Hello fellow readers!
I've been trying to finish this piece of poetry lately. I wish if you all could spare 2 minutes and provide your valuable feedback. Thank you in advance!
Happy reading. :)

 Looking for the rain  (E)
Soul Alone and looking for the rain
#2176330 by WriterAtHeart

*Penbl* Author: Charity Marie - Is BACK!          [Dec 3, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy :: Young Adult
*Penr* Details: This is the first chapter of a novella I'm working to finalize. I would love feedback and if you're interested in reviewing subsequent chapters, please let me know so I can reach out when they're ready. They're written, just have to add them to WDC.

 How to Adopt a Dragon  (E)
Reyna is 15 and seeking a life of adventure as a dragon flyer.
#2176353 by Charity Marie - Is BACK!

*Penbl* Author: Mick 7          [Dec 2, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Biographical :: History :: Melodrama
*Penr* Details: This is an auto biographical beginning to a most interesting story... input truly appreciated

 Fate & Destiny Name A Baby  (E)
A deep love, a promise and one man's dream come true.
#2176170 by Mick 7

*Penbl* Author: lezismore-author          [Nov 30, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Emotional :: Drama :: Family
*Penr* Details: Story I started writing some time ago. Would be interested in honest feedback

Rendezvous with Drama -1   (18+)
Logan is hell bent on putting a stop to the domestics
#2036385 by lezismore-author

*Penbl* Author: Shandralyn          [Nov 29, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Philosophy :: Inspirational :: How-To/Advice
*Penr* Details: The beginning of a book of philosophy I wish to write. All feedback welcome.

 Deep Waters  (E)
A Guided Journey for Self-Actualization. Aka “Project One Truth”
#2176004 by Shandralyn

*Penbl* Author: Shandralyn          [Nov 29, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Inspirational :: Personal :: Emotional
*Penr* Details: A poem about a friend. Any constructive feedback is most welcomed.

 How I See You…  (E)
A poem for my best friend, whom I love...for Jared
#2175999 by Shandralyn

*Penbl* Author: Lewis Challinor          [Nov 29, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Emotional :: Tragedy
*Penr* Details: A short story I wrote a few months ago, I'm very new to the writing scene and have very little time to practice, but I would really appreciate any feedback, good or constructive. Thank you in advance for any reviews!
  [Short Story]

Nice Guy  (18+)
A short story about a man who falls too deep and the dangers that go with it.
#2175879 by Lewis Challinor

*Penbl* Author: PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes          [Nov 29, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Teen :: Young Adult
*Penr* Details: Everyone loves getting GPs. That’s why I’m offering five thousand GPs for every review of my Jessica Strong Introduction Chapter that I get. True, I want you to like this, but whether you like it or not, you will still get the five thousand GPs.

 Jessica Strong  (18+)
This novel isn't just a novel. It's also for the October Prep Challenge too.
#2169077 by PureSciFiPlus

*Penbl* Author: PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes          [Nov 29, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Action/Adventure :: Biographical
*Penr* Details: Five thousand GPs for every review that I get for reviewing the Introduction Chapter for my Wandita novel. Of course, I want everyone to like it but whether you do, or you don’t I’ll still give you five thousand GPs just for reviewing it.

 Wandita  (18+)
This isn't just a novel. It's a novel for the October Prep Challenge too.
#2169075 by PureSciFi - And the Oscar goes

*Penbl* Author: Rbt618          [Nov 27, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Drama :: Family :: None
*Penr* Details: Just looking for a generalized review - primarily on story line, how it seems to flow. Do you get a solid sense of who is telling the story, what their role is and the world these ppl live in. A general review ...

 Dust Bowl  (E)
Caroline,faced living during the great drought of the mid-west has choices to make.
#2175778 by Rbt618

*Penbl* Author: RudolphTheRedHairedBoy 🌈          [Nov 27, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Friendship :: Other
*Penr* Details: feedback is appreciated, thank you ~~~

ZWOOOOSH (pew pew)  (18+)
poetry ~~~
#2175592 by RudolphTheRedHairedBoy 🌈

*Penbl* Author: Alanna Fitzgerald          [Nov 25, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Detective :: Drama :: Other
*Penr* Details: This is the second part of my novel that I am working on. I'm looking for feedback on what I have so far. This is a work in progress. I have placeholders for areas of potential future content. Thank you for helping me improve and forward my work!

Dead Twin Part II  (18+)
The second part of my Novel. It is a work in progress. Feedback is always appreciated.
#2175508 by Alanna Fitzgerald

*Penbl* Author: GaelicQueen          [Nov 25, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Folklore :: Fantasy
*Penr* Details: I tweaked an older story. Please review and comment. Did it pique your interest? Pacing? Satisfying ending?
  [Short Story]

Sandman  (E)
Who is the giver of dreams?
#2115941 by GaelicQueen

*Penbl* Author: Perhaps          [Nov 24, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Community :: Cultural :: History
*Penr* Details: Free your mind

 Serpent lies...  (E)
How do you begin to explain something so reality shattering?
#2110735 by Perhaps

*Penbl* Author: Perhaps          [Nov 24, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Relationship :: Psychology :: Philosophy
*Penr* Details: Please review

 Shaman's Trance  (E)
What if you are not alone in your meditation?
#1942416 by Perhaps

*Penbl* Author: Magma-rager          [Nov 21, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Young Adult :: Travel :: Personal
*Penr* Details: Hello! I'm searching for people who will be interested to review my writing. The piece is quite large (30k words), and a total payment of Gift points is ranged up to 200k depending on the quality of your review. Payment will proceed after your review.

The Human And The Beast  (GC)
A tale of two characters who have ended up in unfortunate circumstances.
#2175174 by Magma-rager

*Penbl* Author: jonnigrl1          [Nov 20, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Contest :: Contest :: Contest
*Penr* Details: I would greatly appreciate an honest review. Thank you.

 Other Ways  (E)
A young witch wants to abandon her powers
#2174909 by jonnigrl1

*Penbl* Author: John Yossarian          [Nov 19, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Young Adult :: Cultural
*Penr* Details: I'd love your take on this before I send it out.
  [Short Story]

Comforting Lies  (18+)
DeMichael runs an errand for his mom and discovers the truth of his world.
#2175120 by John Yossarian

*Penbl* Author: jonnigrl1          [Nov 19, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Death :: Death :: Death
*Penr* Details: I would greatly appreciate an honest review. Thank you.

 A Talk with Death  (E)
A person receives an extremely strange visitor.
#2175091 by jonnigrl1

*Penbl* Author: RavanaRaven          [Nov 15, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Psychology :: Gothic
*Penr* Details: Please have a look at my current project which is a poem a day. Let me know what you think.

 365 Day Poems  (ASR)
Poem a Day for One Year
#2173517 by RavanaRaven

*Penbl* Author: Bruce.          [Nov 15, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Satire :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: Vacancy: A UK prime minister with backbone who wants to leave the EU.

 Theresa the Appeaser.   (E)
Political betrayal.
#2147341 by Bruce.

*Penbl* Author: RudolphTheRedHairedBoy 🌈          [Nov 14, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Gay/Lesbian :: Romance/Love :: Other
*Penr* Details: would love feedback, short poetry ~~ 18+

sakura love poem (POP!!) 愛  (GC)
romantic poem for a wonderful guy ~~~
#2174640 by RudolphTheRedHairedBoy 🌈

*Penbl* Author: Thankful Sonali WDC Power!          [Nov 12, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Fanfiction :: Political
*Penr* Details: Does it make sense to Potterheads and non? Does it fit the theme Political Poetry? This is my entry to the official contest, and needs to be free of typos. Please help with proofreading.
Do you think the ending is weak, or strong (last stanza)? Thanks!

 Fantastic History  (13+)
Take heed! Or pay the price. (Harry Potter spoiler warning!)
#2174463 by Thankful Sonali WDC Power!

*Penbl* Author: Talking Insecurity          [Nov 11, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Emotional :: Relationship
*Penr* Details: Does this make you feel something? Truthful feedback appreciated!

 The Unfathomable Night  (E)
When you break up but cannot let go. We all write when that happens, right?
#2174322 by Talking Insecurity

*Penbl* Author: Chelsea Womberly          [Nov 11, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Romance/Love :: Supernatural
*Penr* Details: Looking for honest reviews and whether this is a story you would like to continue reading more chapters! I will review a story of yours in return if you wish. Thank you!

 Fated.  (13+)
A young woman meets an alluring man who is the world's oldest and deadliest creature.
#2158291 by Chelsea Womberly

*Penbl* Author: brom21          [Nov 9, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Other
*Penr* Details: Honest and encouraging reviews please!
  [Short Story]

 The Search for the Wizard King  (ASR)
A wrestles sage must go through perils to find a wizard who can heal a plagued kingdom.
#2174278 by brom21

*Penbl* Author: elizjohn          [Nov 8, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Emotional :: Contest Entry
*Penr* Details: A possible submission to a lit-mag. Without trying to completely stray from my usual style, I tried to replicate the style of the work they publish. Any feedback is appreciated. Will return the favor with a review of an item of similar length item.

 the proposal  (E)
For a lit-mag submission. Not my usual dark fare. Had to use metronome, gaslight, & slip.
#2174191 by elizjohn

*Penbl* Author: Archaic Torso          [Nov 8, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Cultural :: Emotional
*Penr* Details: A poem about facing your problems.

 Shoulders  (E)
Confronting emotions.
#2174023 by Archaic Torso

*Penbl* Author: Archaic Torso          [Nov 8, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Cultural :: Death :: News
*Penr* Details: I would love comments or just reactions to this poem, how it made you feel/think. I want to get better and start getting in journals, etc. Thanks!

 The Newsreader Reports  (E)
Expressing anger at a news story and the manner in which they are reported.
#2174024 by Archaic Torso

*Penbl* Author: JayDee          [Nov 7, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi :: Other
*Penr* Details: Thank you in advance.
  [Short Story]

 What Things Are  (E)
Things are what they are; or are they?
#2170533 by JayDee

*Penbl* Author: John          [Nov 5, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: Another chapter from my story “rift”. Say what want/need to say!

 The Waterfall  (13+)
Following Vana’s Venture to the cold world
#2173742 by John

*Penbl* Author: TL          [Nov 3, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Psychology :: Paranormal
*Penr* Details: First chapter of my horror novel. Daisy Chains. I can take harsh critique!

Daisy Chains  (ASR)
First chapter of my first horror novel
#2173380 by TL

*Penbl* Author: John          [Nov 2, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Fantasy :: Other :: Other
*Penr* Details: I just wrote my first draft, in need of an honest critique.

 Frozen in XOL  (E)
First idea of a new story for a game I'll just call "Rift". More ideas coming soon
#2173604 by John

*Penbl* Author: Mina~busy again          [Nov 2, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Ghost :: Horror/Scary :: Other
*Penr* Details: Please review my poem and feel free to let me know my mistakes. I appreciate your suggestions.

 A Ghost and Palm trees  (E)
my first attempt Duo-rhyme poem
#2172734 by Mina~busy again

*Penbl* Author: elizjohn          [Nov 1, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Crime/Gangster :: Other
*Penr* Details: Something about "an unmarked grave" inspired this piece, although it took a decidedly darker turn than I'd originally intended, given the POV became that of a vile inmate. Thoughts would be appreciated. I'll review something of similar length. Thx!

 Last Words  (13+)
They asked him if he had any “last words”. He did.
#2173532 by elizjohn

*Penbl* Author: willy          [Oct 28, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Comedy :: Experience :: Philosophy
*Penr* Details: Sometime I wrote months ago but it seems particularly appropiate to the here and now

 Right Or....  (E)
How to win foes and influence people.
#2130524 by willy

*Penbl* Author: Eli Davidson          [Oct 23, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Dark :: Music :: None
*Penr* Details: first post on any writing site. thanks for your time if you look at it.

 So Tenderly, You Watch Me Burn   (13+)
First item. For people who are waiting for meaning, who are hoping for closure.
#2172788 by Eli Davidson

*Penbl* Author: A Thousand Young          [Oct 22, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Supernatural :: Horror/Scary :: Other
*Penr* Details: Hello everyone! Writing is something I've been trying my hand at lately, but I'm feeling quite uncertain about style and language. Therefore, I'm kindly asking everyone interested to review my first item here. Thank you in advanve!

 BRYAN  (13+)
The story of a terrifying encounter with a monster and its unlikely outcome.
#2172584 by A Thousand Young

*Penbl* Author: Maolla          [Oct 20, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Philosophy :: Psychology :: Other
*Penr* Details: My second attempt at poetry in English. Thank you very much for any feedback.

The Benefit of Doubt  (E)
Some thoughts about what's been happening to the world for a while now.
#2171227 by Maolla

*Penbl* Author: Empress L.B.          [Oct 19, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Relationship :: Emotional
*Penr* Details: I haven't been very active on wdc recently but I've still been working on stuff. I wrote this a couple months ago and would love to hear some other opinions about it. Thanks!
  [Short Story]

 Girl you don't want to be  (ASR)
Both have been hurt in the past; now she's emotionless and he's desperate.
#2172458 by Empress L.B.

*Penbl* Author: Leif the Lucky          [Oct 19, 2018]
*BookStack3* Genre(s): Sci-fi :: History :: Thriller/Suspense
*Penr* Details: It's been a bit over a year since I've written this three-part novella, but I'm thinking about going back and extensively revising it all. At this point, I'm trying to come up with ways to make it more about the characters rather than the concept.

The Halloween Event  (18+)
The entire island of Britain is mysteriously transported a thousand years into the past.
#2135762 by Leif the Lucky

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