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 Genre(s):  Friendship • Psychology • None
 Type:  Fiction
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Hey, this is a short piece of flash fiction. I would really appreciate constructive criticism and feedback!

Bethany's home   (E) A caretaker tries to learn more about the woman she cares for. #2362297 by jo

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 Genre(s):  Mystery • Drama • Spiritual
 Type:  Short Story
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Over 4k words, the longest story I've written in a while. It blew up unexpectedly, turning into a somewhat absurd mystery drama. It needs further development, for sure. Just thought I'd put it out here. Any thoughts welcome, and thank you!

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The Assonance of Faith  (13+) Of war crimes, double lives, mistaken identity, and exes in Texas... #2362100 by Amethyst Angel

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 Genre(s):  Fantasy • Animal • Action/Adventure
 Type:  Novel
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I'm currently in the process of editing "Prone To Wander" for publication. Any and all feedback is welcome. This is the perfect time to make changes :) ...and if you like it, there's a whole series.

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Prone To Wander  (ASR) When his family is taken captive "Ruben" sets out to find and rescue them. #2345548 by Brittany L. Engels

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 Genre(s):  Community • Cultural • History
 Type:  Poetry
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I promise it will be worth your time:)

Serpent lies...  (E) How do you begin to explain something so reality shattering? #2110735 by Perhaps

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 Genre(s):  Fantasy • Action/Adventure • Fanfiction
 Type:  Illustration
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I need opinions on how to make this better before turning it into an ebook

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Æiristus  (E) Æiristus (Close up) #1117434 by Æiri

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 Genre(s):  Mythology • Inspirational • Community
 Type:  Poetry
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Please review. Will be worth your time!

Insert title here  (E) Free your mind #2105379 by Perhaps

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 Genre(s):  None • None • None
 Type:  Other
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I just made this and i wanted to know what people think (Its a poem)

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ideas that are cool  (E) cool shizzle that I don't want to forget #2361313 by The tale teller

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 Genre(s):  Mythology • Emotional • None
 Type:  Short Story
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Looking for a some honest feedback; trying some new writing styles out of late

Where No Horn Calls  (13+) In Valhalla, after tales of battle, Odin calls upon a child to speak #2361184 by Mac

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 Genre(s):  Political • Tragedy • Personal
 Type:  Poetry
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A poem I'm looking for an in-depth critique on. Written in AAVE.

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Boulevard   (E) A poem about a nonspecific Boulevard in America, written in AAVE. #2361274 by Ethan Wolverton

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 Genre(s):  Parenting • Family • Adult
 Type:  Poetry
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I haven't published any item since the creation of my WDC account. In celebration of my WDC account reaching its anniversary, I've released a poem. It would be great if anyone would check it out

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Why Don't Adults Cry?   (13+) A celebratory poem for my WDC account reaching its anniversary. #2361120 by IV

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 Genre(s):  Environment • Folklore • Fantasy
 Type:  Fiction
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Here's a nice and short story. Please give me some tips to improve my prose. I'm a beginner and am looking for some advice. Thank you!

The Arrival of Summer  (E) A bit of writing practice. #2360927 by A.Aaron

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 Genre(s):  Drama • Emotional • Relationship
 Type:  Fiction
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Recently updated after sitting shelved for years.

Seasons Change  (E) Collection of related stories #1316368 by Skurpio

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 Genre(s):  Emotional • None • None
 Type:  Poetry
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Hi there! Looking for some feedback. Happy to do a review of something of years of comparable length in exchange. Thank you!

There Is No Love Here  (13+) 8-word prompt: elegy, obsidian, margin, origami, deepen, gnaw, wheeze & lacerate. #2351752 by elizjohn

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 Genre(s):  Political • None • None
 Type:  Poetry
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Hi there! Looking for some feedback. Happy to do a review of something of years of comparable length in exchange. Thank you!

There Is No Freedom Here  (13+) Based on an 8-word prompt, words highlighted in the text #2352859 by elizjohn

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 Genre(s):  Fantasy • Animal • Action/Adventure
 Type:  Novel
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This is the first book in the second Prone To Wander series. There may be some spoilers for the first series of ten books. I would love to know if readers can enjoy this story without having read any of the previous books. **First Draft**

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Tales of the Wanderers (first draft)  (ASR) When tragedy strikes and villains rise, someone discovers a family he didn't know he had. #2360723 by Brittany L. Engels

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 Genre(s):  None • None • None
 Type:  Fiction
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Hi. Posted this item last year. Following bits and pieces from critiques received here I have made some changes. Would request new reviews and re-reviews if any of you are so inclined. Many thanks.

A Day in the Park  (13+) Originally started from a prompt. Updated following critiques from here. TY. #2346759 by Skurpio

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 Genre(s):  Other • None • None
 Type:  Journal/Blog
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this only has one entry..the house that remembered which is what I need feedback on as it is well out of my wheelhouse and I want to turn it into a video story book but need to know if it's even any good

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Video Storybook Concepts   (E) a place for creating the framework of my video stories #2360662 by Lizzie creating dreams

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 Genre(s):  Fantasy • Action/Adventure • None
 Type:  Short Story
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I am considering continuing on with this, as with all of my short stories. Please let me know what you think. I will review for you, in turn.

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Drago's Illusion  (13+) Give not the appearance #2352818 by Reagana

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 Genre(s):  Fantasy • Drama • None
 Type:  Short Story
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I am thinking of making this into something longer. Please share what you think on what I have so far.

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Making of a King  (13+) Scouting Mission #2352820 by Reagana

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 Genre(s):  Family • Melodrama • Animal
 Type:  Short Story
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Honest comments on what feelings, if any, were evoked. Please describe them. Thank you.

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The Waiting Game  (E) Amidst the chaos of longing, Maya discovers the beauty of patience. #2357609 by Prier

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 Genre(s):  Supernatural • Dark • Drama
 Type:  Short Story
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I'm looking for feedback on a 3.8k word short story I am submitting to an anthology soon. I am hoping for some spelling/grammar feedback as well as content.

There is no sex and no gore. There is profanity and some references to religious practices.

A Rosary of Demons  (13+) Henry is teaching his son the business of keeping demons. Submission: The Book of Demons #2359848 by Sorji

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 Genre(s):  Emotional • Family • Melodrama
 Type:  Poetry
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This is the first time I have tried something like this and wondered if the story is understood. Kind wishes, Tee

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The Ballad of Violet Gray  (E) Poetic story of Violet Gray. Her story of loss and pain. #2359871 by TeeGateM

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 Genre(s):  Dark • Fantasy • Teen
 Type:  Chapter
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hi!! my name is Raine, I would love if someone could just let me know if this story sounds good, and what I should add for interest wise!!

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Chapter 1, start of my Novel REWRITTEN!  (18+) I rewrote my chapter 1 for my Novel!!! NOTE GRAPHIC! BLOOD DECAPITATION A #2359155 by Raine

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 Genre(s):  Fantasy • None • None
 Type:  Chapter
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I just want to know if this is an engaging and easy to process opening to an epic fantasy novel, and if it makes you want to read more

Vengeance, Far Son Chapter 1  (18+) A mercenary captain, a captured raider, beneath a new red star, heralding a new king. #2359482 by Inkly Ascension

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 Genre(s):  Gothic • Fantasy • Supernatural
 Type:  Chapter
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Seeking honest critiques/reviews for this chapter in my novel, In the Valley of the Moon.

In the Valley of the Moon chapter 2  (18+) Junie’s mysterious arrival begins stirring whispers, curiosity, and destiny. #2359177 by PennySue

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 Genre(s):  Thriller/Suspense • Action/Adventure • None
 Type:  Chapter
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And the prologue, see if it grabs your attention and makes u want to know what the heck has happened

Sicilian Dragon Prologue  (E) After some years way, I’ve decided to give the first chapter of my novel another go #2357199 by James Rowe

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 Genre(s):  Thriller/Suspense • Action/Adventure • None
 Type:  Chapter
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Back after a long break, let me know whether to continue Bishop’s story.

Chapter 1 reworked The Sicilian Dragon   (E) Chapter 1 reworked #2357499 by James Rowe

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 Genre(s):  Religious • None • None
 Type:  Novella
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I am looking for honest feedback on if this story (Christian fiction) flows well. I know there are details that need to be worked on and added. Any helpful feedback or ideas to add are appreciated!

The Wrong Covenant (Working Title)  (E) A Christian fiction story where tragedy opens to triumph. Novelette rough draft . #2358086 by E.J. Apostrophe

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 Genre(s):  Arts • Biographical • Personal
 Type:  Poetry
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a freeverse. is it readable?

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Latitude: 52.079984 | Longitude: 4.31134  (13+) 3 verses, 1 poem #2357788 by ~Odyssey

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 Genre(s):  Friendship • Drama • Experience
 Type:  Short Story
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Is it interesting? Does it meet the prompt (mentioned in the brief description)? Are there any typos I've missed? Any feedback welcome!

Foot In Mouth  (13+) "Experience is simply the name we give our mistakes." — Oscar Wilde #2357532 by Thankful Sonali Quick Pick!

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 Genre(s):  Political • None • None
 Type:  Short Story
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I've not written for five years and then this just bubbled up out of nowhere. I really am looking for honest review, but to be totally truthful, I'm also hoping people will enjoy it... something that might provoke thought and ruffle feathers, as it were.

Birds of a Kind  (13+) An exploration of the power of kindness. #2356877 by writethewritten

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 Genre(s):  None • None • None
 Type:  Novel
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First two Chapters of my novel for consideration and critique.

Tee  (18+) Chapter 1 -2: Once high-powered attorney who falls on hard times after an office shooting #2352851 by Zeke

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 Genre(s):  Drama • Cultural • Finance
 Type:  Short Story
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My first short story after a long haitus. Review is truly appreciated.

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The Last Twenty Pesos  (E) How Jun-Jun survived with his last twenty pesos on hand. #2356718 by Earl: 30 Day Blogging. Tnx!

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 Genre(s):  Drama • Mystery • Thriller/Suspense
 Type:  Short Story
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I started this without any clear idea of where it would end up. A spy story? Maybe... Any thoughts appreciated.

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The Laughing Frog  (E) Matthew, bless his soul, spends his nights at a bar... #2355651 by Amethyst Angel

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 Genre(s):  Fantasy • None • Drama
 Type:  Short Story
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Just looking for any thoughts, really. Thanks.

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Lights Out  (13+) I went out to the hazel wood, because a fire was in my head. #2345588 by Dan Hiestand

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 Genre(s):  Experience • Biographical • Emotional
 Type:  Poetry
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This poetry is true, sad to say. Please comment on the impact (if any) it had on you.

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On Thick Black Ice  (E) The monsters had to spoil it! #2352771 by LunaMarcher🥾🥾

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 Genre(s):  Relationship • LGBTQ+ • Comedy
 Type:  Poetry
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Trying to bring some fun into my poetry

Sex in the British Museum  (18+) An unexpected erotic encounter in a famous British establishment #2354441 by Huristic

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 Genre(s):  Medical • Writing • Personal
 Type:  Poetry
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Can I krep up with it? Getting tired! Did you feel an impact?

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Borrowed Red  (ASR) Another transfusion on oder! #2352871 by LunaMarcher🥾🥾

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 Genre(s):  Crime/Gangster • Death • Drama
 Type:  Short Story
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First longer short story on a couple I'm working on developing or maybe write another short for them.

The Crimson Gravestone  (13+) Juno Cassidy comes to realize the last score is the hardest to settle #2352080 by AliceLvs2Write

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 Genre(s):  None • None • None
 Type:  Poetry
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I am looking for honest feedback and any suggestions on my poem.

Solar rider  (E) An epic journey #2351265 by Anastasia Browne

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 Genre(s):  News • Research • Psychology
 Type:  Article
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I plan to cross post this to places off WDC so as many people can learn what works well in positive news reporting. I want to make sure people of many reading levels can follow this while still being engaged. Title suggestions also welcome.

The Good News Announcer  (13+) Not all positive news is created equal. What makes such news work well? #2350504 by Elisa the Melting Stik

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 Genre(s):  None • None • None
 Type:  Short Story
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Believable? Confusing in some way? Did you want to read to the end? Any and all thoughts and feedback are welcome!

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Into the Mystic  (ASR) A life lived - inspired by the great Van Morrison song #2350541 by David C

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 Genre(s):  War • Family • Biographical
 Type:  Non-fiction
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Please review this tribute to the hard lives of my parents in W.W.2 and how I came to hate war. Please excuse the English spellings but we invented the language. It shows something of the hard lives of us Brits at that time

Working Class Heroes; My Mam and Dad?  (13+) The joys and sorrows of my family life between 1941 -1952. #2349971 by willy

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 Genre(s):  Horror/Scary • Detective • Crime/Gangster
 Type:  Novel
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The Whate estate in Innsmouth. The story is about an estate in Innsmouth which has had some murders in it. The police are investigating the case, the police have found that there was a journalist whose body was found on the grounds in a thunder storm.

THE WHATE HOUSE in Innsmouth c1 - C5  (18+) The house was where a murder had occured. I am an investigator of the police in Innsmouth. #2348537 by PATRICK EDWARDS

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 Genre(s):  Contest Entry • Family • Other
 Type:  Short Story
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This is a short story, less than 2000 words. I appreciate any reviews. How did the story and/or characters make you feel? Did you want to read to the end? Writing craft suggestions also welcome.

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No One Was Looking at Me  (E) An award-winning author, a young boy's masterpiece, and a lesson learned. #2348448 by David C

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 Genre(s):  Sci-fi • War • Technology
 Type:  Sample
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Hey I wrote the first two pages of this sci fi script here I would like an honest review don't hold back please od like to better my writing skills and that means honest critisms

I write just for fun and am a total newbie

Thanks and enjoy

Intergalactic peacekeepers INTRO   (E) Born for service, trained for war — today, you become a peacekeeper of the Empire. #2347969 by Samuel E

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 Genre(s):  War • None • None
 Type:  Poetry
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Hi, i was trying a writing prompt about villain's last line. i just need your thoughts on this. this is my very first poem.

A villain's last line   (E) Stumbled upon a writing prompt about villain's last lines, so decided to give it a try. #2347372 by N.R.Nora

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 Genre(s):  Sci-fi • Horror/Scary • None
 Type:  Draft
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I struggled to push this one down to a thousand words for a contest. Might end up expanding on it later. In the current draft, I'd like feedback on the overall vibe and suggestions to improve clarity and flow. Thanks!

Echoes Across the Stars  (ASR) Explorers investigate an odd Earth-like planet on the other side of the galaxy #2347123 by Corin Merek

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 Genre(s):  Opinion • Religious • None
 Type:  Poetry
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I haven't written anything for ages and wondered what you may think of this verse.

Hip Hip Hurrah  (E) A Celebration Of This Great Festival #2346937 by willy

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 Genre(s):  Philosophy • Psychology • Emotional
 Type:  Poetry
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Poetry: is it clear, relatable, meaningful, universal, memorable? Or trite, cliched, predictable? Any feedback welcome!

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Dual Duel  (ASR) Facing down demons, rising above quicksand, overcoming obstacles and improving my outlook #2346826 by Amethyst Angel

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