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![]() ![]() ![]() A SHORT story I’m just a sucky writer wanting some critiques
![]() posted: Jul 26, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() An emotional piece for me. Rated XGC, and may not be something you would enjoy reading. It offers a small glimpse into my past
![]() posted: Jul 26, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Short story, less than 500 words
![]() posted: Jul 25, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Looking for critiques on how I can improve my writing and storytelling.
![]() posted: Jul 24, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Please review my short story and give me some feedback. Thank you so much!
![]() posted: Jul 21, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() I thought I'd try ' Poetry.' Let me know what you think, for a first. I'm interested in all of it - - what you like, and what you really don't like about it. Thanks In Advanced...
![]() posted: Jul 19, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() This is a Rough Draft. I'm wondering what your general impressions are..
![]() posted: Jul 14, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Jacob extended his arms towards the echoing object, which seemed to be within reach, but he was unable to touch it. His eyes were riveted on his arms, which stretched upwards against the wall. A shiver went down his spine as he noticed how filthy he was.
![]() posted: Jul 12, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() This is the first 2 chapters of my novel. Looking for any constructive comments good or bad. Thank you
![]() posted: Jul 7, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() This oldy turns out to be a paranormal romance with an HEA. I applied a great polish of craft to update this, snipping words and shorting paragraphs. Still hefty at 9200, worth 4000 gp at the outset, yet well worth the time.
![]() posted: Jul 2, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Started writing a memoir about my journey to achieving my dreams. It's still rough and this is only 1 segment of it. I want to flesh it out, put it chronologically, at some point. But as a late night musing...I'm wondering if it's any good.
![]() posted: Jul 1, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Worth your time:)№##№####################
![]() posted: Jul 1, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() These stories are my first attempt at a fantasy series. I know that they are both long but would love to hear what you think. Blessings and thank you - Moonie
![]() posted: Jul 1, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() This is a short story illustrating a study in characterization. A review would certainly be appreciated.
![]() posted: Jun 30, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() "I would appreciate an honest review of my story. Your opinion is very important to me, and knowing what you think will help me improve."
![]() posted: Jun 23, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Sigrun has grown fully into a paladin, then traded her divine guidance to help an innocent. Now, unable to tell good from evil and uncertain of her own heart, she is guided by her own devil to a town beset by a powerful ghost with a familiar name.
![]() posted: Jun 20, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Paranormal short story. The story is a bit offbeat, so keep an open mind. Thanks. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks.
![]() posted: Jun 16, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Kaszime was the newest Protector at Food Feast. Braak was asked to help her for the first few days there. That was her first day, and it had a little bit of everything they had a problem with. Most of it was food-related, but not all of it.
![]() posted: Jun 14, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() The first sizeable story that I've actually published would love an honest review. I specifically would like notes on the pacing and tone and your thoughts on how to improve both.
![]() posted: Jun 13, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() It is said that the old man Hoffman's house is haunted, but Lucas doesn't let that stop him from exploring the place. Looking for opinions on plot, dialogue, flow, mood, and whatever catches your eye enough to make a comment about.
![]() posted: Jun 6, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() The first two chapters in an epic fantasy novel. Bit of a slower starter, but I've tried to pack it full of atmosphere and mystery. Does it still entertain? How immersed and invested were you?
![]() posted: Jun 3, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() The latest draft of my manuscript. It has gone through many revisions and edits based on the great feedback I've received here, as well as from other sources. Did I finally get it right? Thanks in advance! Roy
![]() posted: May 27, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() I wrote a short story. It has a dragon in it. Let me know how I did. All feedback welcome and super appreciated!
![]() posted: May 23, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() A scary story. Please review and analyse the storyline and how I can improve it (somehow)?
![]() posted: May 23, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() I wrote this and I would like some analysis on the humour and the storyline, since it's supposed to be a comedic short I wrote!
![]() posted: May 23, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Super nervous about this! I've wanted to write it for years, but it's such a delicate subject. Does it work within the word count? Is it impactful, respectful, understandable, trite, predictable? Just in time for Pride. Any feedback greatly appreciated.
![]() posted: May 23, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() I would appreciate it if you reviewed this piece. I was trying to go for an epic that left someone thinking about it for a while afterwards. Hope it's up to standards.
![]() posted: May 15, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() A fun poem about my love for guinea pigs. Did I get the punctuation right?
![]() posted: May 13, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Haven't been on here for a while, coming back with a stream-of-consciousness prose poem. Any reviews appreciated! Thank you
![]() posted: Apr 29, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Would love to have readers come and add a line to this crazy interactive story idea and see what kind of story we end up with and the fun we have along the way!
![]() posted: Apr 23, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanted to share this piece.
![]() posted: Apr 16, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Something terrible has happened to two of their friends, and it looks like one of the others is responsible for it. At least that’s what Detectives James Wynn and Kristie Eddison think. Now all they need to do is figure out who has done it.
![]() posted: Apr 14, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to hear your thoughts on this.
![]() posted: Apr 11, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Wile E. Coyote fires Acme and files suit
![]() posted: Apr 11, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() I mainly write poetry but I would like to see what the people think of my Articles. So here is one about the connection of love in a general sense.
![]() posted: Apr 5, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() This is the first part of a series. Please tell me what I need to improve in terms of plot, character development and description. Please tell me what I need to add or cut out. Also, please tell me what you liked and didn't like. Thank you!
![]() posted: Apr 3, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there! Just looking for feedback. Happy to exchange a review of your item of comparable length. Thank you!!!
![]() posted: Mar 31, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Please review
![]() posted: Mar 26, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() This is my first real attempt at poetry. It is based upon the Band of Brothers mini-series. Honest critique appreciated.
![]() posted: Mar 23, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() I'm looking for reviews on this short story. Thank you.
![]() posted: Mar 23, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Ode To Oscar: Chapter 1
![]() posted: Feb 27, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() A short poem that I wrote about the garden and how it's alive.
![]() posted: Feb 21, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Would love some reviews of my first Horror book. It is now available on Kindle and Paperback from Amazon. If you have Kindle Unlimited you can get it for free! http://tinyurl.com/23xtm7dz Appreciate any time anybody spends reading my work. Thanks all!
![]() posted: Feb 19, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() First act and first half of second act on novella about a depressed author struggling to complete his novel in just one night. Story within a story: Hero's journey in Julius Caesar's Rome. I am interested in engagement and any structural insights,
![]() posted: Feb 19, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Short story about 2 ice skaters - one is American and one is Russian.
![]() posted: Feb 8, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() This is the finished manuscript of "The Monster Inside The Bottle," I plan on editing it some more before publishing it in the near future, so please read it thoroughly and critique it well.
![]() posted: Feb 5, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() A banker gets in over his head with a gang. This feels like the summary of a cheap movie… written for Gaby’s Midnight Travelers contest. Any thoughts/criticisms are appreciated
![]() posted: Feb 1, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() After a few minor alterations.
![]() posted: Jan 14, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() Even in the darkest of times, there is always the potential for redemption.
![]() posted: Jan 12, 2024 ![]() ![]() ![]() "From this day on, the Salty Siren sails under a new banner."
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