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Review by Addison
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great read and awesome writing. The content is even better!

Love always,

Silent No More ;)
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Review of When I was young  
Review by Addison
Rated: E | (5.0)
What we all would not give to be young again! Your poem brings this out perfectly. I love the way you have taken a childhood chant and some very deep meaning to the chant. Things did hurt a whole lot worse when we were young. Remember how you could walk across gravel back then and pay no attention to the pain? As an adult can you do this? I know I cannot. When I try, my mind is completely focused on the pain. Maybe as we grow older, we lose our resilence? Another idea from my "sticks and stones" days, I was young and carefree. I could enjoy the small things in life. That too, is harder to do these days than back then.

Nice job!!
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Review by Addison
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Reminds me of Sylvia Plath! Nice!!
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Review by Addison
Rated: E | (5.0)
Tell me what to do and I will do it! God bless you and God bless Ms. Libby!
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Review by Addison
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love, love, love this! How do I join?
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Review by Addison
Rated: E | (3.0)
I think your idea behind the poem is wonderful. If I am following you correctly, make the shift between the seasons and love more visible.
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Review by Addison
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good job!! You are exactly right too. Our children and our grandchildren will suffer the consequences of our inactions for years to come.
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Review of DRIP...  
Review by Addison
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your words are calming in a way but the meaning behind them are now. Very well written!

Great job!
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Review by Addison
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good read! We never lose when we give it is an immeasurable healing. I see lots of spiritual development going on here. Leading by example leads others like us to do the same. Good read, my friend.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review by Addison
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Extremely interesting fan fiction! A first time for me but you have me hooked for sure! I loved the Introduction. It was engaging and I had to read more. I had to read even more after that! Definitely going to read further this is getting interesting!

Nice job! I had to read more.... You had me at hello. *BigSmile*
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Review of The City  
Review by Addison
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! I thought you were telling the story of my life but actually, you just gave me the answer. That was good, real good!
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Review of Stolen Emotion  
Review by Addison
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great job, Rebecca! I felt every word. Perfect!
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Review by Addison
Rated: E | (5.0)
Have you given it to him yet? He will love it! What a nice idea to give to a friend. Wonderful job and flowed smoothly. Sounds to me like the both of you have a very good friend in each other.
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Review by Addison
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great job whippet man! No, I do not believe our eyes know all there is to see. Good line there.

Great job! Keep on keeping on!

PS: I no longer do whippets either.
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Review by Addison
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sunflowers are my favorite! You did a wonderful job describing the flowers relationship with the sun. The only thing I see that is incorrect - I think? Is humankind supposed to be capitalized or should their be a period after the word inspire?

Beautiful job!
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Review by Addison
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It sounds like a Great Takeaway for your first session. Welcome to the best journey you will ever take in your lifetime. My name on here is Addison but my real name is Nicole and I’m just like you. I think in the beginning for me it surprised me Do you got here is a message from. It was usually someone that you least expect it or someone said I didn’t think that I would like to will. He uses us all. I don’t know you but I love you because we are the same. Stay vigilant.
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Review of Never  
Review by Addison
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think it would make a great country song. You can almost hear the beat. I thought the 3rd paragraph was not flowing until I was at the end of it and you tied that up quite nicely!

Good job, my friend.
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