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Review of The Visitor  
Review by DanielTotum
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Really enjoyed this, "Bob scrambled like loose change," is worth the 1000 points on its own.

Thanks for the interesting read.
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Review of The Village  
Review by DanielTotum
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excelllent stuff.

Like you said very twilight zone-esque, a bizarre situation with no need for explanation. It was also well structured for the word-count, you used every sentence well with no waste or superflous information.

Thanks for sharing.
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Review of The Dream  
Review by DanielTotum
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Gotta say bud that was absolutely fantastic.

Using the dreams to describe your protagonist whilst simultaneously setting the scene was an inventive choice. It does the necessary job of exposition whilst keeping interest.

Also loved the ending, I wasn't sure where the visions of his wife were going but bringing them in to tie up loose threads whilst also giving the story a twist of vengeance was gratifying.

Your style is similar to mine if a little more accomplished and I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

Would love to know your thoughts on some of my work.

Best.
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