You are right about one thing, Monalisa Vandercox. Trust isn't something to be taken lightly and there are times when I can be a bad thing that leads you to your downfall. Trust must be earned and not taken for granted, that's how people know they are making the right choice when it comes to who they choose as a friend. Well done with your imagery of the spider web, by the way.
Looking over your poetry here, Tim Chiu, I really like the direction you're taking with it. It sounds like an inspirational speech that's meant to encourage someone to consider their job as more than just work. I like how it sounds like a job is meant to do more than just give you the experience you need, but it also says that it's work some hard work and labor. You did very well with your poetry and even delivered a good message about the value of pushing forward no matter what it takes. Well done!
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