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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dream on, Borb! I like your use of verbs to connote action...laundry twirling and tumbling. You decsribe an avid reader's lust for a book so engaging that you cough up more quarters for the dryer. Of course the fibers remain intact! Thoroughly enjoyable stream of consciousness fantasy.
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