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Review of Breaking Out  
Review by Eternal bliss
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very heart touching words!! These feelings remind me of my own past struggles in my life!! I love your poem really dear!! It is relevant to my own story!! Splendid!! My dear!!


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Review of Love Is...  
Review by Eternal bliss
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very well said in a precise and wonderful way
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Review of Loneliness  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice and precise


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Review by Eternal bliss
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is my personal opinion though, but I feel the poem was written pretty well. It had a sweet way to express the feeling of bliss on having First Love. But I think the last stanza describing the death of some friend, was quite hazy because it did not make a clear idea of which love the poet is talking about. Is it the first love or some other one whom he loved again but she died quite early? Also, in the last stanza, end of what has been discussed is not very clear. Otherwise, the poem is very beautiful
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