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Review of Our World  
Review by informal
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi,
"Sometimes we laugh by remembering the days we cried, and we cry by remembering the days that we laughed"
that's the world.
nice work . Things you contrasted is well written.
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Review by informal
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The person who had success is also the person who was mocked, ridiculed and felt hopeless at some point.
your every line is motivational and help enough to hold the rage which will fuel our desire.
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Review of The Terrible Gift  
Review by informal
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
hello,
I love the way how you contrasted the preceding statement by very next following statement. But I am unable to guess what will be a terrible gift that is gifted by a grand mother to her grand daughter.


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Review by informal
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Adira,
I stumbled across your story by newbie feature. I must admit I am not good at checking grammar mistakes. I admired how you featured the house neither lengthy nor short. I must talk about title "The Forbidden Secrets" but I didn't find any secrets. I think this is just starting piece of your book. I must wait to read until you bid your "forbidden secrets" on portfolio D:


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Review of Noticing Newbies  
Review by informal
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
hello guys,
I am writing a new thriller/suspense genre book. But I want some suggestion . please do read and review "A morning nightmare".
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Review by informal
Rated: E | (3.0)
hello,
I was still sitting alone
after 20 years being divorced
after reading this line i thought protagonist is being divorced continuously from 20 years
correct me if am wrong
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Review by informal
Rated: E | (3.0)
hi,
'The thermometer's a fountain display!'.it doesn't sound grammatically correct correct me if i am wrong.
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