Hi,
"Sometimes we laugh by remembering the days we cried, and we cry by remembering the days that we laughed"
that's the world.
nice work . Things you contrasted is well written.
The person who had success is also the person who was mocked, ridiculed and felt hopeless at some point.
your every line is motivational and help enough to hold the rage which will fuel our desire.
hello,
I love the way how you contrasted the preceding statement by very next following statement. But I am unable to guess what will be a terrible gift that is gifted by a grand mother to her grand daughter.
Hi Adira,
I stumbled across your story by newbie feature. I must admit I am not good at checking grammar mistakes. I admired how you featured the house neither lengthy nor short. I must talk about title "The Forbidden Secrets" but I didn't find any secrets. I think this is just starting piece of your book. I must wait to read until you bid your "forbidden secrets" on portfolio D:
hello,
I was still sitting alone
after 20 years being divorced
after reading this line i thought protagonist is being divorced continuously from 20 years
correct me if am wrong
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