I love the way how you contrasted the preceding statement by very next following statement. But I am unable to guess what will be a terrible gift that is gifted by a grand mother to her grand daughter.
I stumbled across your story by newbie feature. I must admit I am not good at checking grammar mistakes. I admired how you featured the house neither lengthy nor short. I must talk about title "The Forbidden Secrets" but I didn't find any secrets. I think this is just starting piece of your book. I must wait to read until you bid your "forbidden secrets" on portfolio D: