Private Detective Morgan stared at the barely open window when she heard the rain start, just like the weather forecast predicted. The soft, soothing sound of the rain knocking on the window calmed her mind from all troubles and fears. She listened with her eyes closed and felt the weight of her body sink into her old office chair she got years ago at a cheap garage sale. When she awoke from her trance, she saw on the clock -- that was hanging on the wall directly in front of her -- that 2 hours had passed.
Just a hobbyist, trying to practice writing in order for me to do this as a full-time job. Would love some feedback!
Tried to leave out as much 'a', 'an' and 'the' words as possible, but not sure if I succeeded in keeping it to a minimum.
I like this one. It resonates with me, because I'm a pluviophile like me.