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Rated: E · Short Story · Death · #2355274

Getting a message from Dad

When the locksmith handed Daniel the small brass key, it felt heavier than it should have.

“It’s the only copy left,” the locksmith said. “You sure you want to do this today?”

Daniel nodded. He had put it off long enough.

Maple Street looked smaller than he remembered. The houses hadn’t shrunk. He had just grown into a man who knew what things cost. The cracked sidewalks. The hedges trimmed unevenly. The sag in the old porch roof. It all looked tired.

Number 14 sat at the end of the block. Pale blue once. Now mostly gray.

He stood in front of it for a full minute before trying the key.

The door opened with a slow groan, like the house had been waiting to exhale.

Dust carried the faint smell of wood and time. The furniture was gone. The walls were bare. Only a square shadow on the living room wall showed where the old clock had once hung. The one his father wound every Sunday night without fail.

Daniel stepped inside.

His footsteps echoed. That bothered him. This house had never been quiet when he was a boy. His mother hummed while she cooked. His father cleared his throat before speaking, like every sentence needed preparation. The refrigerator buzzed. The pipes knocked. Life filled the cracks.

Now it was hollow.

He walked to the kitchen and rested his hand on the counter. He could almost see himself at ten years old, swinging his legs from a chair, listening to his parents argue in low voices they thought he couldn’t hear.

The house had held more than furniture. It had held pressure. Expectations. Silence that lasted days.

When his father died, Daniel had not cried at the funeral. He had felt relief first. That truth had shamed him for years.

He moved down the hallway toward his old bedroom.

The door still stuck halfway open. He pushed it with his shoulder like he used to. Inside, the carpet was worn where his desk had been. He knelt and ran his fingers across the fibers.

He had left at eighteen and promised himself he would never come back.

But he had come back today for one reason.

In the back of the closet, nailed near the baseboard, was a small wooden box. His father had built it. Said it was for “important things.”

Daniel pried it loose.

Inside was a folded letter.

His name was written on it in careful handwriting.

He sat on the dusty floor before opening it.

Daniel,

If you are reading this, it means I did not say the things I meant to say. I was not raised to speak softly. I was raised to correct and command. I see now that I confused control with guidance.

You were never a disappointment.

I just did not know how to say I was afraid. Afraid you would fail. Afraid you would leave. Afraid I would not matter.

I mattered less by holding too tight.

If you have built a life that feels like yours, then you have already done better than I did.

I am proud of you.

Dad

Daniel read it twice.

The house did not feel hollow anymore.

It felt finished.

He folded the letter carefully and placed it in his jacket pocket. Then he stood up and looked around the room one last time.

He did not need to carry the weight of the walls with him.

Back in the living room, he walked to the front door. Sunlight spilled across the floorboards. For the first time, it did not look like something fading. It looked like something beginning.

Outside, he locked the door.

The key rested in his palm.

He walked to the curb where a small trash bin sat waiting for pickup. He dropped the key inside.

Metal hit plastic with a sharp final sound.

The house behind him was no longer an open question.

It was a closed chapter.

Daniel did not look back as he walked down Maple Street. Not because he was running from it.

Because he was finished with it.

And for the first time in years, that felt like freedom.
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