Hello eryan,
I just finished your very short piece. It was called SPRING. There is not a whole lot I can review but I will try. There was a picture in this piece about it being springtime. I do have a question. What does water you mean? Are you talking about the buds? I hope that I am right in assuming that. If so, it makes sense and goodsense at that. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello StarNights,
I just finished reading your piece of THIS IS NOT THE PROMISE LAND. It was a heart wrencher. it was a sad piece. It was a good read. You have done an excellent job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. As said before it was a very good read. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Everlast,
I just finished reading your piece of EVERLONG. It was a good read. There was romance in the piece. You have done an excellent job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Dear Inkheart,
I just finished reading your piece of SISTERS. It was a great story/poem. it is so true for I have a sister who isn't my sister biologically but she is still my sister and one that has stuck with me through thick and thin. I know you are talking about your own sisters and what they mean to you. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Skandragon,
We meet again and so soon. I just finished reading your piece of THE ROOM. It was a good poem. There were pictures to be seen within the piece. You made it so clear that I was able to see those pictures. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Melissa,
I just finished reading your piece of SAY WHAT YOU MEAN. it made perfect sense. I guess I have been like you were years before in not saying exactly what I wanted. But that too has changed for me. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Blam!,
I just finished reading your piece of DESTINATION. iT WAS A GOOD READ. So, your desination was the school house. It is a wonder that you were filled with butterflies though going there. I would have jumped at the privilege of going to school. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Vanessa,
I just finished reading your piece of ADVENTURES KEEP IN SECRET. It was a sad and good read. I beieve you are telling the readers that she, the little girl, drowned. That there wasn't a chance of her being saved. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello JoAnn,
I see we meet again. I just finished reading your piece of TEARS OF THE INNOCENT. It was a sad but good read. So many children cry their little hearts out for being hungry or some other reason. Their pain is real and it shows on their faces. I just hope that there is an answer somewhere out there to help those who need it. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Phatt Kidd,
I just finished reading your piece of TO DREAM. It was a scary one. Zombies after you. This was a first of me reading something like this. I liked it though. You used some strong language. However, it fitted the story which didnt' matter that much. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Rick,
I just finished reading your piece of MUST BE HEARD. It was a good and sad read. Why sad? Because of the way you were treated by the people who could have taken care of you. it is sad because your wife left you for another who was in jail and abused her. I thought that the VA was a lot better than that. I was mistaken. I hope this finds you well. And al lthe best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello JoAnn,
I just finished reading your piece of HAPPY FATHER'S DAY. It was a good tribute to him. It is a shame that you wouldn't be able to spend the day together. However, that is none of my concern. I just know that you have a lot of love for your dad and it shows well. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello JoAnn,
We meet again and so soon. I just finished reading your great tribute to your mother. It was beautiful. There is every reason to be proud of your mother for who she was. I am sure that you already know that. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!!
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Hello JoAnn,
I just finished reading your piece of EIGHTEEN IN EVERY WAY. It was a good read. I enjoyed it very much. There were pictures to be seen through your words. And you used a good choice of words. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Frankie,
I just finished reading your piece of APRIL. It was a good read. Though i didn't see any punctuation in the whole piece, I got what you were saying. You were talking about love and the joys of it. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello The Robe,
I just finished reading your piece of HAPPINESS. It was a good read and one that I can agree. Love is something that is fleeting and it is something that many of us want in our lives but can't have. It is there for time and then it is gone again like the rushing of the seashore. I have to agree with that. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Girlie2010,
I just finished reading your piece of BEEP! It was a good read and one that I can identify. There are beeps for everything under the sun these days it seems. Beep for the message and the other things that come along with that. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello NIxx,
I just finished reading your piece of IN LOVE ALONE. At first, I didn't understand what you were saying but it got clearer as I went along and read more. You have hit the nail on the head. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello skandragon,
I just finished reading your piece of THE CHOICE. It was gruesome and a good read. It seems like you wanted to die. That you wanted to forget it all and just give up. I am glad that this was just a piece and not the real thing. I hope you are doing well. And that this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello 10 by 15,
I just finished reading your piece of SITTING AND WAITING. I think it was a good piece and one that was very lifelike. In that you wrote in your journal and you told us about your entry. I liked the part where you mentioned about the boy passing by. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Brian,
I just finished reading your piece of DESTINY. It was a good poem. It was furthermore a good read. One doesnt' understand what tomorrow holds for them as you said. I liked what you said about yesterday being gone and today is here. That was a good line. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Mo Mo the Writer,
I just finished reading your piece of THE SWIMMER. It was a great read. I was there in person it seemed. Watching you swim and the forcefulness of your lungs wanting air. It seemed i could see it happening. I don't think i would change a thing. It is just perfect the way it is. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Booklover17,
I just finished reading your piece of THE BIRD. It was a good read. There were pictures to be seen within the words you used. it seemed that it was a healthy bird and one that sang. There is always something special in a bird that sings. I hope this finds you well. And allthe best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello LoneWolf,
I liked the picture of the wolf. It was a beautiful piece of work. I am glad that someone did this for you. I liked the sig very very much. it is so peaceful looking. I believe in wolves and their powers to have over humans. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
Hello Quil,
I just finished reading your piece of THE SEASONS OF LIFE. It was a beautiful read. For you went through the seasons of time beginning with Winter and ending withthe same thing. Not only did you do that but you used a child that was born in that time and grew up to be a woman. Then the mother of another child. i hope this finds you well.
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