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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Curtis,
I just finished reading your piece of CYCLING IN HEAVY RAIN. It was a good nature poem. Imagine the otters being there and the mother of the ottters being seen first. What a beautiful picture this was. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of No Ordinary Day  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Shelley,
I just finished reading your piece of NO ORDINARY DAY. It certainly was not an ordinary day to you all was it? Alot of things happened that could have taken Larry away from you. however, he didn't let it. He was strong and strong willed that he was going to fight and did valiently. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to the both of you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Forever Fallen,
I just finished reading your piece of SCREAMS OF THE DEAD. it was a good read. It was almost like a song. There were the verses and the chorus. The chorus was repeated at the end of the piece. It was a good song/piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of Peek Through  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jo. S,,
I just finished reading your piece of PEEK THROUGH. it was a good read. You did an excellent job. Dreams are one thing but when they come true they are realizations and become real so that there is no more dreaming. I have to agree with that. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Grey Place  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Snuggle,
I just finished reading your piece of THE GREY PLACE. It was a good read and one that was certainly captivating. So, the man was on the moon. How could he breathe? How was this possible? I would like to know more about this piece. Like having a second part to it. I hope t his finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Push  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Angelus,
We meet again and I am so glad. I just finished reading your piece of PUSH. it was a good read. There wrre some mistakes in the piece but it didnt' distract from the reading all that much. You are a motivator for sure. You motivated me to keep on pushing and going on. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Dark wood halls  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello shygirl,
I just finished reading your piece of DARK WOOD HALLS. It was meant to be scary and it was. I am glad to say that ti didnt' actually happen. However, it sure seemed like it did. It was a scary story as I said before. You did a good job of scaring me. Anyway I hope that this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!![image:1644262}.
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Review of Our Garden  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello enpsychopedia,
I just finished reading your piece of OUR GARDEN. it was a sad but good read. The woman was dying with Cancer. She was a strong figher up until the very end. It made you want to cry for the lady. The man she was leaving behind was duly to take care of the garden. I think he did. Accoriding to the piece anyway. You made a believer out of me. I believed your story. That is the sign of a good writer to make your readers to believe. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Watch  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello lunalitsol,
I just finished reading your piece of WATCH. It was a good read. There pictures to be seen within the piece. One of the girls all chattering and the other was when the girl looking at Gabriel was almost foaming at the mouth. It seemed so anyway. your last sentence was the one that got me. He watched her go. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello tinalove,
I just finished reading your piece. Your piece entitled SHE'S ONLY SLEEPING. It was a sad read but a good one. There pictured in the piece was that of a young girl. She was lifeless and had no life within her. I hope I am getting this right. It is a sad piece a s I said before. I hope t his finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Dye you Red  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Nana,
We meet again and so soon. I just finished reading your piece of DYE YOU RED. it was a srong piece. it was a good read. The words were really strong. It seems that the person with whom they were talking to was rich and held unto it with both hands. She or he didn't care about anyone else. That they had arrived. Well, there was the character and he was going to dye her red. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of I Found You  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Adie,
I just finished reading your piece of I FOUND YOU. It was a good read. Your character was lost in the moment. He was loving the person he was with. There were so many things about them. You said he became a part of her. That was a good part. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Bunni,
I just finished reading your piece of MY LIFE AS A VAMPIRE. It was a short read but a good one. There were many words that were mispelled. But it didnt' distract away from the story too much. You may want to edit the piece again and get the words right. in instance, entoxicating is the right way to spell the word. Declared is the way to spell declare. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Mr. David,
I just finished reading your piece of A FOOL IF YOU THINK I CAN CHANGE. You had some mighty strong words to say in this piece. You had made up your mind already and it wasnt' any good to change how you felt. You said at the last that the person was a fool if they thoght they could make you change. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Adie,
I just finished reading your piece of FIVE SECONDS TO LIVE. I didn't see where the subject matter had anything to do with the title. I must have missed something in this read. It was a good read. I found no mistakes in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello AutumnAbey,
I just finished reading your piece of SEEN THROUGH A WINDOW. I felt sad toward the end. Malory was a great lady in my eyes. She was a nurse and a care giver. Though she had Cancer it was a sad commentary for her passing away. i hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline1!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Morning Thinking  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello hopeful,
I just finshed reading your piece of MORNING THINKING. It was a good read. Some would say that ti is boring but then again who are we to judge? I think your monring time is great. You get up and do the things you usually do and have a good time doing those things. I wouldn't say that your morning is boring at all. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of Horizon  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Angelus,
I just finished reading your piece of HORIZON. It was a good read. There were no misakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. So it is about dying? How many times have you died before! I wonder. If you would come back this time. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Scholar,
I just finished reading your piece of INTRODUCTION TO THE TRUTH. It was a long read but a good one. I read it all the way through and was enthralled with it. It kept me on the edge of the my chair. Quimberly was someting else for sure. Jared was sent after the truth. I liked how you did this piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Mary's Fourth  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Barlock,
I just finished reading your piece of MARY'S FOURTH. It was some story. it was a good read. You could see Bill digging and digging to get to the coffin. Then you could see the way he went about prying the lid opened. The scary part was the fourth child was behind him. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Rain Drops  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Beebs
I just finished reading your piece of RAIN DROPS. It was a good read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done an excellent job. Raindrops like tears fall from the sky and your face. Hitting the floor and the window sill. You described this all so beautifully. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Inbox  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Amjjetton,
I just finished reading your piece of INBOX. It was a sad piece but a good read. There were pictures within the piece that you could see. Like you telling her of your short comings and how you had hoped that she would remain with you. it was a dark picture in the end. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. Beeline!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello gothicwrite,
I just finished reading your piece of ONCE A TRAITOR ALWAYS A TRAITOR. It was a sad piece but a good read. How dare he do that to her! Asking Kara out for a Saturday was bad enough instead of it being in front of Jade. you made a believer out of me and that is the signf of a good writer. Keep on writing. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. cubby for Beeliine!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Oh to believe  
Review by Beeline
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Suu,
I didn't know this piece was yours but so glad it is. As usual you did a good job. Everyone needs a hero. And it seems that you have found yours in this piece. They must be loyal and honest,and true as you said. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of A Gift for Pop  
Review by Beeline
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Mia,
I just finished reading your piece of A GIFT FOR POP. It was a great read. I was following right on through the whole thing until you wrote the prayer in German. That is where you lost me. i am a person who doesnt' speak German at all. Nor do I understand the language. But it was nice that your Grandfather knew the words to the prayer. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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