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Review of ~~ME~~  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I can be playful,
games can be fun.
Never take this,
never treat Love like one."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, Nice work in this area!

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was truly a deep poem. I found this poem to express qualities of myself as well. I very much enjoyed the descriptions adn imagery of this poem. Nice work on the emotions portrayed! Great work on this overall! ^_^

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Review of The Plane  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "If I was that plane
I could travel the world
travel far away."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was very interesting. I enjoyed the imagery and descriptions of flying far away on an airplane, never knowing exactly where I am going or heading too. Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^

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Review of Big Kids  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Stop and look.
We’re no crusaders, not looking to forbid
We’re carefree
Easygoing yet essential
We are, simply, JUST BIG KIDS!"

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I found the thoughts provoking, and I would have to agree that deep inside we are all "big kids." Although age does count how many years we have been alive, should it define us? Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^

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Review of The Farewell  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Slowly she exhaled, tears flowing down her cheeks. It was over, the painful farewell had been said, now it was time for her to return up north to the land of her birth and await her destiny."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! I really enjoyed the imagery and descriptions that were presented in this amazing story! The beginning started out so suspenseful with her waiting. The ending was summed up well when they said a painful farewell. Nice work on this story overall! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Friendly as can be
Loves everyone she sees
Service dog to a tee
closes the door for me."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, Nice work in this area.

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was a cute little rhyme, and I found it to be very adorable. I liekd the imagery of how Bella was portrayed. Nice emotions presented as well. Great job on this poem overall! ^_^

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Review of An Old Age Sonnet  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Why when decreed at last we come of age
when there is less in front than there is passed,
do grasping hands pause to turn a sullen page
afraid the rising dawn will be the last?

Confounded eyes reflect hues of colour lost
bent ever downward to ponder weary feet,
shuffling a path through a reproachful mist;
a raging storm to sink a youthful fleet. "


Emotion: Nice emotion!

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work!

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I have broken up part of this poem into stanzas in the imagery category for you. Otherwise, the sentiment and emotion in this poem was lovely. I especially enjoyed the descriptions, and the wording as it was lovely. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review of Harvey's Hill  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Maggie saw it first -
the dented Ford with
broken springs-"


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Punctuation is inconsistent. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was quite an interesting poem, and I found the concept to unique as well.The imagery was clear, so that I could picture the girl and the boy. Although, I would have liked more descriptions of Harvey's hill. Otherwise, nice work on this poem! ^_^

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Review of The WISHING WELL  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Wishes are not free,

the truth is so bold."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area!

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! You may wish toi break this poem into stanzas, maybe every four lines or so? The imagery and descriptions were very sweet and beautiful. I especially liked the sentiment in this poem. Nice work on this poem! ^_^

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Rented tables and chairs were moved and dancing was in front of a roaring fire pit. People danced for fun and to keep warm.

In the wee hours of the morning the newlyweds, with stardust in their eyes, boarded a plane for Hawaii."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was a sweet and romanitc tale. I was happy to find out that they eventually got married. The imagery and descriptions were lovely. Nice work on this story overall! ^_^

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Review of Beethoven Speaks  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: " Birthing sonatas by moonlight
to usher in the night,
scrawling symphonies by sunrise
to resurrect the dawn."



Emotion: Nice emotion!

Grammar and Spelling: The grammar needed some work. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was simply lovely and I found the words to flow even though there was no clear rhythm. Amazing job on this glorious piece and tribute to a true musician. I especially enjoyed the imagery and descriptions which you presented. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

Emotion: Does not apply

Grammar and Spelling: Does not apply

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this picture! This illustration was very beautiful. I especially liked the pictures portrayed in the background. Nice work on this picture! ^_^

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Review of Distance  
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "However frightened I may be
I have to speak in honesty,
To say without apology,
I love you more than anyone (could?) anything."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: There was a little word confusion in one sentence. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed these lyrics! This song was beautiful. It sounds like you have someone in your life who you really love. To have that is something special. I give you my warmest blessings. Nice work on these lyrics! Great job overall! ^_^

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Review of Halloween Meeting  
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "And when the hours have finally come and passed and the sun is rising, he can feel himself start to fade. With one last salute and promise of next year, and the year after that, he fades away."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: I have fixed the imagery category for you. There were some grammatical errors. Otherwise, nice work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! I also celebrate El Dia de Muerta, so I found this story to be quite fascinating! Although there were some grammatical errors, it did not take away from this piece. Again, you had amazing imagery and descriptions strewn throughout this story!

One example is:"Make-up covers her arms, neck and face in vibrant hues of pinks, greens, and gray. They form the shape of flowers around "her" eyes with another flower surrounded by swirls and dots on "her" chin, cheeks, and arms. Somply beautiful lines! I could not get over the imagery as I read this piece. I could imagine every single word in my head. Nice work on this story overall! ^_^

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Review of Live Agelessly  
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Be frugal, be daring, even start your own business
Don't worry,be happy,pray continually
Think positive,exercise,stay healthy,live agelessly."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Good work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem truly spoke truth. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. Nice imagery and descriptions, and the last two words is what got me the most: "live agelessly." Nice work on the emotion in this poem too! Nice job on this poem overall! ^_^

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Review of A Yellow Rose  
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "
I now understand
Why God took you away
He needed an angel
To brighten up his day."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was a beautiful poem and I give my deepest condolences for your loss. My blessings go out to you and your family. The rhyme and the flow were amazing! Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^

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Review of Let Me See  
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Lost in my desperation,
I'm not sure what to do.
It seems that You've broken Your promises,
And Your Word "has" become untrue."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: I found one spelling error. Nice work on the grammar. ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was lovely, and I could relate to what you were saying. There are times when I wish for God to be near, and feel that he is not always there. Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^

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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Some grammatical errors. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this interactive! This was quite interesting. I also liked the concept; very unique. Nice work on this interactive overall! ^_^

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Review of The Light  
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I am the light
A blessing for all time
A refreshing sight
For those who see me shine."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, Nice work in this area!

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was well-written and it reminded me of the Lord. In darkness, you shall see his light. I found the sentiment of this poem to be very sweet. Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^

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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Mother named me Joel at birth.
I was one of six and not the first.
One tormented girl and five rowdy boys,
you could imagine all my parents' joys."

Emotion:
Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I found the rhyming and the flow of this poem to be so lovely. This poem was well-written and well-thought out. I also found the last stanza to be the most interesting part of the poem. This was quite an entertaining read. Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^

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Review of My sig  
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

Emotion: Does not apply

Grammar and Spelling: Does not apply

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this sig! Nice signature and the Santa hat is quite entertaining! I like how the picture looks like it almost sparkles!

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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Mom covered in snow got cold as ice,
cuddling Maisey warmed her up nice.
A mug of hot cocoa and love,
is nicer even than the snow above."


Emotion: Nice emotion!

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was quite entertaining and I found the ending to be so well-written. I could feel the emotions fly opff the page as I read. This poem reminded me of a beautiful Winter's day. Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^

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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I thought your silence would be empty
But I keep hearing you in tacit measures that
Pulse to a beat set in long movements before."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! The imagery and descriptions you presented were so beautiful! The last stanza was the most lovely part of the whole poem, in my opinion. Also, I enjoyed the wordplay you incorporated into this poem. Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^

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Review of The Unfair Light  
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "My life was just as meaningless as it was designed to be. But, sky demon you to have no greater purpose than I. Mine at least attempts something noble. Yours seems to only serve yourself."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This story had such a twist at the ending, and I enjoyed the last sentence the most. "What remained was only ash, no more." This sentence summed up the ending perfectly. This story was well-written and well-thought out. Nice work on this story overall! ^_^


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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please take note these are only suggestions and opinions.

Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "While everyone was safe in bed
out "the" window I gladly fled
If you've not ventured
Nothing lost
You will never be storm-tossed."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: I added in a word in the imagery category. Inconsistent punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work in this area! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was quite an entertaining poem! I could almost feel the storm of june swiftly approaching as I read this. It brought me back to days when the breeze would ruffle my hair, and the rain would drench my clothes as I rushed to get inside. Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please take note these are only suggestions and opinions.

Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: " His flesh turns black and crumbles to dust, and the wind sweeps it up in a swirl of black specks. His sons look up, amazed."

Emotion: Nice emotion in this screenplay!

Grammar and Spelling: There were a couple of run-on sentences. Otherwise, nice work!

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this screenplay! The imagery and descriptions which you presented in the beginning were very well-constructed. I could not quite figure out where this was taking place; be it a different planet or plane, but it was very interesting. I also enjoyed the storyline, and would really like to see this performed! Nice work overall! ^_^

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