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Review of Bitter Tears  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Kristi, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Bitter Tears"  by Kristi

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Kristi, thank you for sharing this poem,
and teaching me about constanza. I like new challenges and gonna have to try this.

Well written, a good job with the rhyming pattern, as well as the overall poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: Your artistic voice can be heard in this beautiful yet sad poem.
I know it had to be challenging.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I can see with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi StephBee,I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Bubba's Corner BBQ"  by StephBee - House Targaryen

Clarity:A good title for this story.

Writing style:Comedy drama.

My favorite line:---“Well, Bubba’s Curve BBQ don’t make no sense now, does it?”---

Overall impressions:Well written story and contest entry. Nice use of the prompt.

Good characters with great dialog.

Written in a very realistic style. I like the use of the 63 Ford Falcon they were driving in.



StephBee, thank you for sharing this entertaining work, it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Tim Chiu, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "The Wrong Way - A Visionary Totality"  by Tim Chiu

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: Tim Chiu, thank you for sharing this unique poem. It is a good read.

A well written free verse poem with good descriptions and a calm flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:Nicely described poem. I picture politics a/k/a a dog and pony show.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I see with the spelling, grammar or mechanics.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

My impressions of: "Amid Heaven and Hell Chapter 1"  by Stam Kourz

Does the title describe the story? The title some-what describes this story.

What is the style? Spiritual fantasy drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Dark, Fantasy, Religious

Does the opening line grab my attention?The opening line could better grab my attention.

Is the structure good for the reader?A nice structure, however it would be better for the reader with line-spacing and maybe breaks between longer paragraphs.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:
Stam Kourz, thank you for sharing this powerful story. I have enjoyed reading it.

Well written story with good descriptions that help the reader to picture the scene.

Strong characters with good dialog. This helps to draw the reader into the story.

A good story-line and narrative.

If I had to make a suggestion:Consider a stronger opening line to grab the readers attention. Line-spacing and breaks would make the story less intimidating for a reader or browser.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Ravi Ranjan Goswami, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Examination Result"  by Ravi Ranjan Goswami

Clarity:A good title.

Writing style: Personal childrens drama.


Overall impressions: A well written story with a good structure.

Good description's of Raju and his feelings.

I'm glad Raji was happy in the end. So I guess the parents were examined earlier that week.


Ravi Ranjan Goswami, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider more action in the story to grab the readers attention.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Oops  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hi Beholden, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Oops"  by Beholden

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written, nicely structured, entertaining poem.

This is my favorite line.
--- see myself entrapped in age,
aware the body falls apart---


Artistic Voice and Imagery:Clean and cob-web free something just ain't right.
Great choice of words that give a nice flow to this poem.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems.

Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Werewolf, I came across this frightening poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "The Brides of Dracula"  by Werewolf

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Is this for real? The Brides of Dracula have risen. My heart is still beating fast from this alarming news.

Well done. This poem sounds realistic with a warning tone.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see brides with an aluring ethereal beauty roaming our world.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems.

Werewolf, thank you for sharing this haunting tale. This reader has enjoyed reading.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi ikiyasama,I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Kleenex Confessionals"  by ikiyasama- House Targaryen

Clarity:A nice title for this tale.

Writing style: Personal experience drama.


Overall impressions: Well written in a realistic tone that sounds as if a true story.
Many readers love true stories, as I do.

Sounds like we were raised similar in the old ways.

A good writing work, I know that writing true stories can be extremely hard to do.

ikiyasama, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider breaking some of the longer paragraphs into shorter ones, this will make it appear more appealing to a potential reader.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi jackiemuse, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Saturday Night WC 297"  by Jackiemuse

Clarity:Seems to be a good title.

Writing style:Personal drama.


Overall impressions: Well written story, especially considering it was written as a contest entry.

Written with a soft leisurely tone that works well for this unique story.

I like the way you ended this story with a bit of humor.

Jackiemuse, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Bex, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Pretending just a little bit "  by Bex

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:Nicely written poem in a unique style with repeating lines come together in this poem for a great unique flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:--- pretending just a little bit--- just enough to get the kick of it.---
These catchy lines work well and add to this poems tone.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: A great job no problems at all that I see.

Bex. thank you for sharing your work, it is a joy to read.
Write On!

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Review of Mama Bear  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
{{c:black}My impressions of:"Mama Bear"  by Temperance Stone

Clarity: The title works well for this delightful story.

Style:Personal experience drama.

Genera listing: Animal: by listing all three genres your work will be able to be found by readers looking for that genre. Giving your story more views.

My 2 cents is only One opinion:A well written and well described nature tale.

I like how you describe the mama bears thoughts.

Well-worded and told story with a calm easy going tone.

Do you really see this bear every Sunday?

Bears in the woods usually do not pay much attention to a humans, at least the few times that I have seen one in the mountains.

Temperance Stone, thank you for sharing this delightful story. It has brought back memories for me I have enjoyed reading it.



Suggestions: None

Write on! Keep Writing! God bless you!
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Review of Abandoned  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Presley Rhodes, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Abandoned "  by Presley Rhodes

Clarity: This title works for this story.

Writing style: personal biographical emotional drama.


Overall impressions: the emotion screams out from this strong writing.

Everyone experiences these type feelings at certain points through life's journey. I'm reminded of a poem.

Lord, give me the strength and wisdom
To change the things I can
To not dwell on the things I can't
And to know the difference.
Amen

Focus on tomorrow, make tomorrow better. One step at a time.

Presley Rhodes, this is a strong work. Try the opposite approach and write something to make someone laugh. Writing may be your gift.

Presley, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:

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Joseph
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Review of The Bet  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

My impressions of: "The Bet"  by Louis Williams

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this tale.

What is the style? Fantasy horror drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Horror/Scary, Comedy, Other

Does the opening line grab my attention? A good opening line that does get my attention.

Is the structure good for the reader?A good structured story that is easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Well told mystery with good descriptions. The reader is slowly pulled in.

---"The easiest two hundred bucks I've ever made," Steph with a tail wag.--- [I have a feeling it wont be that easy.]

Good well described characters with realistic dialog. This helps the reader to relate with the story.

A good job with the suspenseful descriptions that build up for the reader.

This story holds this readers attention well

The ending leaves the reader wanting to hear more.


If I had to make a suggestion:Consider experimenting with a more resolved ending or a cliffhanger.

Louis Williams, thank you for sharing this suspeseful story, it has made my heart beat faster. A good read.

Sharing your work is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of: "The Legend of Captain Six Pins"  by Detective

Does the title describe the story? The title does describe the story well.

What is the style? Legends of pirate treasures, children.

Are there 3 genre listings? Children's, Action/Adventure, Other

Does the opening line grab my attention?Yes the opening line does get my attention.

Is the structure good for the reader?Yes this is a good structure for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:

Detective, thank you for this delightful pirate tale.
Very entertaining, a good read.

Captain Six Pens sounds like an honorable pirate.

Well written story. A nice job with the descriptions they seem very kid friendly. Black skull Island and Red Roost trading Company both are good settings for a pirate adventure.

A great ending, this is probably a true story.

If I had to make a suggestion:None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review of At Folsom Prison  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Jaeff, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"At Folsom Prison"  by Jaeff KBtW of the Free Folk

Clarity:A good title for this review.

Writing style:Reviewing music personal.


Overall impressions:A well written and informative review of At Folsom Prison and Folson California. :)

I enjoyed hearing about Folsom California. I grew up near Mayberry so I can relate to your reference of out-of-towners and how they can get such a kick out of the town.

I never was a big fan when I was younger. Johnny Cash's music as his voice just grows on you through the years. He was a gifted musician with a distinct style.

A great job writing this informative work about Johnny Cash.

Jaeff, thank you for sharing this work I have truly enjoyed reading it.

Suggestions: None.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Love Necromancer  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi JCosmos, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Love Necromancer"  by JCocsmos

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A great use of the bolded prompt words, in my opinion.

I am going to look up Necromancer to satisfy my curiosity. -A wizard or magician- I have learned a new word.

---If circumstances changed….--- A great choice of words. I really like this entertaining poem.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:A good use of your artistic voice to portray this delightful story.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:Well done.

JCosmos, thank you for sharing this inspiring work. I have enjoyed reading this.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hi St. Francis II, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Delusion of a crimson fire"  by St. Francis II

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A unique rhyming pattern adds to this poems strong and original flow.

Well worded, this deep poem draws the reader in while holding his attention.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: Nicely done, an image of a pirates ship and crew is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I see with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics.

St. Francis II, thank you for sharing this strong work, it has my mind working.
A good read! Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Seuzz, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Monster of the Prophecy"  by Seuzz

Clarity:A good title for this tale.

Writing style:Fantasy horror drama.

My favorite line:--- "Every seventeenth year," he said, "on the night of the first full moon after the spring equinox, the Hammawihiyo falls upon those stones, there to replenish its storehouse of wisdom ---

Overall impressions: A well written and described tale that reads like folklore or a classic fairytale. Entertaining while holding the readers attention well.

A great job describing the settings this helps get the reader into the story.

Well structured making it easy for the reader and appealing for a browser or potential Reader.

Strong characters with individual sounding dialog.

Well done tale especially considering it starts from a prompt.

Seuzz, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Dear Me  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow, I came across this story while random reviewing. I am glad that I did this story has inspired me to set my goals.

My impressions of:"Dear Me"  by Prosperous Snow celebrating

Clarity:A great title for this inspirational story.

Writing style: personal inspirational diary

My favorite lines:--- When your inner critic says, “It can’t be done!” Prove your inner critic wrong. ---

Overall impressions:I love the way you start this letter, telling yourself to focus on the future instead of crying about the past. I thought I was the only one that did that.

I like the way you start the paragraphs with the dates and news of the time.

A great reference to your Grandfather Newland and his strong will and determination.

Your strong writing has inspired me. Well done.

Prospherous Snow, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review of Liminal  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Mirage, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Liminal"  by Mirage

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A very deep poem, short yet strong enough to
get the readers mind thinking about the words of this unique poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:Well written poem, painting an image filled with questions.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Mirage, thank you for sharing this unique and strong poem. It is a joy to read.

Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Seuzz, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"S02E07 "A Game of Cops and Robbers""  by Seuzz

Clarity:A great title for this adventure tale.

Writing style:Fantasy comic adventure.

My favorite line:--- "Those weren't the real cops, you numbskull!" ---

Overall impressions:Well told story filled with action. This draws the reader into the story line.

Well described characters, this keeps the story real for the reader.

Nicely structured story. This makes it easy for the reader and inviting for a browser or potential reader.



Seuzz, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi GERVIC,I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Antique Mirror"  by Gervic

Clarity:Awesome title for this classic.

Writing style: Inspirational and descriptive fantasy drama.

My favorite line:--- This was the Mirror dimension, where time ran backward and logic took a holiday.---

Overall impressions:This is a beautifully described story. A picture is painted well for the reader.

Well chosen words in this deep tale are what grabs this readers attention, holding it throughout the story.

A great job. Scarlett comes to life then guides the reader with her through time, learning together that life is not already written in stone but a canvas yearning to be painted.

GERVIC, thank you for sharing this magical story that has taken this reader's mind in a positive direction.

A great work of art! This story has had a strong effect on this reader.

GERVIC, thank you for sharing this powerful work. It is a joy to read it.

Suggestions:No way.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Sheba, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Predator And The Prey 1"  by Sheba

Clarity:A good title for this story.

Writing style:Fantasy drama.


Overall impressions:Well written story described in an entertaining style. The descriptions help the reader to picture the settings.

A unique idea for the predator to be the prey.

A strong and likeable character, this helps the reader get into the story better.

Very well structured story making it easy for the reader and enticing for a potential reader or browser.

Sheba, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider more of a cliffhanger style ending.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Scarypotato-Gullible, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Siblings In Their Natural Habitat"  by Scarypotato-Gullible

Clarity:A great title for this humorous story.

Writing style: Humorous tales about children, and human nature.

My favorite lines:---As referenced earlier, children playing in Jumporee Playhouse follow no rules but their own. This results in some behavior that is very abnormal to adult eyes.---

Overall impressions: This is a well written story in a very humorous way, I am still laughing.

Well defined scenarios that are so true, yet funny. Human nature has it share of quirks.

Marcus and Cynthia do sound like typical siblings, your descriptions has done a great job painting their picture.

Scarypotato-Gullible, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of Gone  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Mirage, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Gone"  by Mirage

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A well written deep and emotional story expressed artistically in these few strong words.
The unexpected lost of a loved one can cut very deep.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: With these few well chosen words you have expressed pages of emotion.

---I am none the wiser.--- A great ending for the strong work.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problem with the spelling grammar or mechanics.

Mirage, thank you for sharing this deep and emotional poem, this Reader has enjoyed it. Write On!

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