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Review of Bean Bag Chair  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"Bean Bag Chair"  by Kevster

Clarity: Great title for this poem.
Style: poetry relationship.

My 2 cents is only one opinion:Kevster this is a great poem. I think most all of us can relate to this poem because we have all lost furniture that was close to us.
A great idea explained in a entertaining way.
Well worded and carries a great flow. I bet you do miss that chair. :)

Thank you for sharing this work it is a good read.


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Review of Scars  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hey Olliemy, Welcome to WDC where you will find friendly and helpful writers that will give you encouragement and feedback about your writing while helping you with your writing journey.

My Impressions of: Scars by Olliemy

clarity: The title could better describe the contents of this story.
style: Biographical folklore.
originality: Unique storyline reads like a true story.

My favorite line:--About the age of 9, he practically poisoned the family's drinking water, with hope to murder all his siblings, so he could have just enough to eat.--


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well structured story making it easy for the reader. Good descriptions helping the reader to visualize the story.

Consider adding more about how the mother saved the guys life.

Consider adding more detail about --after practically poisoning the family's drinking water--. Curious about those results. How did it not work and get found out?

A good idea to point out that the father's children never abandoned him even after being abused.

Nice idea ending the story with questions, helping to make the Reader feel more involved.

Thanks for sharing this unique story.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"Remnants, Good and Bad"  by intuey You're My Valentine

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Spiritual Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Hey intuey, this is a beautiful poem.
Well worded with a great rhyming scheme. A nice easy to read structure.
This poem carries a great flow.

Thank you for sharing, your work has been inspirational.
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Review of Better Together  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My impressions of:"Better Together"  by Jeff

Clarity: The title describes this story great.

Style: Inspiring spiritual philosophy.

Genera listing:Religious, Spiritual, Community

My favorite line:--When its radical approach to love and acceptance and relationships truly stands out from what the rest of the world is doing and gives people the hope for a better way of living. --

My 2 cents is only One opinion:Jeff this is an awesome testimonial, thanks for sharing this uplifting collection of words that are powerful and inspiring.

Packed with valuable information for the reader in a short to the point style.
Structured great as is all your work that I've seen. You are a word master.
Honest realistic flow for this powerful writing. The emotion can be felt.




Suggestions: None
Write on! Keep Writing! God bless you!

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Review of Air Guitar  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of:"Air Guitar"  by Paul

Clarity: The title works great for this tale.

Style:Country folktale.

Genera listing:Contest Entry, Family, Music

My favorite line:--A saxxyphone."--

My 2 cents is only One opinion:Paul your Grandpa sounds just like mine. :)
A well written entertaining story that brought many memories from my childhood.
Great work, I know its hard for me to write with only dialog. A Nice flow.

Thanks for sharing this strong story I have enjoyed it.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Genifer  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Genifer"  by Words Whirling 'Round

Does the title describe story? Nice title for this story.

What style? Sci-fi mystery.

Are there three genre listings? Sci-fi, Detective, Dark



This is only one opinion: Good descriptions, helps the reader picture the story.
Good dialog with strong characters.
Nicely structured giving a good flow. I like the ending.


Thanks for sharing this entertaining story, It is a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review of Bent  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Bent"  by WriterAngel

Clarity: The title works for this story.

Style:Sci-fi mystery

Genera listing:Sci-fi, Crime/Gangster, Contest Entry



My 2 cents is only One opinion:Well written and structured sci-fi adventure story.
A good Flow with a bit of humor.
A nice job with the ending.

Thanks for sharing this story, it held this readers attention well.

Suggestions: None.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"Dawn Of A New Reality"  by Dave Ryan

Clarity: The title works for this poem.
Style: Villanelle poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Nicely written and structured poem that paints a good picture for the reader.
A great Villanelle poem.

Nicely done with the context. Makes me feel for your dilemma at fourteen, a critical time in a young boy's life.

Dave thanks for sharing this awesome poem, it has made my day.


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Review of Snow Birds  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:Snow Birds by Espero

Clarity: A great Title for this poem.
Style: Poetry, Nature.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Well worded, Well written and structured poem that paints a picture for the reader.

Thanks for sharing this awesome poem, it is a joy to read.

My Favorite stanza:
Tracks everywhere mark the fallen snow,
when squirrels peek out and begin to play.
No care at all, they put on a show,
until chased away by the blue jay.


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Review of Aunty Zero  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"Aunty Zero"  by THANKful Sonali LOVES DAD

Clarity: A great title for this poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written and structured, beautiful poem.
Poetically worded with a great rhyming scheme. Well done! This 36 line poem is Awesome.

Thank you for sharing this awesome poem it has made my day.


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Review of Promises  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of:"Promises"  by Jacky

Clarity: The title kind of works for this story.

Style:Fantasy drama.

Genera listing:Contest Entry. By listing 3 genres your story has more chance of being found by the browser looking for that genre.

My favorite line:--You do seem to have taken this quite seriously now, I’m impressed,” Dad left the garage.--


My 2 cents is only One opinion: A well written story with a good structure making it easy for the reader.
Strong characters, good descriptions and great dialog.

A unique idea for this story. A nice ending leaving the reader wanting more.

Thank you for sharing this story, I enjoyed it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of is She Crazy  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
My impressions of: "is She Crazy"  by ThereIwas68

Does the title describe story? The title well describes the story.

What style? Psychological drama

Are there three genre listings? Thriller/Suspense, Psychology

My favorite line: -- These pills make everything ok. --

This is only one opinion: Short and to the point, the way that today's readers like it.
The start of a good storyline with a lot of potential.

This reads a bit like an outline for a larger work.
A unique idea for a great story.

Thank you for sharing this great work this reader has enjoyed it.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider adding details and descriptions and stretching the storyline out.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"When You Stood Beside Me"  by Angel

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: This strong poem is so true.
Threw life it usually takes sometime for most people to realize how our faith has impacted our life.

A well written and well worded poem. Structured nicely making it easy for the reader.

Thank you for sharing this unique poem, it is a joy to read.


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Review of Silence  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem:"Silence"  by Kevster

Clarity: The title could better describe the contents of the poem.
Style: Relationship poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A nicely structured and well written poem.
Very nice unique idea for this poem with every stanza starting out "I don't like it when you don't... "

A nice rhyming scheme.

Kevster thanks for sharing this poem it is a good read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
{{c:black}My impressions of:"I'm angry. Don't mess with me."  by Kathleen Cochran

Clarity: The title is a good one for this story.

Style: biographical drama.

Genera listing: Relationship, Health, How-To/Advice

My 2 cents is only One opinion:Hey Kathleen, this is a strong story. Emotion can be felt from your written words. This strong story has gotten me to philosophy.

It is good that you have toughened up, through life people often will try to run over you. We learn to stay on guard and keep most people at a distance from our real self.

However it's not good to dwell on a bad thing for so long. That is like letting the bad person control your emotions and personality. Best to put it behind you and get ready for tomorrow. Keep positive, be happy, make the best out of every situation. Try to dwell more on all the good things instead of a bad thing . It is hard but in the long run it's so much better for you.

In life we learn from trial and error. The worse the error the more we learn from it and remember, making us stronger and defining our personality.

Thank you for sharing this emotional story, I have enjoyed reading it.
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Review of Black [#1 Tamara]  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
My impressions of: "Black [#1 Tamara]"  by Kare Enga on hiatus

Does the title describe story? The title could better describe the story.

What style? Parenting

Are there three genre listings? Animal. Your work can be found by more readers looking for this genre, by listing three genre's.



This is only one opinion: Reads like a parent or authority figure talking to their child.

It is a hard thing to explain to a child when they're pet disappears and perhaps died.

Thanks for sharing your work.

If I had to make the suggestion: consider a good proofread and edit.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: " A memorable journey to Africa "  by sealbaraza

Does the title describe story? A good title for this work.

What style? Documentary essay.

Are there three genre listings? Action/Adventure, Cultural, Animal



This is only one opinion: A well structured article, makes it easy on the reader and less intimidating for the potential reader.

Informative article about Africa.

Thanks for sharing this informative work.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: "The Importance of Social Media "  by khan

Clarity: The title works well with this essay.

Style:Documentary essay.

Genera listing:Other, Community, Cultural



My 2 cents is only One opinion:
Nicely structured giving a professional look.
Well worded, with good impressions of social media.

You have listed the pros of social media well, consider listing some cons also.

Thanks for sharing this essay, it is a good read.

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Review of Mirror, Mirror  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:Mirror, Mirror by Anni Pon

Clarity: A great title for this poem.
Style: Portry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A great idea for this well worded and nicely structured poem. If mirrors could talk.

I like that it's written kind of like a puzzle.
Well done.

Thanks for sharing this poem, it is a joy to read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: "A walk in the forest."  by Sumojo

Does the title describe story? A nice title for this story.

What style? Nature, pet biography

Are there three genre listings? Animal, Ghost, Dark


This is only one opinion: Pets are part of the family, it is hard on us when they die. With their short lifespan it prepares us for tragedies that come with life.

Awesome structured story, extremely easy for the reader, with a calm flow.

Sumojo thanks for sharing this awesome story, it is a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review of Burger and Fries  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi tracker, I hope all is well. I came across this while random reviewing and I'm so glad I did.

My impressions of:"Burger and Fries"  by tracker

Clarity: The title describes the story well.

Style:Biographical


My 2 cents is only One opinion:
It is funny how fate works in life, one split second decision can have life-changing effects.

Sure was a good thing you decided to walk in instead of the drive-thru. You probably saved that boy's life, we never know what's going on in someone else' mind. A blessing that Chance encounter revealed the reason for making that decision to you that quick.

It feels good when you know you've done something that helps someone. That proud positive feeling of accomplishment can be felt from this story.

Nicely written with detailed descriptions that lets the reader see the picture.
Easy to read structure. Great images. A nice touch with the quotes.
Short and to the point, while showing the benefits of keeping a positive attitude.

A great read, thanks for sharing this story traker!



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of:"Evidence For Gods Existence - By Adam S"  by CrusaderAce

clarity: The title describes work well.
style: Religious documentary.
originality: An original written unique article.

Hi CrusaderAce, I came across this article while random reviewing. Here are my impressions.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written, educational article about the exitance of God.
Many references to a variety of Bible stories. A informative article.
I too have often wondered how anyone alive could believe that we exist without a higher power.

Thank you for sharing this article this reader has enjoyed it.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
{{c:black}My impressions of: "My crazy assassin wives:The Death Parade"  by Akihiro

Clarity: The title does not really describe this particular chapter.

Style:Fantasy drama.





My 2 cents is only One opinion:Hi Akihiro, I came across this story while random reviewing.
Well described with a strong character.
I like Xander. A good story-line with a lot of potential.

Thank you for sharing this strong story-line. This reader enjoyed it.

Suggestions: Consider breaking down the long paragraphs to make easier on the reader and less intimidating.
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Review of Mother's Pray  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My impressions of the poem:Mother's Pray by Serhii Sobol

Clarity: The title fits well with this poem.
Style: Spiritual poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Hi Serhii, This is powerful poem. Well worded and structured. A nice flow. I can feel the emotions.

This is my favorite stanza:
-- It's an elegy, a song of plea!
Happiness, strength, not for my own sake!
To shield the little ones from early farewells,
To them, like the sun in the sky, I wake!--

Thank you for sharing this great poem, this reader has enjoyed reading it.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)


Hi Prosperous Snow Happy! After reading "Christmas Solitaire" , I offer you these comments:


My impressions of: "Christmas Solitaire"  by Prosperous Snow Happy


Clarity, does the title describe this story?:The title describes the story well.

Style: Family drama.

Genres, are 3 listed?Holiday, Women's, Relationship

Plot:Granny Sarah plays solitaire all the time since the passing of her husband Mores, even though the house is always full with grandkids.
A nice ending with Granny flying to Hawaii.

Characters:Granny Sarah.

Structured easy for the reader?A nice structure.


Any suggestions?None
Thank you for sharing this story, it is a joy to read.

Write on!
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