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Review of Harmony  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)

My impressions of: "Harmony"  by Words Whirling 'Round

Does the title describe the story? The title works well with the story.

What is the style? Sci-fi drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Sci-fi, Dark, Satire

Does the opening line grab my attention? The opening could better grab this readers attention.

Is the structure good for the reader? well structured story easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Words Whirling 'Round this is an epic Sci-fi adventure tale.
A good structure for this story which makes it easier for the reader.

Such good descriptions I feel like I've been there. Characters described well. Great job with the dialogue.

Wow what a job of world building. The story carries a consistent and nice flow. Well done. This reader likes it.

If I had to make a suggestion: Consider more action in the opening to grab the reader better right at first.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review of Kevin and Lance  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

My impressions of: "Kevin and Lance"  by scriptboy

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this story.

What is the style? Family drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Sci-fi, Teen, Supernatural

Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening however it could better grab my attention.

Is the structure good for the Reader?A well structured story easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Scritboy this story is very well written with good descriptions. It is easy for the reader to picture the settings.

Strong characters, Kevin and Lance are described well making it easy for the reader to picture them. Good dialogue.

If I had to make a suggestion: a stronger opening to better grab the reader's attention.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review of Tainted Fear  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem:"Tainted Fear "  by Ayobami pen

Clarity: This is a good title for this poem.
Style: Horror/Scary, Experience, Environment

My 2 cents are only one opinion:
A nice opening that grabs this reader's attention well.

It is nicely structured, making it easy for the reader.

It turns a bit dark at the invasion.

A strong poem that will make the reader think.

Ayobami pen, Thank you for sharing this strong poem.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of: "Ole Man Fisherman "  by white shark

Does the title describe the story? the title describes the story well.

What is the style? biographical nature drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Action/Adventure, Activity, Travel

Does the opening line grab my attention? A good opening line, but it could grab my attention better.

Is the structure good for the reader? A nice structure makes it easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Hey White Shark, this is a well-worded and entertaining story.
A well-written story, it carries a good flow.

It reads like a true story, I get the feeling you may be a fisherman.

I like the way you laid the story out; it works well.


If I had to make a suggestion: A good proof read and edit never hurts I think I saw at least a couple of typos.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

My impressions of: "Love in Quarantine"  by GERVIC

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this story.

What is the style? Short story

Are there 3 genre listings? LGBTQ+, Romance/Love, Experience

Does the opening line grab my attention? a good opening to this story but it could better grab my attention.

Is the structure good for the reader? a nicely structured story that is easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:GERVIC this is a very well written story. Great descriptions that help the reader picture the scene.

Strong characters with good dialogue. Very realistic descriptions.
I did not know that they still had places that didn't allow drinking.
The pandemic was a trying time; it seems to have been over a long time ago when it actually wasn't.

If I had to make a suggestion:.None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

My impressions of: "Beyond the Black and White"  by Tori Purchase.

Does the title describe the story? a nice title for this story.

What is the style? philosophy

Are there 3 genre listings? Philosophy, Emotional, Hobby/Craft

Does the opening line grab my attention? a good opening that does grab my attention.

Is the structure good for the reader? beautifully structured. Easy for the reader.

My favorite line:--Failure is our teacher, she may be harsh but true.--

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Tori, thank you for sharing this great work. It is a joy to read it. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Let's play a game—a great idea for this well-written and well-worded work.

Very professional-looking structure.

I love to play chess and indeed with the decisions and sacrifices it is much like life.

If I had to make a suggestion:None.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of: "A Tribute to Brooke"  by Jeff

Does the title describe the story? The title describes this story well.

What is the style? biographical friendship.

Are there 3 genre listings? Friendship, Writing.Com, Contest Entry.

Does the opening line grab my attention? a good opening line.

Is the structure good for the reader? a nice structure, making it easy for the reader.

My favorite line: --Her presence on Writing.Com is undeniable.--

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Jeff, as always, this is a well-worded and well-written article.
Brooklyn sounds like a great person and friend.

It is hard to find someone who will truly listen to your problems when you're having a bad day.

A nice ending line, well done.

If I had to make a suggestion:None.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Invisible Threads--Chapter 19"  by Loyd Gardner

Does the title describe the story?

What style? Sci-fi adventure drama.

Are there three genre listings? Thriller/Suspense, Supernatural, Sci-fi

My favorite lines: -- "I understand. No computer."--
-- "Well, it is what it is and we're out of time."--

This is only one opinion: a well-written chapter and a good opening line that caught this readers attention.

Strong and likable characters with good dialogue.

Extremely nicely structured, this makes it easy for the reader.

A fair ending. With a bit more mystery, it could make the reader more anxious to turn the page.

Loyd Thank you for sharing this work; it is a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: none

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Review of Penny the Penguin  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of:"Penny the Penguin"  by Dawn Embers

Clarity: The title describes the story well.

Style: children's fantasy story

Genera listing:Other: By mentioning the three genres, more readers who are interested in that genre will be able to find your story.

My favorite line:--She wanted to be a pair but didn't know what to do.--

My 2 cents is only one opinion:Dawn, this is a great story. I am curious if you did get it published.
It is well written with a good structure, making it easy for the reader. Well-worded and very entertaining.
I like that the Penguins waddled.

Dawn, thank you for sharing this lovely story. I really enjoyed it.


Suggestions:None.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Hanging on to the Dream"  by Jacky

Does the title describe the story? a nice title for this story.

What style? personal drama.

Are there three genre listings? Contest Entry: Other. By listing at least 3 genre's, you make your work accessible to more readers looking for this type of story and genre.

My favorite line: --Determined not to open my eyes until I figured it out I lay there listening, dozing a bit too.--

This is only one opinion: Jacky, this is a great, well-written, and humorous story.
A nice structure that makes it easy for the reader.

A nice ending I really like the last line.

If I had to make the suggestion: None.

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Review of Him  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Him by Sausage

Does the title describe story? A nice title for this story.

What style? Personal romance drama.

Are there three genre listings? Romance/Love, Drama, Personal

My favorite line: --That could be the end of this suffering.--

This is only one opinion: Sausage thanks for sharing this interesting story.

This well written piece reads much like a true story. Sounds like you like this guy. I would bet that he has noticed you much more than you think.

A strong story the emotion can be felt from it.
Good descriptions that helps the reader picture the scene.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider breaking the long paragraph down into shorter ones to make it less intimidating for the reader.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: "No strength to love "  by Ayobami pen

Does the title describe story? the title fairly describes this poem.

What style? Relationship poetry.

Are there three genre listings? Erotica, Emotional, Romance/Love



This is only one opinion: A nicely written and structured poem.
Relationships are tough and can be quite strenuous on our enter soul.
Ayobami, I like this poem thank you for sharing it.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of:"A Medical Nightmare (Part 3 of a W-I-P)"  by MJones

Clarity: The title could better describe this story.

Style:health drama.

Genera listing: Experience, Medical, Health



My 2 cents is only One opinion: well written and worded story.
Reads like a true story. Nicely structured this makes it easy on the reader.
Cancer is a scary demon that I would not wish on anyone.

MJones thanks for sharing this work, it is a good read.

Suggestions:
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Review of Alone  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:Alone by Christophher Day

Clarity: This title describes the poem well.
Style: Personal poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Christopher thank you for sharing this great
poem, it has got my mind to spinning.

A good opening line that gets this readers attention.

The emotion can be felt from the lines of this poem. I feel that during life most everyone felt as this poem describes at least once or twice.

This is a strong poem that has got me beginning to philosophy.

It is those dark trying times that make us strong helping us to become the person we are meant to be.

Great writing Christopher.


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Review of Mail Order Garden  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: "Mail Order Garden"  by tj-dodging Cupid's arrows

Does the title describe story? The title describes this story well.

What style? Fantasy drama.

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, Drama, Contest Entry

My favorite line: --Banned from his own land, He fled his home and created his own home, Castle Addlebrain.--

This is only one opinion: A great idea for this awesome tale. Well written with great detailed descriptions. Making it easy for the reader to picture the setting.

The opening got my attention then the tale held it.

Marty is a strong likable character. Rosco and JoJo are good dragons.
Nice structure, easy for the reader.
A good touch with the farming.
A good ending.

tj thanks for sharing this tale it is a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of:"Boring Women Have Immaculate Houses"  by Kathleen Cochran

Clarity: The title works great for this story.

Style:How-to advice article.

Genera listing:Family, How-To/Advice, Self help

My favorite line:--Still, dust settles, mud tracks, and cobwebs gather any time the world still turns on its axis.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion:
Kathleen thank you for sharing this awesome article full of helpful tips that will help most all of us.

Well written article, a great orderly structure. Easy to read with truly helpful advice.

Shortcut one is a great idea I will have to pass on. I had never thought of, at least in that clear of an approach.

Shortcut 2 rings true a bedroom does look 100% better if at least the bed is made.

Shortcut 3 I am familiar with, if you can't do it all, do what you can.

The alcohol cleaning tip is true I have learned that myself.

Shortcut 5 is a difficult one to actually enforce.
A nice ending: go outside and plant an iris.


Suggestions:None
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"Raindrops and Flannel Wraps"  by GERVICupid Love

Clarity: A great title for this poem.
Style: Poetry, Thirty-eight lines from prompt.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written and structured poem with a nice rhyming scheme. Well done should have satisfied the prompts well. Flannel umbrella day.

Thank you for sharing this great poem it is a joy to read.


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Review of COLORS OF FALL  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem:"COLORS OF FALL"  by Prosperous Snow Valentine

Clarity: Nice title for this poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Nicely written poem, good descriptions help the reader to picture the scene.
This poem takes me back to my childhood memories of my grandparents and the colors of the leaves on their trees.
Thank you for sharing this poem, this reader enjoyed it.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: "Tropical Vacation (1st Place)"  by BScholl

Clarity: The title works well for this story.

Style: fantasy drama

Genera listing:Mythology, Fantasy, Holiday

my favorite lines:--“I don’t know,” Bernard tilted his sunglasses down and watched a couple of ladies saunter down the beach in bikinis, “I think I could get used to it.” Mitzy swatted him.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion:
Hi BScholl, nicely written short story. Short and to the point just the way today's readers likes things.
Thank you for sharing this work it is a good read.

Suggestions: no suggestions.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"multi-verses, multi-choices"  by JCosmos

Clarity: Nice title for this poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Hi JCosmos, this is an awesome poem. Thank you for sharing your work. This well written and simple poem has got this readers head spinning.
A strong deep poem written with a few words. The last verse is my favorite, well said.


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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: "The Origins of a Vampire"  by Angelica- Cupid season HVD

Does the title describe story? The title describes the story well.

What style? Fantasy fiction.

Are there three genre listings? Other is the only listing. By listing 3 genres your work will be available to more readers looking for that genre.


This is only one opinion: Hi Angelica, this is an interesting story. Well written and pretty much straight to the point just the way today's reader likes things.

Good characters with good dialogue.

Good descriptions helping the reader to visualize the setting.

Structured nicely making it easy for the reader.

Thank you for sharing this work I have enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider a good proof read I think I seen at least a couple typos.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Melihra Project (Graduation)"  by Joto-Kai

Does the title describe story? The title could better describe this particular chapter.

What style? sci-fi drama.

Are there three genre listings? Sci-fi, Crime/Gangster: By having three genres listed more readers searching for this type of genre will be able to find it.

My favorite line: --Friend or foe, if one of the soldiers detected weakness, they wouldn't hesitate to cut her career short–ruining what she had started today in Marcon's organization. --

This is only one opinion: Hi Joto-Kai, Thanks for sharing this work it is a joy to read. Nicely structured and organized easy for the reader to follow.

Good descriptions helping the reader to picture the scene. Strong likeable characters with well written dialog. Easy for the reader while holding their attention well.

A consistent steady tone that carries a good flow.

How easily did you get into the scene? The scene was fairly easy to get into.

Did the first paragraph grab you? The first paragraph was good but could have grabbed me better.

What impression did you get of Melihra? A strong character wrestling with whether to follow traditions or make new ones.

What impression did you get of Scarlett? A strong and likable character proud and strong minded.

What is an Eradis? Warrior robots.

What is an Indur? A slave owning faction.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider a stronger ending with a bit more mystery to make the reader want to turn the page.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My impressions of: "Development for Bother!"  by Scarypotato

Does the title describe story? The title works for this outline.

What style? Sci-fi outline.

Are there three genre listings? Sci-fi, Action/Adventure, Relationship


This is only one opinion: Hi Scarypotato, this is a great outline hopefully the book will be as good. I look forward to reading it.

Well written and structured. A good structure makes it easier on the reader and less intimidating for the potential reader.

This detailed outline should be a great help for keeping your story-line in order. Oftentimes a story or novel seems to take off in a unplanned direction without a good outline.

A great job with the settings and timeline's.

Thanks for sharing your work it is a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Invisible Threads--Chapter 13"  by Loyd Gardner

Does the title describe story? Good title.

What style? Fantasy drama.

Are there three genre listings? Thriller/Suspense, Supernatural, Sci-fi


This is only one opinion: A well written chapter with strong characters, and good dialog.

Good descriptions, helps the reader to visualize the picture.

Structured great making it easy for the reader.
Holds the readers attention well with suspense.

Loyd thanks for sharing this story, it held my attention well and left me wanting to know more.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review of Why Should I?  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: "Why Should I?"  by Kenzie

Does the title describe story? The title is a good description for this work.

What style? biographical opinion.

Are there three genre listings? Writing.Com, Writing, Internet/Web

My favorite lines: -- The more people who wonder into Writing.Com, the better the chance that someone will discover my writings and want to talk with me about writing for them.--

-- Why should I help promote Writing.Com? Ralph Waldo Emerson said it best, "It is one of the most beautiful compensations of life, that no man can sincerely try to help another without helping himself."--

This is only one opinion: Kenzie I am honored to be reading this great classic from 2002.

This is a great inspirational masterpiece. I agree with everything you said and wow look at WDC now.
2002 wasn't that long ago...yet it was.
I'm glad your poem about 9/11 was picked up and I'm sure it got plenty of attention.

Thanks so much for sharing your work, I am honored to be reading it. This has inspired me. :)

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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