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Review of Cow on the Field  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi GERVIC, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Cow on the Field"  by GERVIC House Targaryen

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A nice rhyming scheme in this humorous prompt poem.
Good easy to read structure.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait, of a cow running toward the goalpost on a football field, is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems with the spelling grammar or mechanics.

Gervic, thank you for sharing this entertaining poem. Write On!

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Review of Lessons  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jacky, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Lessons"  by Jacky

Clarity: Seems to be a good title.

Writing style:Fantasy drama.


Overall impressions:An entertaining short story. Well written, short and to the point, the way today's reader likes things.

A nice easy to read structure. Most readers like easy to read stories.

A nice twist at the end when the boy turns into a cloud.

Jacky, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of Fragile  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Diva, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Fragile "  by Diva

Clarity:Goood title.

Writing style:Life learning drama.

My favorite line:--- People expect from you everything, but they expect me to ask for nothing.---This is so true and sadly will never change.

Overall impressions: You are preaching to the choir. Everything you have written is true. Through life we learn to take each thing individually and get whatever positive we can from it, and not dwell on the negative.

Human nature is hard to try to reprogram, but if you don't you can worry yourself to death.

Smell the roses. Try to make someone smile. Be happy. Don't worry it never helps.

Diva, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider double spacing with a blank line here and there to help those of us with weak eyes.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Wandering Thoughts, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Equality Leads to Peace"  by Wandering Thoughts

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong poem with repeating lines. A nice rhyming scheme for the last or poem spoken at the end.

---Life is the result of love accomplishing everything--- Strong words for this chorus.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:This poem reads a bit like a rough draft for a new song.

This poem paints the picture of:
A performer preparing and practicing for the great play of life.
for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:Looks okay
to me.


Wandering Thoughts, thank you for sharing this poem. A good read.

PS: Your handle is awesome. My thoughts wander all the time.
Write On!

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Review of Real Fool  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ashok Banerjee, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Real Fool"  by Ashok Baerjee

Clarity:A great title for this April poem.

Writing style:Poetry.


Overall impressions: A well written poem for April fools. Nicely worded free verse poem. Seems to me that you satisfied the prompt well. A nice bit of a twist for the end.

The portrait of a wise old man is painted for this reader.

Ashok Baerjee, thank you for sharing this poem, it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

Hi Carly, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Great and Sudden Change"  by Carly

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A strong poem. In a few words you have said a lot.
Indeed most humans do not like change.

This poem has a unique flow, a bit of an unusual structure. It works.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: A portrait of the pandemic is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Carly, thank you for sharing this lovely poem. Write On!

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Review of I Forgive You  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi again APoeticHeart, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "I Forgive You"  by APoeticHeart

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep poem sounds as if written from lost love. It is those lost loves we all go through that make us stronger and ready when we finally find true love.

A well written poem with a nice rhyming scheme. Very strong the emotion screams out.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:Forgiving is much harder than it sounds, however most rewarding when you truly forgive.

The portrait of someone trying to find closure from a recent lost love, then moving on; painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

APoeticHeart, thank you for sharing this strong poem, it is a joy to read.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Winchester, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"About God and Sin and Missy Titus"  by Winchester Jones

Clarity:A good title for this story.

Writing style:Political personal opinion drama.


Overall impressions:A good opening that grabs this readers attention well. I'm reminded of the Clinton years.

Well structured story with a good storyline. Good descriptions that help the reader to visualize the setting.

Good characters and dialog. A good ending with a twist for the readers imagination.

Winchester, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Emrei,I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Decoding Decisions:"  by Emrei

Clarity:A good title for this work.

Writing style:Modern research essay.


Overall impressions: Its sad but true we are programed to search for the best (cheapest) deal.

Nicely structured essay loaded with todays marketing information or coding. About 1/3 of this was not in English therefore it was Latin to this reader who don't know Latin.

Emrei, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider keeping this article consistent in one language.

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Review of Goddess Hekate  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Werewolf, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Goddess Hekate"  by Werewolf

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong prayer style free verse poem. Constructed well. Spiritual is always a strong and emotional work for me.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: An image of a werewolf howling at the moon is portrayed for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: It is poetry however at least a few periods Seem needed.

Werewolf, Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On!

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Review of Take My Hand  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi APoeticHeart, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Take My Hand"  by APoeticHeart

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong, emotional love poem. A unique as well as poetic rhyming pattern. Take My Hand; repeats the title every fifth line.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The image of soulmates traveling through time is portrayed for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:Looks good.

APoeticHeart, thank you for sharing your this lovely poem. It is a good read.
Write On!

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Review of The Pack  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi again Wanda Jane, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Pack"  by Wanda Jane

Clarity:Seems like a good title for this tale.

Writing style:Fantasy animal adventure drama.

My favorite lines:--- “Duncan, at your service my lady, and I would have taken on a Crusher for you!”---

--- We both knew this was a sign from the ancestors and we were going to be fine.---

Overall impressions:A strong storyline that develops in a good orderly, timely fashion.

Well structured story that is easy for the reader.

A nice narrative with good descriptions of the setting. There is plenty of action along Duncan's journey.

Well described cast of characters. Duncan, Floe and James are strong likeable character.

I like the scene where Duncan and Floe first meet. It is amazing how animals make mating seem so easy and natural as opposed to humans who can make it so complicated.

James is likeable and wise. He is a good father figure.

A nice happy ending.

I hope you find this feedback helpful. It is only one opinion.


Wanda Jane, thank you for sharing this delightful story, it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider a good proof read and edit. Todays reader has a short attention span. This story is good, it could be shortened without hurting the overall story.
A stronger opening could help grab the readers attention better from the start.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi BScholl, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Built (1st Place) (Editor Pk May-13 NL) "  by BScholl

Clarity:An interesting title, however it could better describe the story.

Writing style:Fantasy sci-fi romance drama.

My favorite lines: ---The nerdiest guy in the county dating a pearl like Shelley? Something just wasn’t right.---

Overall impressions:A great storyline. A strong opening that does grab this readers attention.

I like Thom and his determination to find the truth.

Nicely structured, this makes it easy for the reader as well as inviting for a browser or potential reader.

A nice twist for the ending.


BScholl, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review of 100 hours  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Hi kingalex1234, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "100 hours"  by kingalex1234

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded poem with a good strong structure plus a unique rhyming scheme. One hundred hours, a creative idea for this delightful poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:Life's journey condensed into a day. The image painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see.

Kingalex1234, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review of RUINED  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi with love, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "RUINED"  by with love

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A free verse poem that poses questions from the author on how to remember Mom. We can program our mind to remember the positives or negatives about people, places and things.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of a confused author trying to write a biography, comes to this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:I see no problems with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics.

With love, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review of Blanket of Love  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Bernie, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Blanket of Love"  by Bernie

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong emotional poem with a unique rhyming pattern and repeating line. Written from a father to daughter point of view, this helps bring out the emotion.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of family is seen by this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that this reader can see.

Bernie, thank you for sharing your poem. Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Gracelyn Jane, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"How To Get A Boyfriend In Two Months"  by Gracelyn Jane

Clarity:The title fairly describes this work.

Writing style:Romance, family drama.
My favorite lines: --- Not because I've been single for a long time, but because I just can't find a guy who meets my 'standards'---

Overall impressions:Great structure for this work. It is very easy for the reader and inviting for a browser.

You have a wonderful gift for descriptive dialogue, very impressive.

Really good descriptions that puts the reader there in the middle of you and your mom.

The the title suggest this is a 'how to' however the titles question was never answered.

I can really relate to this article. You sound just like my daughter who also is 30 years old, unmarried. Things are so different in this cyber age than when us baby boomers were young. It is what it is, a different world. My oldest daughter turns 35 this year, she has been married maybe 2 years, has a 20 day old baby girl.

This strong article has took my mind in a different direction. Good luck. You will find your soulmate at the time destiny has laid out. The next thing you know you will be trying to marry off your daughter.

« H2G-AB-I2M » this reader is confused as to the meaning of « H2G-AB-I2M », some of us are behind the times.


Gracelyn Jane, thank you for sharing this entertaining work that has me philosophizing. It has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A good proofread and edit never hurts.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Kare Enga, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Brown eyes [#28 Mark]"  by Kare Enga in Udn Thani

Clarity: The title fits this tribute well.

Writing style: Friendship life-long.


Overall impressions:A life long relationship comes to this readers mind when reading this emotional work.

These few well written words speak loudly, the emotion can be felt. Often we write things down afraid that we might forget some of the most important traits of a friend or relationship.


Kare Enga, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review of Exit roads  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Sinbad, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Exit roads"  by Sinbad

Clarity:A good title.

Writing style:Personal experience in poetic style.


Overall impressions:Written in a very realistic, honest sounding opinion of your take on today's existence. This work carries a poetic flow.

Sinbad, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider line spacing and breaks between paragraphs to make it easier for the reader.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi again Sumojo, I came across this delightful poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Shadow creatures "  by Sumojo

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A simple children poem with a good rhyming pattern that helps to give a tantalizing flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:A riddle that starts the readers mind to search for answers. I like the way this poem starts. Finishing with answers.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:It's a fun I endorse, a great end.

Sumojo, thank you for sharing your work it's always a pleasure to read.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi James,I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Last Train Ticket"  by James Vogner

Clarity:A good title for this old western.

Writing style:Folktale memories drama.


Overall impressions: Nicely written story. Strong descriptions help make this emotional journey come to life for the reader.

Nicely structured story that is fairly easy for the reader.

James, thank you for sharing this entertaining work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:A stronger opening line to grab the readers attention at first.

Consider breaking down the longer paragraphs to make it appear less intimidating to a browser or potential reader.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ali, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Churches of Goreme"  by Ali

Clarity: A good title for this informative narrative.

Writing style: Informative history and geography of Cappadocia, Turkey.

My favorite lines:--- A reassuring measure, especially when Croesus was enslaving the citizens of nearby Pteria in his battle against Cyrus the Great, or when Genghis Khan was mass murdering civilians in conquered territories on his way to empire.---

---Muslims and Christians co-existed peacefully in Cappadocia and throughout Turkey until the late nineteenth century.---


Overall impressions: A great historic article. Well written and structured in a nice fashion that makes it easy on the reader.

Well referenced article full of interesting history.
I like that you gave the history of the Himalayas and Alps, I found this very interesting.

Good to know about fairy chimneys, as well as troglodyte villages.

Good information about the Dark Church's frescoes and how they were preserved from bird-drippings.

This has got to be the most informative historic article I have read in sometime.


Ali, thank you for sharing this educational historic, work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Joseph
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Review of My Little Voice  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Wanda Jane, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "My Little Voice"  by Wanda Jane

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A well written beautiful poem with a nice rhyming scheme.
A nice output of energy. the sound of my little voice has a relaxing flow.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:The emotion can be heard from this poem. Life passage's is portrayed to this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see with the spelling grammar or mechanics.

Wanda Jane, thank you for sharing your poem. Write On!

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Review of Happy?  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi Winchester, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Happy?"  by Winchester Jones

Clarity:A good title for this short story.

Writing style: Personal memories drama.

My favorite line:

Overall impressions:Seems like a good job of using the prompt words. A well written short story.

The story ends abruptly, leaving this reader a bit confused at the end.

Winchester Jones,thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of A Civil Suit  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Tim Chiu, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "A Civil Suit"  by Tim Chiu

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A nice and consistent rhyming pattern for this poem. A well written and worded poem about bowling. This poem has a catchy tone.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:A portrait of bowlers bowling at a tournament is painted for me.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see with the spelling grammar or mechanics.

Tim Chiu, thank you for sharing this entertaining poem. Write On!

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