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Review of Arthur's Return  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of: "Arthur's Return"  by JAEman02

Does the title describe the story? The title describes the story well.

What is the style? Mythological folklore drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Fantasy, Mythology, Folklore

Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening.

Is the structure good for the Reader?Nicely structured, easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:A well-written story with good descriptions. This helps the reader to picture the setting.

Good characters with good dialog. This keeps the readers attention.

A good ending, leaving the reader wanting to turn the page.

JAEman02 thanks for sharing this entertaining work, this reader has enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make a suggestion:None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review of Jack  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem: "Jack"  by Wanda Jane

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Poetry, ode

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Hi Wanda Jane I came across this lovely poem while random reviewing. Thank you for sharing it. I enjoyed reading it you have an artistic voice.

Wow the rhyming pattern is implausible in this beautifully worded ode to your Grandpa Jack.

The words really flow together well. I feel sure your grandpa would be extremely proud.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"Whispers in the Rat Race"  by Rootcreater

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Emotional free verse poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion:Rootcreater thank you for sharing this entertaining poem about the rat race. I've been in the rat race many times I agree with you I don't like it.

A nicely worded poem that carries a unique flow. I like the reference to the biblical Job and I have never thought about it but it does not inspire you, except to have strong faith.

The rat race for me was rush hour city traffic.




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Review of Spilled  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"Spilled"  by Grace Kween

Clarity: A nice title for this poem.
Style: Free verse poetry emotional.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Hi Grace, thank you for sharing this emotional poem that has brought back some memories for me.

A short well worded very emotional poem. The kind of poem usually written when the author was a bit depressed. I have written many like this through the years, sometimes it seems like that depression can bring out the creative fluids.

This poem carries a really strong flow.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of: "I Saw the Whole Thing WC 294"  by jackiemuse

Does the title describe the story? Title describes this story well.

What is the style? Crime drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Crime/Gangster, Relationship, Detective

Does the opening line grab my attention? The opening line grabs this readers attention well.

Is the structure good for the Reader?A great structure that makes it very easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:jackiemuse, this story is awesome in less than 300 words, well done.

This is a classic, worded perfect, grabbing this readers attention and holding it from start to finish.

A great structure, great dialog and a nice entertaining ending.

I really appreciate you sharing this story I enjoyed it and my head is spinning trying to figure out how you did it. Thank you.


If I had to make a suggestion:None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of: "One among the two is gruesome"  by Ben

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this .

What is the style? Horror

Are there 3 genre listings? Horror/Scary, Thriller/Suspense, Mystery

Does the opening line grab my attention? A fairly good opening that does grab my attention.

Is the structure good for the Reader? A fair structured story. A bit more line spacing would help the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:.Ben, thank you for sharing this story. This reader has enjoyed it.

A good storyline, sort of reads like it's a quick draft. A good idea for the storyline. Good characters being developed.

Good descriptions that helped the reader to picture the scene.

A lot of potential in this story-line.

If I had to make a suggestion: Consider more space between the lines to make it easier for the reader. A good proofread to edit any typos, mistakes or unwanted lines.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

My impressions of: "What Jules had been doing?"  by Richard Allen

Does the title describe the story? The title describes this story well.

What is the style? fantasy mythology drama

Are there 3 genre listings? Action/Adventure, Detective,

Does the opening line grab my attention? The opening grabs my attention good. Very nice with action.

Is the structure good for the Reader? Structured really well, very easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion: Richard I think you have done a really good job with this one. A lot of action well constructed holding the readers attention well.

An action-packed adventure with well described characters sharing good dialog. Laid out nicely holding the readers attention well.

I like scene where the queen envisions the dragon.

A good ending leaving the reader wanting to turn the page.


If I had to make a suggestion: A good proofread and edit never hurts to catch any mistakes or types.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of: "Writer's Cache I: Lesson 5"  by Charity Marie

Does the title describe the story? A good title fot this syory.

What is the style? journalist news drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Educational: By listing three genres your work will be easier for readers to find while browsing for that type of genre.

Does the opening line grab my attention? a good opening line but it could better grab this readers attention.

Is the structure good for the Reader? a very well structured and laid out work.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:A very well written work with good characters and dialogue.

Great descriptions, it is easy for the reader to picture the scene.

Strong characters that are easy for this reader to relate to.

I like the references to the Great Depression.

Thank you for sharing this entertaining work this reader has enjoyed it.



If I had to make a suggestion: no suggestions.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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Review of Who am I?  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of: "Who am I?"  by Bruce.preast

Does the title describe the story? a great title for this poem.

What is the style? Free verse poetry.

Are there 3 genre listings? Teen, Emotional, Writing

Does the opening line grab my attention? a nice opening.

Is the structure good for the Reader? Well structured very easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Bruce, I really like this one I like the way you structured it.

A great idea for this unique work. You say a lot with only a few words. A deep emotional poem.

Bruce, thanks for sharing this work, it has brought back memories for me.

If I had to make a suggestion:None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem:"What do I say to you"  by Christopher Day

Clarity: a nice title for this work.
Style: spiritual poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion:A well written spiritual poem.

Well worded poem. Kind of like a prayer.

I like the questions.

Christopher thanks for sharing this poem, it has got my mind to thinking.




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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of:
"The Silver Saga, Book 1."  by Elliot

Does the title describe story? A good title for this adventure tale.

What style? Family fantasy drama.

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, Family, Action/Adventure

My favorite line: --On her other side stood the man himself, Farron Whispers, a devilish grin spread on his face.--

This is only one opinion: Elliot, thanks for sharing this awesome story, this reader has enjoyed it.

A good opening that gets the readers attention from the start.

Well-written and well described adventure tale full of action. This helps to keep the readers attention and helps him to get into the story and visualize the scene.

I like that you used birds like vultures, the owl and the Hawk as characters, even though they did turn out to be mutants. A very creative idea.

Strong likable characters with good dialog. This helps to keep the readers attention.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider breaking down the long paragraphs into several shorter ones. This will look less intimidating to the reader. Consider line spacing also, this will make it easier for the reader. Consider a blank line between the longer paragraphs (at least) this will make it easier for the reader. Consider a cliff hanger ending or a conclusion.

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Review of The Soup  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: "The Soup"  by W.D. Wilcox

Does the title describe story? a good title for this story .

What style? horror

Are there three genre listings? Horror/Scary, Other: By listing three genre's your story will be able to be found by more readers searching for that for that type genre.


This is only one opinion: This is an awesome story especially considering only 200 words.
A very well written and well structured story with a good twist for the end.

Thank you for sharing this story it is a pleasure to read it.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

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Review of Magic  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: "Magic"  by Just Jay

Clarity: The title is great for this awesome short story.

Style:Fantasy story.

Genera listing: Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Contest Entry

My favorite line:--"Yer makin' me nervous," said her friend, eyes darting around the room, all the while ducking his head.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion: This is an awesome story written with only a few words.
Perfect for today's reader with their short attention span.

Thank you for sharing this work it is giving this reader some ideas.

Suggestions:None
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"He Never Interrupts"  by Kenzie

Clarity: a great title for this poem.
Style: spiritual poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion:
Kenzie, I absolutely love this poem. I tend to babble on and on myself. This poem really speaks to me.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem it has refurbished my mind.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem:"A Powerful Status - A Global Mark"  by Tim Chiu

Clarity: A nice title for this poem.
Style: Political, military, personal.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written poem about the military.

Nicely structured short and to the point just the way today's reader likes things.

Short vague lines that allow the reader to explore using their own personal views.

Tim, thank you for sharing this poem it is a good read and has got this readers mind to working.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

My impressions of: "An attempt made on the Queen"  by Richard Allen

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this story.

What is the style? Mythological fantasy drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Detective

Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening however it could be stronger to gab the readers attention better.

Is the structure good for the Reader?Nicely structured.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Richard this is a good story, laid out well enough like a screen play. A great job, well done.

A well-written and well-structured tale with plenty of action and adventure.

Strong characters with good dialog. This helps the reader to stay focused on the story.

Good descriptions that help the reader picture the setting.

Well-worded and structured in a organized timely fashion.
This helps the reader to stay focused and interested in the stories outcome.


If I had to make a suggestion:A good proof read and edit to catch any typo's and mistakes. Consider the short attention span of today's reader who like short and to the point stories. The story could be made shorter without hurting the storyline.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review of AKIN  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"AKIN"  By Frankie Rae

Clarity: a great title for this poem.
Style: poetically personal.

My 2 cents is only one opinion:Frankie, this is a great poem. I am indeed questioning reality, thank you.
Well worded and written with a nice twist at the end. Well done!
Thank you for sharing this awesome poem, this reader has enjoyed it.


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Review of Living in style  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

My impressions of: "Living in style"  by Benjamin

Does the title describe the story? a great title for this story.

What is the style? humorous entertainment.

Are there 3 genre listings? Animal, Comedy, Entertainment

Does the opening line grab my attention? the opening grabs this readers attention well.

Is the structure good for the Reader? very nicely structured making it easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Benjamin thank you for sharing this hilarious story. I have thoroughly enjoyed it.
I think I might have met that mouse before.

Well written and described story, getting the readers attention from the start and keeping it while entertaining.


If I had to make a suggestion:None.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"Just Seeking - Socking It to 'Em"  by Tim Chiu

Clarity: Nice title for this poem.
Style: Inspirational, How-To/Advice, Philosophy

My 2 cents is only one opinion: The first stanza is great.
The second stanza makes good sense.
The third stanza makes me want to say "I know what you mean."
The forth, I hear you, the end is in sight.

Thank you for sharing this entertaining work that has made this reader laugh.


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Review of Open Borders  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Open Borders"  by Sumojo

Does the title describe story? A nice title for this story.

What style? Fantasy short story.

Are there three genre listings? Other. By listing three genres your work will be easier to find by more readers.

My favorite line: -- “Nowhere, just been keeping a low profile. Apparently there’s been a virus going round.--

This is only one opinion: Nice work especially for only one hundred words.
Great dialog.

Thanks for sharing this entertaining work, it is a good read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

My impressions of: "The bounties on nobles and merchants."  by Richard Allen

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this chapter.

What is the style? mythological adventure fantasy.

Are there 3 genre listings? Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Detective

Does the opening line grab my attention? A good opening that grabs the readers attention and makes him want to know more.

Is the structure good for the Reader? Nicely structured story. This makes it easier for the reader while helping the reader to be drawn more into the story.

My two cents worth is only one opinion: Richard, A great job with this story. The best yet. Very realistic flow that holds the readers attention and keeps his interest. This keeps the reader alert while wanting to see the story unravel.

A good structure for this story, that makes it much easier for the reader to picture the scenes and helps them to get into the story better.

Well-written with good descriptions that help the reader to picture the characters and the setting. Keeping the reader's interest and attention.

Strong characters that are well described, helping the reader to picture the characters. Good dialog, this makes the characters more realistic for the reader while holding the attention of the reader and making him want to know more.

WELL DONE!


If I had to make a suggestion: Consider a title to better describe this particular story. A good proof read to edit out any typos or ill fitting phrases.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

My impressions of: "The Last Voyage of Havenlight"  by Rodryn

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this story.

What is the style? Adventure fantasy drama.

Are there 3 genre listings? Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Other

Does the opening line grab my attention?A good opening that grabs this readers attention well.

Is the structure good for the Reader?Well structured story that moves forward at a steady pace, easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Well written story with strong characters and good dialog.

Great descriptions that help the reader picture the scene and get into the story better.

Filled with action and adventure. This helps keep the readers attention.

Well-worded this story has a realistic flow, holding the readers interest.

A nice ending that leaves the reader wanting to turn the page and find out more.

Rodryn, Thank you for sharing this awesome adventure tale, this reader has enjoyed it.

If I had to make a suggestion:Consider a line space between some paragraphs, to make it less intimating for the reader.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

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Review of I Wanna Vote  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"I Wanna Vote"  by AmyJo-Time to get going!

Clarity: A nice title for this poem.
Style: Political poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion:
Very nicely written poem about voting. Short and to the point just the way today's reader likes things. You have said a whole lot in a few words, well done.

AmyJo, I really enjoyed reading this poem thank you for sharing it.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of: "Fine Free Feedback "  by tracker

Does the title describe the story? A good title for this work.

What is the style? Activity personal view.

Are there 3 genre listings? Writing, Writing.Com, Activity


Is the structure good for the Reader? A nice structure that makes it easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Well written honest and realistic work.

These lines have a poetic flow--What did I bring to the site? I bring words. I bring a bright spirit. I bring only a minute part of me. I love words. I love to write words--


Indeed there is a positive vibe here at WDC.

I like that you put it on your just do it list. I need to fix me a just do it list. I think it would help.

If I had to make a suggestion:None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of: "And The Birds Have Flown"  by Elliot

Does the title describe the story? A nice title for this story.

What is the style? Nature, poetic.

Are there 3 genre listings? Animal, Nature, Writing

Does the opening line grab my attention?The opening could better grab my attention.

Is the structure good for the Reader?A good structure. Easy for the reader.

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Elliot, this is a beautifully written nature poem. Thank you for sharing it. This reader has enjoyed it.

Well worded in a poetic manner. This work has a nice flow and is very entertaining.

If I had to make a suggestion:None

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

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