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Hello Raven2
another deeply emotional poem from you!
I have come to expect a certain feel from your poems, a certain atmosphere that you infuse your poems with...and this definately has it!!
You have combined good rhyme with powerful emotions and come out with this!
Overall a great poem!
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Hello lovedragoon
Thanks for requesting this review
I am so honoured by your request
And you have not asked in vain!
I really enjoyed reading your piece. It has some very strong lines and the repetivness is quite effective.
I would ask why you capitalized a few of the "A"s but other than that I found nothing wrong with it.
Overall you have created a deep and powerful poem!
Well done!
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Hello Roberto Carlos Noguera
I really liked the deep thoughts your poem provoked in me!
Such words are powerful and you have brought them accross to the reader as such.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem
Overall a very well written and wonderful poem!
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Hello Mr. Dressing-gown
Hey I like your poem!
I liked it so much I couldn't resist reviewing it
Really good content and the meaning is great!
I like the imagery and the emotions in this
And overall a wonderful poem!
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Hello Jordan Langer
You have created a highly enjoyable poem here!
I like the rhyme though in some places it is off.
And the content is great!
I really enjoyed reading this
And overall it is a great poem!
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HEllo: Lady Catalaina
I really enjoyed reading this piece!
You say to "read it aloud dramatically" so I did just that. And you are right it really gets the emotions flowing in the piece!
I LIKE THE DRAMA!!
Overall this is really great!
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This is very important to do! it helps potential readers deide if they want to read it and it helps you by getting readers!
Anyway I like the poem!
It is a little repetitive in that you use "dark" many times
But if you found soms synonyms for it i think this would be great. Even though it is really good right now
You are right it does have a deeper meaning! This is a great trait to have when writing, good job!
Overall an enjoyable and well written poem!
This is a great descriptive poem!
The imagery is great as is the atmosphere.
Sometimes it seems as though we as readers can almost touch the rocks in front of us!
I really enjoyed reading this
Overall a wonderful poem!!
This is a good poem!
I like how you describe things it really brings the reader into this poem!
I also like the imagery we really "see" what you describe as if it were right in front of us.
Overall a good poem!
I like the thought of this poem. the overall feeling is great and the atmosphere surrounding the stanzas is great!
I would however suggest not double spacing the lines this will make it easier for he reader to actually read but other than that it is great!
these are all really good short poems!
I like the use of form and style and you followed the particular forms very well.
The imagery is great and the content is too
Overall a great collection of haiku's and tanka's
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Hello gildedpoet3
WOW. these are really great poems!!
I like how they are separate but they all seem to have something that bonds them together.
your skills are great
And overall this is a wonderful collection!!!
I like this poem because it seems as though every word were chosen for a specific purpose and that is a great trait to have!
I really enjoyed reading this poem
And overall it is great!
Thanks for sharing it!!
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Hello mm_thompson
This is a strong poem!
The descriptions and imagery is great
and the content is real
I like how you chose your words and they flow very well
overall a great poem!
typo:
This is a really wonderful poem
the content is so real and very well presented
I like how you transform your words into something beautiful
And overall it is very enjoyable.
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Hello Docfather
I really enjoyed reading your poem!!
The content is great and the meaning is interesting.
You have done a great job in writing it and it is an enjoyable piece
well done overall!!
I really enjoyed reading your poem!!!
You have incorperated some great lines into this poem
And I like the rhyme, though sometimes it sounds a bit forced
Overall a great poem
I liked the creativity of making your essay in verse!
It is really inventive, and I like it a lot!!
I have one question though...Why are there numbers at the end of some lines?
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Hello Tearcollector
I really enjoyed the emotions from your poem!
You have captired the essence of this emotion and successfully brought it out onto the page!
Well done overall
Sad lines
I'll be lonely for the rest of my
Miserable life.
Depression sets in.
the world is new, a wonderful realm,
and to think that here i had finally come.
Ummm...just thought I might let you know
I actually liked the entire poem, but that part especially!
You have done a great job with the wording and it flows very nicely.
Overall a wonderful read!
Thanks for sharing it!
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Hello behindthelights
This is an intregueing Free Form poem!
You have expressed your thoughts and really provoked a response from the reader.
I enjoyed reading your work and Would like to encourage you to....WRITE ON~!!!! WRITE FOREVER~!!!
Overall a great poem!
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Hello
Ha! I love your title! it fits very well.
I enjoyed reading your poem very much
the content is exciting and I like the emotions you put into it!
Overall a wonderful job
You have writen a very heartfelt poem!
I like your description of yourself and the similarities between wolves.
You have expressed your feelings and thought very well
Great Job!
I LOVE your poem!!
It is so beautiful and the descriptions are great!
You hae translated your feelings and emotions very well
And altogether you have created a wonderful poem!
I LOVE THIS PART:
By the world's standards, it's an ugly day.
It is gray, dark, rainy, with a chill in the air.
But, to me, today has been beautiful.
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