I really enjoyed reading this poem!!
I am in the "Stretch" as well and just wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed your poem The vocabulary is great and overall a great use of form and creativity!
This is a wonderful heart-felt poem!
The content is warm and full of strong emotions and the reader can catch a glimpse of this world. This is a well written free form poem and overall I thought it was great!
Plot/Meaning Summary:
An excerpt from your Trinity Lost series/stories
First impressions:
A good exerpt that fill in the reader on some important things and has many reat links to the other items in this series of stories.
Writer/Reader, Comment/Suggestions:
comments only...I have no suggestions because I spotted nothing that could be better! I liked the references to the other items and the easy access you provide. I also liked how organized everything was.
Technical Comments/Suggestions:
none to speak of you are so careful of your writings they are great!
Overall Thoughts:
Another wonderful addition to the ever growing repituare of great writings by you. I have enjoyed watching all of your characters through all of the various stories and urge you to KEEP WRITING! You are great!
And Thanks for sharing your work with us
This is a great free form poem!!
The content is intreguing and I enjoyed reading your poem immensly!
Overall this is a wonderful poem
And very well written!
Thanks for the great read.
This is delightful little poem devoted to your grand-niece
It is heart warming and a joy to read!
you have given much care to each and every word in it and your passion shows through.
Overall a very well written poem!
I really like the content of your poem!
The message that you are saying with this piece is very inspirational and heartfelt and as a reader we can appreciate this.
i ejiyed reading the entirity
And Overall ayou have done a great job with this poem!
This is a great poem!
You have done a wonderful job catching the readers attentions
And you successfully hold it to the very end!
The repeated line" Because of you" sort of reminded me of the Kelly Clarkson songP But other than that I found this very original!
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Once more do I find myself reviewing you oh Electra
And you have definately kept the best for last!
This is a very deep and emotional poem. That has powerful emotions a nd a deeper meaning. You have done a wonderful job in creating this piece. Well done!!
Another good poem
Though I think this one is a bit rougher it has potential!! the content is a little confusing and the form would be better if the stanzas were more regulated but overall a great start and keep writing!
WOW...I am in awe of you right mow...
You are what you say a "true writer" you took the thoughts out of a writers head and wrote them down very eloquently. The meaning of this article is really profound and this part is now one of my favorite quotes:
"skillful poets can write amazing sestinas or villanelles, but real poets can write the ineffable sense of emotion. Real poets can turn inexplicable thoughts and feelings into words."
So deep and wonderful!
Thank you for sharing this wonderful bit of thought with us here at WDC
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hello again dpatrick
I am reviewing your folder "poems about emotions" because we all know that folders need love too
So here is some love
I really enjoyed filing through your poetry and have found some really inspirational pieces here
Great work
I continued to walk without stopping
Not knowing where I was going
Sorry but I’m never coming back
WONDERFUL MEANING TO YOUR POETRY!
i REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS POEM!! The iimagery is great and the vcabulary is perfect
I liked how it seems as though you picjk each word with care and then create a great poem
tHIS IS A WONDERFUL STORY!
The plot is very interesting and the vocabulary is high caliber!
I have enjoyed the entire story and hope to see more of your work in the future
This is a really original poem!
The contetn is great and you sexpress you emotions to the reader very well.
I enjoyed reading your poem!
Thanks for sharing it with us here at WDC
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Hello sweetpoet
I loved your poem!
The emotion you express in it is really strong I specially liked this line:"you gave me nothing but an empty heart."
It is so heartfelt and real!
Thanks forsharing it with us here at WDC
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Hello L. A. Powell
I have just finished reading your poem "Prince"
And now am happily reviewing it!
Plot/Meaning Summary:
An excerpt from "The Diaries of Lisa Lansing" Part IV - Trinity Lost. A short descriptive poem.
First impressions:
Deep thoughts and a great poem were the first thoughts that came to mind when I saw this. I then noticed how descriptive it was and was very intregued by the conent.
Writer/Reader, Comment/Suggestions:
This is a great poem! It is very descriptive and well thought out and it compliments your story very well.
Technical Comments/Suggestions:
Nothing that I saw Great job
Overall Thoughts:
I really enjoyed reading this poem! Your talent shines through onto the page. And you have done a great job in expressing yourself and your character.
And overall a wonderful poem
This is a beautiful poem about a loved one
The descriptions are vivid
And the emotions are tangible
Overall a wonderful job!!!
Thank for sharing it with us here at WDC
Em
WRITE ON~!! WRITE FOREVER~!!!
"Everything is just so perfect, it all feels so right
I've always loved you, but I fell even deeper into love tonight"
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Hello Spaniel
You have created such a powerful poem!
The emotions seep through the page and as the last line is read the reader is dreading every moment! We gasp for air as he does and the reader is pulled into this poem at the first line!
Overall a wonderful poem
Em
WRITE ON~!!! WRITE FOREVER~!!!
as I float with the wind I shall utter my final cry.
This is a thought provoking article. The content raises many questions and you address the mysterious topic of what is after death very well. The topics and examples you give are strong and I think that overall this is a very good article!
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Hello grusblot,
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem!
You have done a great job in expressing your emotions and as a reader we can really understand this!
I spotted few technical mistakes
Overall a wonderful poem!
I really loved reading this piece!!!!
The descriptions are fantastic
And the imagery is strong
You have done very well with this
And created a wonderful work of poetry
Thanks for sharing it with us here at WDC
Another emotionally charged piece from you!
All of your pieces have a certain quality about them-it is hard to explain...they are so raw and real and you have done such a great job in bringing your emotions to the page!
Great job!!
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Hello there,
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece!
The feelings and emotions aew ewally strong
The content is great! and enjoyable to read.
And there were few to no technical mistakes
Overall a wonderful piece!!
Em
WRITE ON~!!! WRITE FOREVER~!!!!!
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The vocabulary is great and overall a great use of form and creativity!
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But other than that I found this very original!
