so true so true!
the content in this poem is wonderful and the writing is high quality
the emotions are powerful and the feelings are well put
overall this is a wonderful poem
the content is good
the technical sode is flawless
and the emotions are powerful
overall this is a great poem!!
Good job
this is a great part:
Words cannot illustrate the breath of your spirituality,
For that reason life can not be paraphrased so easily.
Because lack of phrases chain your contemplation,
So can words hinder your salvation.
Therefore linguistics shall not forever stand,
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Hello there,
this is a very good poem!
the content is interesting
the wording and vocabulary is perfect
and the technical aspect os flawless!
overall this is a wonderful poem
good luck in the contest!
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Hell
this is such a great poem!
the content is intregueing and it is very well written!
the technical aspect is very good and I saw no grammatical errors
overall this is a wonderful poem!
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Hello there,
this is a really awesome poem!
It illustrates what could have actually happened and the content is great!
I like the descriptions and the vocabulary.
I didn't spot any grammatical errors
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hello there,
this is a really great poem!!
the content is meaningful and heartfelt and the emotions are expressed
a great poem with few grammatical errors
Overall well done!!
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Hello,
I spotted this on the review request page so I thought I might check it out.
This is a very good start to a poem. At least I hope this is a start because it has so much potential but it is so short...
I would really love to see more of this, but for now the one stanza is incredible,
Great job!!
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hello,
this is a very true little tale.
The content is great and real and it is written well
overall this is a wonderful piece
great job
keep it up
THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WITH US HERE AT WDC
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hi/bye for now,
I am getting pretty tired now, I think this last review is all I can manage. I hope that these reviews were helpful...they were supposed to be
I am simply stating my opinion but you are the final judge they are your pieces of art.
Anyway I will leave on a high note. This last poem is great. The emotions real and realistic. The portrayal is excellant. And overall you have done wonders with words! :)
Em
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HELLO-again
This one i would recommend keeping in its original format. It is great just as it is!! I loved reading it and really have no complaints. You cease to amaze me no matter what so I will simply have to enjoy myself for once
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'ello,
I am seeing a pattern here. Your poems are vents for your particular emotion at the time. This is not bad, actually it is very good-it gives life and feeling to the piece. But the downside to it is the lack of organization. The flow is sometimes interrupted by silly things like a comma where there shouldn't be one, or a new sentence where it should continue. These things, and many more, can easily be remidied by using your instinct. Feel where the line should stop, don't just put it there because that is what the grammar book said. Experience what you were experiencing at the time you wrote this and the flow will come naturally. You are a wonderful poet I know that you will find the perfect timing for all of these pieces
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Hi,
this is another very strong pieces. all of the emotions are swrling around in the words that you chose. They are so strong and expressive. Another wonderful poem you have created!
This has the same problems as the last one in that it would be easier on the reader if it had some sort of spacing and stanzas, but of course as the author that is completely your call.
Overall this is a wonderful poem
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Hello,
you seem to have a lot of incredible poems in you port so if you don't mind I think i am going to give you a port raid-at least a partial raid.
hope you don't mind...
this is a really powerful poem
you really make the reader feel the emotions that you are feeling. the strength in itself is great though i do think that it could be enhanced by creating stanzas. At the moment the poem sort of runs on and on with no breaks or anything. This can be a problem as it becomes harder for the reader to actually read the lines when they are all together. And also it will create a certain flow to the piece, thus creating better *stars*. And i think we all know *stars* can always cheer us up
This is a very strong piece!!
the emotions are very real and they are felt strongly
with so few words you have created a powerful piece and it is very well done!
some things that I saw:
couldn't
space in between comma and next word
I just
period at the end
this is a very thought provoking piece!! your feelings on the matter are very strong as you claerly state. I think that many will not agree and many will but I will stand nuetral on this.
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Hello
this is a very good poem! the feelings simply seep through the page. the word placement really adds to the drama of the overall outlook. The experience is real so relatable. And overall you have done a very good job with this!!
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hello there
this is a great story!!
it grabs the readers and immerses them quickly
the content is good
the writing is great
and i spotted very few if any grammatical errors
Overall you have done a wonderful job!!
Well done
Hello,
this is a very descriptive short about the classroom from a childs perspective.
the content is good
and the vocabulary is wonderful
the desiciveness of the descriptions is great
Overall a wonderful short
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hello,
this is a really true and sort of repressing poem
it shows the true meaning of time and memories and such
and it was full of emotion
this is a very strong poem
and I really enjoyed reading it!!
this is a very good llittle poem
i really enjoyed reading it he content is great
and i spotted no huge problems, grammatical or other
overall this is a wonderful poem
thanks for sharing it with us
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hello there,
this is a short little prologue to wonderful writings yet to come
this is a very beginnig and i hope you do continue to write about this
the content so far is good and i think this will be great!
Em
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