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HELLO,
this is a great story!! well written and wonerfully presented to the reader
I actually have one thing that i found wrong with it
the paragraphs are really hard to follow
I think this could be improved by a space in between the lines
this will make thing s=easier on the reader
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hello,
this is a very good poem
I really enjoyed the descriptions and the imaging
it is very well written!!
The content is great and I spotted no grammatical mistakes
Overall i really liked it!!
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Hello,
this is a short story
but i enjoyed it immensly
it was entertaining to the 385th word
overall you have created a wonderful little story
And I liked it very much
thanks for sharing it
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hello there,
this really caught my eye so I decided to read and review it
it is a little rough but has wonderful potential
the content is obviously near to your heart
and the emotions in this are very real
overall a great job
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Hello there,
This is a very fun and silly poem
I really had a great time reading it
all of the things expressed in this are completely real
I really enjoyed reading this poem
thanks for sharing it with us here at WDC
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Hello again,
another interesting poem
your mission i believe is fulfulled
you have created a strong
meaningful and real
Poem! overall very descriptive
and a good poem
GREAT JOB
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Hi there,
This is a very strong poem
The emotions are really powerful
And the content is rather sad
you have done a wonderful job with creating this poem
And overalll this is a great piece!!
Oh My Gosh...
This is such a sad story
It is so beautifully written it made me cry at the end..
the content is relatable and real
And the execution is flawless
Overall a wonderful story
You should win the contest!!Good luck!
WOW... this is jam packed with talent and wonder
the number and quality of the poems in here have all gone to me giving you a five star rating
this folder is a very fine collection of wonderful pieces varying from genre to genre
a great variation of style
WOW...this is turning into a port raid....if I can't restrain myself it will!!
Man , I am running out of things to say because there are no problems with any of your work that I have seen so far
you truely have a gift with words and you have been using it wonderfully
don't stop...ever!
Hey It's me again....that was a really long shower
No, actually to be honest I completely forgot to finish reviewing your poems...oops
Anyway Here I am now reviewing your poem.
this is an interesting piece...the content is good, but the formation of the lines and the formatting onto the page is a little off putting.
It would be a grat deal better if all of the lines were in a vertical line.
Otherwise the reader doesn't know which way to read-horizantal, or vertical?
Umm..the content is good
Overall a good poem!
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Hello,
Your poem has a lot of meaning and emotions.
You have portrayed these feelings with great style
And the end result is phenominal!!
Overall this piece is really really wonderful
Great Line:
So if only you could,
Make way.
Em
WRITE ON~!!!! WRITE FOREVER~!!!
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Hello,
this is a very real poem
the petals fall everyday and yet the dance must end eventually
you have done a wonderful job of keeping it real
And this came out to be an amazing poem!!
Put spaces between your commas
Other than that no huge errors
Overall very well done
Em
WRITE ON~!!!!! WRITE FOREVER~!!!!
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HEY,
well I couldn't resist taking anoher look at your poetry so here is another review
I didn't fully read all of the poems in this folder-there are so many!!
But I did skim most of them...and what I saw was wonderful!!
You are so multi-talented there are many genres in here. From emotional and philosophy, to family, animals and relationship.
Overall a great collection of very good poems
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Hello,
This is such a real poem!! It shows just how much you are individual, and it shows your anger at your parents for not being okay with that.
The content is very relatable and real
I saw no noticable grammatical mistakes
And overall this poem is so so good that I just can't describe how real it is
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Hello there,
This is a very interesting poem about very realistic happenings
A warning for global warming
and very well done
the chosen words really bring a feeling of foreboding to the whole piece
Overall a wonderful poem Great job!!
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Hello again,
Wow, this is a really good poem!! the rhyme is perfect and the it flows perfectly. the content and meaning is flawless. I know feel like thinking about death and life. it has some really deep meanings,
thank you so much for sharing this with us!!
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This is a very deep poem
It may not seem so on the surface but it is full of dark thoughts
the feeling that exudes from the poem
is that of confusion and regret and actually depression
those are the feelings that I experienced reading this
overall a wonderful poem and very well done
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hello chad,
This is a wonderful poem.
It is very powerful and has deep meaning
the metaphor of being on an isle is really very imaginative
and it fits perfectly
wonderful job
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This is a wonderful interpretation of writing.com
most everyone is really nice and very helpful and there are so many things to help newbies move around and become comfortable it's like being right at hom!! this story really amphazises this wonderful aspect of WDC.
You have done a great job creating a story about your experiences. Great job Overall
Aww.. this is a wonderful tribute to those cute little critters called hedghogs!! you have done a wonderful job writing this and there were no huge grammatical mistakes, Overall a wonderful and cute story about those cute little hedghogs
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This was an interesting poem...it shows many fine qualitys and you have done a good job in making the story interesting!! there were no grammatical errors that I saw so that is wonderful and Overall I think that this was a good poem
Awww...I love things about doggies
This was a very cute and entertaining poem!!
You can tell that you really love this little doggie from the emotions in this
I really enjoyed reading this-it made me smile
Well done!!
Wow... this is a really great poem!! the feelings are really poingnant! the emotions are nearly tangible, and it was so amazing reading this!!
You have done a fabulous job with this piece. I spotted no major technical issues. Overall this is a wonderful and heartfelt poem
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