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Review of Fairy-Tale Ending  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Ben Langhinrichs

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Title

I love the title, it's catchy. It also offers mood and tone of the poem.

Rhythm & Flow:

This piece has good rhythm and flow. And you followed the form. Each line flows nicely into the next line.

Imagery & Emotions:

Good word selection, you captured the princesses. I wish you could have written more about other fairy tale princesses.


Conclusion:

I feel this poem is well written and I have no suggestions to offer.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*



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Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello ridinghood

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A cute title, I had to read. And oh my what a laugh. A cute poem, well written with a rhyming scheme. Great imagery too, I can see shoe boxes lining the closet and slipping into the bedroom.

I have to admit the first stanza is my favorite. And I have no suggestions to offer.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


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Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Genipher

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Such as interesting display of words. I had to look up the word that the poem revolved around. And had to read it twice before I understood the definition. Now, I understand the concept, I never understood algebra.

Clever use of words with good imagery. And I feel the emotions written onto this tiny poem. My only suggestion is to split the line Write it down and burn it. It would help the rhythm of the poem.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


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Review of Halloween Night  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Ray Scrivener

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Title

A good title, but common. The Ghostly Tour, more creative and captures the attention of the reader. It does set the tone and mood of the poem.

Rhythm & Flow:

A great rhythm, the pace of the poem moves well. I noticed the rhyming scheme. Each line flows nicely into the next line.

Imagery & Emotions:

Great imagery, I feel like I was walking though on the tour. Good idea and good word selection.


Conclusion:

Follow me through darkened woods,
Ignore that rustling and those growls
For though a famished werewolf prowls
He hunts for younger, tender goods

my favorite stanza. It's dark and spooky and holds a hint of mystery.
Other than the title, I have no suggestion for improvement.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


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Review of One Halloween Eve  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Rhychus

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Title

A good title, it pulls a reader of horror and spooky in. It establishes mood and tone of the poem. I would change to tag line to something that help support the title and highlight the winning and feature at the beginning or ending of the poem.


Rhythm & Flow:

I have written a couple Villanelles, they are fun to write. You followed the form perfectly. The is a good rhythm to the poem. And each line flows nicely into the net line.


Imagery & Emotions:

I can almost hear the howl of the creature. Great job on the imagery, using sight and sound. I can feel the fear of the evil coming. Good word selection.


Conclusion:

From the deep dark shadows of the life I cleave.
There came a plaintive howl one Halloween Eve.
Such dark and spooky refrains.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


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for entry "haiku 2018 #38" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Tinker

As always a terrific poem. A great piece about Autumn for only having three lines.
prinked with golden fallen leaves
love the imagery.

Good luck in the contest. This one is a winner.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


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Review of The Qwirn  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Kelly Lee

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A lovely poem. I love dragons too. The title captures the readers attention. It works well with the poem. There is some rhyming woven into this piece, which helps the rhythm move along at a good pace. Adding in some punctuation would help the flow. And also you don't have to capitalize every line unless you place a period at the end of the previous line.

There is a lot of imagery. I can see the emerald dragons flying about the Earth, protecting the Earth. My favorite lines:
The Qwirn take flight
On wings of iridescent hue
Dragons of Emerald Green



Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


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Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow

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A very powerful poem with the message we will always remember that tragic day in our hearts. Even the title holds power.

There is lots of emotion woven into this poem, sadness but also hopefulness. I still remember where I was at when it happened, work. I watched the tv in horror as the plane flew into the tower.

This piece has a good rhythm and each line flows nicely into the next line. I feel it is well written. I like the second stanza, prayers ascend like perfume of roses for souls. Simply amazing said.

Good luck in the contest.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


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Review of World Peace  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tinker

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I haven't seen you around in a while, I hope life is treating you fair?
Anyway, back to business, Great title, I so wish we could achieve it. This world would be a better place. And I feel it works well with this poem.

I love the different color of roses corresponding to a part of life. The imagery is good and I confess, it brought a tear to me eyes. You followed the form perfectly. This one will be hard to beat. As always good rhythm and flow.

Good luck with the contest.
I really enjoyed reading your poem.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


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for entry "The Negotiation" 
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Huntersmoon

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An interesting poem. I had to laugh. It follows the form perfectly, the rhyming scheme is good. And there is a good rhythm as it moves the story along quiet well. The words flow nicely together.

The title is mysterious and pulled me in, I was curious. It works well with the poem and it sets the tone for this piece.

The imagery is good, I could see the story unfold. As for the emotional side, like I said it made me smile and laugh. Great job.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*



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Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dominique

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An interesting poem. It follows the form perfectly and has a great message. I feel each line flows nicely into the next line. The imagery is good, I feel you have described WDC quiet well.

The title works well with the poem and it sets the tone for this piece as well as setting perspective. I like the different colors used for the beginning word of each line, very creative.

I have no suggestions to offer, this poem is well written.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


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Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Prosperous Snow

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I love this poem. It's makes me want to go outside and share memories with family and friends around a bonfire.

The imagery is great, I can see the scarecrows dancing around the fire. The rhythm moves the poem alone at a good pace. Each line has a good flow as they drift into each other.
Good use of the prompt word. And I feel you followed the form.

I inhale the chill of an autumn dawn,
sigh and sweep the cobwebs from my mind
try to push away another hour of sleep

I like how these three lines come together.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


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Review of Carnival  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Huntersmoon

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Title

An interesting title, it paints a picture of fun and wonder. It establishes mood, tone, and perspective. It lived up to my expectations of the poem.

Rhythm & Flow:

A very interesting appearance on the page. It has a good flow, each line seem to melt into the next line of each stanza. And it has a upbeat rhythm.

Imagery & Emotions:

Great imagery, it was as if I was walking down the midway. This piece invokes happy memories. Good word selection and placement. The last stanza is my favorite, with colorful phrases like the salty taste of memories

Conclusion:

This piece is wonderfully written, I have no suggestion. And good luck in the contest.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*



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Review of When in the Woods  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Tinker

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I must say simply beautiful. I love how you added in the squirrel and made reference to Frost, a wonderful poet. The last two lines have to my favorite. There is so much imagery and emotions woven into this piece. Even the title is good. Excellent word selection and placement. There is power and beauty within this piece. The rhythm moves at a good pace. I have no suggestions.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*



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Review of First Fire  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Genipher

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I really cute poem. It put a smile on my face. I love the way you chose to write it. It has a good rhythm that moves the poem at a good pace. Each line flows nicely into the next line. And you managed to keep a rhyming scheme as well. The title works well with this piece.

Good luck in the contest.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*



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Review of Memories of Home  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello HuntersMoon

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Title

A great title, it works well with the poem. It is enticing and pulls the reader in. It also establishes mood and tone.

Rhythm & Flow:

Good rhyming scheme which helps the flow and rhythm of the poem. The rhythm moves the poem at a good pace. And each line flows nicely.

Imagery & Emotions:

Great imagery. I can see the story unfold as I read. This piece is full of sadness. I hope dad returns soon to be with family. Good word selection and placement.

Conclusion:

I enjoyed reading Memories of Home. I feel it is well written.
Thank you for sharing. Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*



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Review of Looking Eastward  
for entry "🥇 Crows" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello HuntersMoon

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Title

Crows, a good title which caught my attention. The raven is one of my spirit animals, which is cousin to the crow. And I enjoy watching the birds. I feel it fits the poem.

Rhythm & Flow:

You followed the form well. There is a good rhythm. It moves the poem at a good even pace. And each line flows nicely into the next line. Good word selection and placement.

Imagery & Emotions:

I can see the crows circling a field looking for food. They are screeching to other crows flying around in the distance. I feel this piece is well written.

Conclusion:

I like the last stanza because the crows are temping fate. Also the phrase "skyward dance is intriguing. I enjoyed reading Crows.

Thank you for sharing. Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*



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Review of Out in the Fields  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello Hoovers93cannolis

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Title

The title and picture captures the reader attention. I would love to out in the field sitting under a tree right now. It helps to establish the mood and tone of the poem.

Rhythm & Flow:

There is a good rhythm to this piece, it pulls the poem along at a good study pace. Sometimes writing free verse is hard to keep the rhythm going. Each line flows into the next line nicely. One suggestion would be to add some punctuation, it would help with the flow.

Imagery & Emotions:

I get a lot of emotions here. One time I read it and I feel it's a lazy day with no worries. The next time I feel sad because of the dark morning and being another day older.

Conclusion:

I feel this poem is well written, just needs of couple comma's and periods.
Thank you for sharing. Keep on Writing!


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Review of Love's Blossom  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Legendary Mask.

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A short but wonderful poem about nature. I could see the story unfolding as I read this piece. It is full of imagery. Made me wish I was there.

The flow and rhythm work well to make this a good poem. Each line flows nicely into the next line.

Listen to the voices of the turtles
they're saying that we will be one together.
I love these lines. I never thought about listening to turtles.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*



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Review of "The Daffodil..."  
Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Legendary Mask

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Good title, it fits the poem wonderfully. It lives up to my expectations of the poem. And if you enjoy reading about nature, the title pulls in the reader.

The rhythm and flow is good. Each line flows into the next line. I like the appearance of the poem on paper. The words you chose give good imagery to the poem. I have no suggestions to offer.

Thank you for sharing. Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*



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Review by The Dark Faery
Rated: E | (4.0)
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A truely interesting story. I enjoyed reading it. The plot moves along at a good pace. And I could see the story unfold as I read. The title is captivating, it pulls the reader into your story. The hook is good.

One suggestion would be to add a space between paragraphs. And maybe add it some physical description of Anna and Bob.

Thank you for sharing your story. Keep on writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*

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Review by The Dark Faery
Rated: E | (5.0)
The best is yet to come. I love butterflies.

This is an amazing poem. You have captured the essence of the butterfly with your words.

This poem has good rhythm and flow. The imagery is amazing and I can feel the love and joy woven into this piece. The title works well with the poem as well. This poem has beauty, depth and meaning.


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Review by The Dark Faery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Davy Kraken

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Title

Love the title, I found it enticing. It pulled me in to read your story. The title establishes mood and tone.

Rhythm & Flow:

There is good rhythm to this piece. And each line flows nicely into the next line. You used punctuation to help the flow.

Imagery & Emotions:

There is lots of imagery, and I could see the story as I read your poem. I felt a sense of happiness and joy. It makes me want to go outside and see what I can see. Great job.

Conclusion:

delicate leaf
golden waters meandering
crystalline essence glimmer’d in the sunlight
These are great pieces that really make the poem stand out.

Thank you for sharing. Keep on Writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*



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Review of Melting Snow  
Review by The Dark Faery
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow


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Again I'm privileged to review your work. I found your article very interesting and informative. It sounds like a great documentary.

The last paragraph intrigued me the most. Because you state that it tells the story of this man Bab, however, you never see his face. I have to agree with you about Tahirih. It's great to hear that a woman was there and showed her independents as well.

The pace of the article moved nicely, and it is easy to follow. I found no errors and have no suggestions for this piece. I feel it is well written.


Thank you for sharing your story. Keep on writing!


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*

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Review by The Dark Faery
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad you didn't give you on this site. It's one of the best sites for writers. And I've loved your stories you have written for the Show VS Tell class.

Gypsy Ann


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