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Review of Open Your Eyes  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Wow! Well written with words of wisdom. I wish everyone, myself included could read these inspiring words and act upon them. In this fast pace lifestyle is gets harder and harder to relax. We don't have to wait until death overtakes us to experience peace. It is there, we can reach for it at any time.
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Review of Joy and Laughter  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Well written using a display of encouraging words. Laughter has been thought to have healing powers. Joy from within will surely bring you out of the darkest days. Laughter is not only good for the person who is bringing it forth, but it brings joy to those who hear it. It has been my experience that when someone else hears laughter, they question where it is coming from and why. Remember "The Joy of the Lord is my Strength".... Great topic.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)


Really great job expressing thoughts of a day that will be remembered forever. You wrote with words of strength and endurance for the past in in the the future of our nation. In a time of such sorrow, we stood together in unity with our heads held high in rememberance of what once was and will be again. Well written!
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Review of Sorry  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with an emotional impact referring to a typical situation. The word SORRY is easy for some people to say. Sometimes I think it is said without the true meaning coming from the heart. Often the word SORRY is used for an excuse just to put things off. The actions of a person must correspond with their words. Great job.
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Review of The Storm  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with a deep emotional depth. The character has given up and that is definitely a bad place to be. We all are babes in Christ and we will fall, but He is always there to pick us up, if we call on His name. Great job bringing the point across to the readers.
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Review of Crying Heart  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a great out pouring of your heart. Trust me it is not that you like to be hurt. You were in the relationship long enough that you feel you can't make it on your own. You might be mistaking love for the need of what is familiar, afraid of finding something worse if you leave. Great job expressing the emotional details.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job. Well written with such deep emotion that anyone who reads this will surely be touched. These lines remind me so much of my life, where I was and where I am now. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you.
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Review of save me  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with an deep emotional depth. So many people have felt like this character. Without the help needed something that seems so small can turn in to a more serious situation. If we need help the best place way to find it is by seeking God. Simple verses, yet so meaningful. Great job.
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Review of love is blind  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job with descriptive details of emotions leading to the problem of love making one blind. These lines are full of the truth. The question is why does a person get so caught in this type relationship, knowing it is wrong. It is really love or need? Well written article that I hope opens some blinded eyes.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great job in putting the boy friend his place. Some of the language is a little strong, but that is why we have ratings. All too often some girls put up this kind of relationship because their view of their self is so low. This is a good example of strength that all of us could use a shot of.
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Review of Faith in fall  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written and encouraging. We all have our own personal seasons that we pass through. At times it seems that one season may last forever and we are destined to stay there because we don't think we can go forward. Just as the seasons are renewed so is our faith in God. If we trust in Him each season will be a joy and a time of taking off the old and putting on the new.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Written with such deep emotional depth. It is sad that sometimes we don't realize what we have until it is gone. It is much easier to find love than to find someone who will return that love. Great work that gives the reader thought for days to come.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great job bringing out your topic in such detail. I really enjoyed reading your poem. You know how to bring words to life which has the reader clinging to every line. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of My Faithful Tree  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written and filled with descriptive details about the topic. A great deal of emotion expressed through out. Sort of out of the ordinary but captures the readers attention. It is on the verge of being too long. But other than that, it seems to be a great piece of work with talent flowing line after line.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a depth of emotional detail. You have reason to be upset. It sounds like you are being taken for granted. What would happen if you confronted them? It does't look as though you would have much to lose as far as benefiting from a relationship with them. Someone has to take care of you! You picked an interesting topic. Your feelings were expressed in a manner needed to capture the reader's attention.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Written with a great depth of emotional detail, but why would you insist on being in such a relationship? Where will your comfort come from?
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Review of departing love  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very interesting, heart felt story. It gets the readers attention and holds it all the way through. There is some problems with grammer that does take away from your writing. You will really have a great finished product with a little fine tuning. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of To Compare  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a great depth of emotional detail. Keep on looking forward to making it grand. No matter what something else does, your destination is up to you. You are your own person and have your talents need to be brought out.
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Review of Losing Control  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is an interesting topic written with descriptive details. I am not judging, but most people that I have been associated with, have a different temperment than the one you described. Usually when someone gets mad it is more spontaneous. They get mad and don't really take time to consider the consequences. Maybe what you were experiencing was a deeper emotional depth. If you reach down deeper within yourself, I am sure you could compose a poem that might even skock yourself. Great job with this one.
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Review of Sitting & Waiting  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Great potential. You have the readers attention, but you sort leave them hanging. I think if you add more emotion and depth about your dream it would hold the readers longer. I am not being critical. I just think you could make a masterpiece with deeper thought. Great topic, thanks for sharing.
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Review of A Race Well Run  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is so hard to lose a mother. Undoubtedly you must have some of her traits to have written this poem. This is such a deep and emotional piece written in her memory. By reading this it is evident that your mother will live on through your writings and in in your heart. May God bless you.
Great job!
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Review of The Journey  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a depth of emotional detail. It is better to walk alone than to be with someone causing you pain. Maybe it seems there is no other route to take. The choice is our own, but we are never really alone. God will be with you every step of the way.
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Review of Confused Delusion  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I agree the heat can have a tremendous reaction on the body. It will surely make you appreciate shade and a drink of water. Great job bringing out what heat did to the character. I believe it can make someone delusional because I seen someone have a heat stroke.
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Review of Just Keep Dancing  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good job using descriptive details decribing the characters thoughts and emotions. Life can be like dance, but everyone gets a break. Great idea for a comparisom of the two but a little strong. I guess it depends on the lifestyle. Both have their slow and rapid pace, but thank God we have a choice. Very interesting writing leaving it up to the reader to fill in their opinion of what is going on between the lines.
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Review of Cannot Help It  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with emotional depth decribing how one sided love feels to the one who is doing all of the giving. I know how bad it hurts, but you keep on trying, thinking you can win or earn that love. I think some people are incapable of giving love, they are takers and users. I had that I kind of relationship and the one who didn't give love had me thinking it was all my fault. I know now it was mind games for I have found real love and we are as one.
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