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Review of I Miss  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A great job paying tribute to your grandma. It was filled with deep heartfelt emotion throughout its entirity. Everyone needs sweet memories of a grandma in their life. They are there to love and spoil us in a way no one else can do. As you progress in life and one day become a grandma yourself you will even more the importance of having one. They help instill precioous memories that will never be forgotten. Well written, thanks for sharing.
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Review of Love is  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a wonderful depth of descriptive details about a subject we all are familer with. Great work, I wouldn't change a thing. I just want to add a little thought for later days. Everything you wrote was from a positive aspect. Well think about the negative for a moment. Love isn't the perfection we all wish it was; it is only part of the time. During the times that quarrels or mishaps take place, that shining light goes a little dim. But, what is so wonderful about true love is after the problems are over; the light will shine brighter than ever and your bond will tighten.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written leaving the reader to fill in the missing lines and to go over in their mind the what ifs and what ifs not. You know if you put these two questions on a chart or an imaginary scale one or the other will come out on top. Yes, it was worth the cost. The only way to makes new memories is to put the old in the past. The old ones must move in order to store the new ones. After all if things were that great, then why would you have any questions. Life is too precious and short to spend getting stessed out. Move on out of the stress zone. It will make you sick.

Great topic chosen. We all could use some help.
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Review of I'M NOT PERFECT  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well written full of emotional depth related to a walk with the Lord. We are none perfect, but we each one have a journey through life. It is our choice to make our own decisions. Great job with rhyme and getting the message accross. If we keep our eyes on God we will make it through. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Explosions  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well Written with vivid descriptive details of the past, present and future. A great job revealing the situation in short form yet filled to the brim with information. From a peaceful past to a future that we don't want to consider being real. It doesn't matter if we close our eyes, it is still coming, some of it is here now.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written with descriptive details pertaining to the title. Any kind of violence is uncalled for and should be reported. This writing would be more interesting if it were a little longer.
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Review of Before I Met You.  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written bringing an emotional depth in direct reference to the title. Life certainly changed after she met the one she loved. Love should make a huge positive change in your life. A change that will last forever, for both parties.
Great job expressing what life is like with love and without.
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Review of make-up  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with total reference to the title. This hits home with so many readers. Hiding behind make-up, each one hiding something different; hiding the pain they feel inside, thinking it won't show on the outside. Then some putting home a different type of make-up, shocking amounts or colors. It a way they are trying to reach for help, because they can't deal with what is on the inside. Great work with a depth of emotion shown, yet hidden.
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Review of Piano Man  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with strengh and weakness being shown. An emotional depth that is different but not unusal in seniors. The memories of the past far outweighing the present or the future. As other things in is his life are slowly slipping away; he holds tightly to the one thing he does best, not for glory, but survival. Great job.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with emotional depth that is brought about in few words. But, getting the point accross quickly without adding to the length. The four seasons listed separately with descriptive details of love so strong that went cold. Great job telling so much in such a few lines.
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Review of By Yourself  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a large emotional impact presented to the reader.
You don't have to be by yourself to get depressed, someone else can bring you down. The best the thing to do is be around positive people. Try and force yourself to go out and do something. Take a walk and enjoy nature. Another thing is you can make a chart with the things you like about yourself on one side and things you don't like on the other side. You will find you are as bad as you thought. Then try working on changing the negatives into positive, but slowly. Try some hobbies, do something you have always wanted to do. Also change diet to more healty foods. It is up to you.
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Review of What am I doing?  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)


From the descriptive details, I would say you are riding a snow sled down a hill, then walking up the hill and sliding down again.

Well written with details painting a vivid picture of where you are at, what you are experiencing and feeling while you are sleding . Great job bringing such a clear picture to the reader.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)


Well written using descriptive detail with reference to the title. Such a great job in relating your relationship with the Lord. All other relationships may fail but this one will last forever. Keep up the good work.
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Review of My Music.  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with reference to the title. Music seems to be your emotional outlet. You seem to be good at writing poetry. Have you tried writing your own music. Since music seems to benefit you and you can rhyme; why don't you put it together? It is just a suggestion, it might open up a whole new world.
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Review of The Thin Line  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow what a great story. Well written with a depth of emotion that keeps you holding on for every word, not knowing what is next. Great job, I enjoyed it tremendously. I wish I could do half that good.
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Review of Who Said?  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with descriptive depth of emotion towards the same sex. I am not sure about the title Who Said, are you asking who said it is wrong. There is several comments on that subject both positive and negative. I think that has to be answered by the one in love. You are responsible for your own actions. I have a son that falls into this category. I am not saying I approve, but I don't love him any less. He and his mate have been terrific to me always helping me. I have tried to be open minded about the situation. I went to a Charlie Brown Drag Show on Mother's Day. I have been to two gay bars. All this was a little hard for me since I had been a preacher's wife for years. I rather have my son gay than not at all.
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Review of Miles Away  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a great depth of feeling brought about in a sweet way that is not overbearing, yet getting the point accross. The writing sort flows gracefully leaving an anticipation of what is coming next.
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Review of The Silent City  
Review by highhopes
Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Well written and full of descriptive depth directed towards the title. The reader gets a actual feeling of being there and being part of the scenery. Great job bringing it together in the limited space given.
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Review of Smoke Away 1-1-10  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Good job at expressing your emotions. You need to tigthen up on spellng and grammer. When you write an article, try reading over a few times before you finish. It is great to get your feelings out, but the reader can follow you better if you are more detailed and in order.
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Review of Love  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)


Well written with a touch of humor and a depth of meaning. It is so simple and deep at the same time. I love it.
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Review of Hallway Movie  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written with a great amount of reference to the topic. But really who brought who out.
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Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a great depth of believing in what you are writing. It came from past experience and lessons learned. This article was written for encouraging others in their walk and not to just have a new listing. I agree the journey of life is not easy, but at least each day is lived only once and we don't have to repeat it. In a way we are getting education in God's school and it is never over. Some of us must take more lessons or go through more battles because He has a greater job for one us to do or maybe some are more obedient.
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Review of Birthdays  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written and funny to some extent. I wish it could have been longer.
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Review of ABUSE AND AFTER  
Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a depth of emotion not usually revealed in an abuse cause. After staying in a marriage for that long, I would think the heart would be broken. I know it appears she stayed for the sake of the boys. But, she seems to have too strong of a personality to have put up with any type of abuse. Otherwords with her to have kept her self-respect and remained strong in spirit as portrayed; you would think she and the boys would have gotten out earlier. Good job, I may have misunderstood; just the opinion of a women who lived in a abuse for 32 years.
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Review of The Winding Road  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written, informative with action to catch the readers attention. The ending is kind of sad because a journey in life has ended. Thanks for sharing.
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