Well written with air of excitement by a writer with a geat imagination, but not getting too carried away. The article is sort of long but it just flows perfectly. I have never seen such a great written piece with rhyme never failing. With it always keeping in pace with what the writer is saying. It is filled with deep descriptive and action packed words that add even more to the topic. Wow I could never write with such high quality. Thanks for sharing.
Well written, keeps you holding on with a depth of suspense. The emotioal and action level are exactly what it needs and not over bearing. The point of a promise kept stands out making it all serve a purpose,
Good job, the definition of time is brought out in several ways. I think if the writer had put more of their own self into the writing and liven it up some it would have made a stronger point with more emotion. That is just my opinion. It is great just like it is, thanks for sharing.
Well Written, with putting the stage and script at a different time and place. This is a new kind of love for me. I guess you can be smitten from afar, but it seems that first touch sort of finalizes your feelings by removing some questions about the unknown.
Good job, how right you are it isn't the shoes, but the footprints left behind. You might want to think abut one more thing. It will make a difference where the footprints are made.
Good job, This was first love poem I have read of this type. It had humor that just kept rolling and rolling along. There some positive aspects brought out for a having a dog in the picture. I don't think he would abuse you or be unfaithful. But all in all this type relationship wouldn't last forever because you would eventually want more than he could give.
Alesson learned that helped so many others along the line. It is amazing that one person obeying God can cause so many so many blessings. I enjoyed reading this article, the same as the other work of yours, you are truly blessed with a talent. I will catch you later.
Great job, so much detailed descriptive words and deep feelings, it makes the reader feel as if if they are part of the surroundings. The sea is full of so many mysteries that have not yet unfolded. I enjoyed reading this piece. It is filled with excitement and sorrow that blend well together in this case. And by the way I have seen photos of Puffins.
Well written, informative,descriptive with a deep emotional depth.
This was a very touching and heart breaking poem. To give up everything and not be remembered. I know of another instance when someone gave his life that we might be free. Jesus came that we might be free, yet some people won't even acknowledge is birth or His excistiance. This world has turned into a selfish unconcerned place.
Well written,
Thank God, no matter how small we are we can call on him to reach out and pull us into safety. There are so many children that don't realize they have God to call on.
My children and I were in abuse for years and reading this brought tears to my eyes. This is the most sad and emotional piece I have read yet. Thanks for sharing.
A walk through the woods is great. I have a hammock on a mountain top where I lie and enjoy God's vast creation. It is also a great place to read, pray and just get in touch with your inner being.
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