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Review of Angel eyes  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with a depth of descriptive details pertaining to the topic. It is filled with a balance of emotion not written about every day. When you look into the eyes of the one you love this is a great example of what should be seen and felt. It helps to answer the questions in your heart. It is so full of passion and romance. God sent me the same kind of love. A great job putting your feelings on paper.
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Review of Summer Sunset  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written and full of descriptive details helping to set the scene. And even flow of emotions was brought out on the lighter side and not too heavy. Great job in telling a short story in poetry form. I have been helping a lady who is 86 years old. On one hand she has been blessed with seeing and doing so much, but now she is looking forward to the end in one sence. It so good to have a companion with someone, even though they think they are ready, they don't want to be alone. Great job, thanks for sharing.
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Review of The Heart  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You chosen a great topic and you did a fantastic job with descriptive details giving vivid flow through out. I have sometimes described my heart as being made of porcelin or fine china. No matter what it is made of when it is broken it is a major problem putting it back together. You are so right love is needed for the mending and of course as a caretaker. All to often we give our heart too freely and damage occurs, but with true love it can be mended. This is well written and has a lesson for the reader. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a depth of descriptive words that bring out the main point. There is an emotioal balance flowing through out. Great job with rhyming. It is such a pleasure waking up beside your true love with all these feeligs going on inside. If the love is strong and really true, these thoughts will come easy because you are a part of each other. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Help Us Help YOU!  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your advertising this site would help in growth. If readers would visit one time I am sure they would appreciate and enjoy this site. I have been a member since 1-30-10 and it has absolutely become a major part of my life. I love writing and expressing my thoughts on paper which helps reduce the depression still lingering from my abusive past. Everyone loves to read the words Good Job, especially after being told for years you are stupid and no good for nothing. I have such a emotional past that I can relate to the items I review with a uderstanding of been there and done that. Thanks so much for letting me be a part of Writers.com. It is breath of fresh air for me.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading your poem. You chose a great topic to write about. Well written with a depth of descriptive details which worked great bringing out the emotions. The rhymn is flowing from the beginning to the end. Every girl does think about be a ballerina but there are not too many who pursue the career. I am sure it takes great physical and emotional strengths bound together. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Green Poem  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written about a topic that is too often taken for granted. It is filled with descriptive details that bring out the emotional balance that you were acheiveing. Great job with an intense meaning. Nature is there for us to enjoy not destroy. When is ruined we can't replace it. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with a great idea in mind. When you write what you feel, it helps with inner healing and builds yourself up to face the unknown journey of life ahead. Don't let anyone discourage you in any way. We all have something important to say, each in a different way. I got upset with one of the reviewers on this site yesterday. I gave her all my points and quit. But I enjoy writing and reading so much, I decided to give it another try. You are doing great. Keep on keeping on. I am sorry I don't have any points to give you.
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Review of Sprout My Wings  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with great descriptive depth pertaining to the topic. Heartfelt emotion through out. Great job writing about a sprouting wings. If we could sprout wings anytime we choose, life would be easier to deal with. At least we wish it were that way. The thing is when we came back down, the same problems would be waiting on us. One day we can sprout permanent wings that will last forever. Thanks to our good lord. I enjoyed your writing.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My favorie topic to write about and the hardest to find words to describe. Well written with and equal flow of emotional depth expressed through out. Everyone doesn't get blessed this type love. It took me 54 years to find it. Great job. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with descriptive and emotioal detail in reference to te topic. I enjoyed reading about your knight in shinging armor. I believe you could make it a little stronger if it were longer with more detail. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Dont Leave.  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a deep emotional depth brought out my such heart-felt lines. Great job expressing your feelings on paper in order need keep the one you love. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of The Forest  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a depth of descriptive and emotional details. Getting in touch with nature helps one get in touch with their-selves. A great title chosen to write about. A forest is usually taken for granted just liike the one who created it. Thanks for sharing
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Review of A Kiss  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great job using such descriptive details pertaining to the subject. A kiss remembered in so many different ways. Every kiss given leaving a different emotional effect on the giver and receiver. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of I Am A Cornfield  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with a depth of details that makes you feel you are the crop of corn. It grabs the readers attention with a even flow and rhyme. The ending is so cute and unexpected. I loved it. Great job. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
If you wanted something out of the ordinary and gross, then you achieved your goal. Written with decriptive and informative details that describe more than some readers would like to hear. On the other-hand other readers will fall out of their chairs laughing. Great job coming up with a topic that will cause controversy. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Homeward Bound  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a depth of descriptive details decribing the emotions felt that were obivously so strong they kept pulling him back to her and home. All to often we don't realize what we have until we feel it slipping away or until its gone. Great job in expressing the inner most feelings of love. Words for the readers to keep running over in their minds.
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Review of Moving On  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well written with a depth of descriptive and emotional details that set the background for a heartbreaking ending. The beginning set a stage for the emotional outburst that put a stop instantly, to the speculations being made by the movers. The ending leaves you holding on for more. How much did they pay? I am sure it wasn't too much in the parents eyes. There had to be an astonishing look on those guys faces when they heard the real story. Great job, holding the readers attention with leaving them hanging on for more. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Great topic chosen to write on. I agree with what you are saying about God being busy. He is always there for us. He never goes on vacation. I think you expressed some great thoughts. But it might have been simplier and had more impact on the reader, if you had written a shorter version. You made some repetative remarks with mistakes in grammer. I not picking on you in any way. Any time something is written in order to praise God it is great. He looks at our heart and He is surely worthy to be praised. I think it might be easier for you express yourself in a shorter story or maybe poetry. If you get a chance, please go into my portfolio and read (How easy we forget 1641254). Keep up the good work. May God bless you.
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Review of Unspoken  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written filled with a depth of deep thoughts pertaining to the topic. I agree that silance is a form of communication. You can say more with a smile or a look than with a thousand words. This can be a positive when you are with the one you love, but it can also cause problems when you are trying to hide yours emotions and their written all over your face. Great job choosing a topic and bringing it forth yo the reader.
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Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written in making reference to the title. It could have used alittle more descriptive detail. How do the faith stay and leave at the same time. I agree that it is hard to mind the man of your dreams, so when you do, it is best to hold on to him. It took me 53 years to find mine. Good job bringing out your emotions.
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Review of Pumpkin Eater  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great story for the Halloween season. Well written with a depth of descriptive details that leads the way. If we could only resist being curious about the unknown. It keeps you sitting on the edge of your seat. Then, Roger is gone, leaving the rest to your imagination.
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Review of Ghostwriter  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! What a great story. Written in such a manner, it just keeps you holding on for the next line. What an experience, that had such a great impact on more than one life. Is this a true story or had you rather not say? It is this the type writing where you can't put the book down. Good job. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Going Solo  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well written with descriptive detail about, but at the same time icking yourself up before you hit bottom. It this situation you found yourself in the middle of flying solo before actually crashing. A great lesson learned, you can make it on your own. You felt the pain, but realized it was up to you to take action. It has a continous flow through-out. Great job getting your point accross.
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Review of I want more  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A love story filled with emotional needs crying out for attention. Well written with a great job getting your point accross. I understand the need for more, but are you seeing at the right place. Be careful, a broken heart might be just around thecorner.
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