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Review of Walking  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good job discussing a walk through the journey of life. The road is not always smooth, but it easier not walking alone. A poem written in simple form yet the meaning runs deep. Very interesting, thanks for sharing.
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Review of The Art of Love  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written with a depth of descriptive details about love. All these things learned about love, but what happened to the character that all this love was bestowed upon. No, i am not finding fault, just asking. Good job in bringing your points on love accross to the readers.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this to be rather long at first. Then I was wanting to stop by the mailbox too. The more I read, the more enticing it became. I became so absorbed in the details that the length became a joy of reading. I had an idea that the stones were real and then the truth was brought out with perfect timing. Great poem, story or whatever. It gets your attention and keeps it till the end. Something read that will linger in your mind and would actually make a good story to sit around telling children for years to come. If I could I would give you 10 stars. BRAVO!
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Review of The One  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good job using descriptive details to bring ot heartfelt emotions felt for the boyfriend. Young love when everything is so easy and not complicated. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of I am dead  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good job expressing the inner most thoughts of the character. We had no choice as to being born and it will be the same in death. We can die daily to our problems and sins. Just call on God ask Him for help. I have been in the situation where I didn't want to live and begged to die, but i seemed I couldn't do either one. I did survive and had to ask forgivness from God for wanting my life to be taken away, a precious gift that he freely gave to me. One thing for sure when you have a bad day, you only have to live it once, it doesn't repeat itself. Try to clear the mind and approach each day as it is your first and could be your last. You might appreciate life more. Well written giving the reader thought for the future.
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Review of Not Love Alone  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written and filled with descriptive details setting stage or a great emotional balance. Alone is the one place we rather not be. But, it is far better to be alone than to be with someone that controls you. If we put god first, He will surely lighten your load. Great job describing what lifes journey should be like.
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Review of The Mirror Thing  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job writing and a over all pouring out of your heart. We are all seeking help, but so many are looking in the wrong place. Well written with a depth of description pertaining to the title. A fantasic ending with encouragement for the reader.
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Review of Glancing Back  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Well written with an emotional content reflecting the title. I am sure we all glance back at our lives at one time or another probably seeing broken dreams. No matter what was in the past we must look forward to the future. As long as we are alive, dreaming needs to be present for with the absence of it, life is just not the same. You did a great job bringng out detailed thoughts and experiences in your writing.
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Review of Grace  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well written and full of a depth of descriptive details. In my opinion the way the world looks depends on whose eyes we are looking through. I agree about being formed from Grace, but what we do with what was dealt to us is our decision. Great job giving the reader material for thought.
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Review of ~No Tears Left  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A great job expressing deep pain experienced which caused a love that you desired so strongly to eventually die. When it gets to the point that you can cry no more, then you have held on for too long. The scars will heal easier because you no longer are in love. Trying to turn loose of someone that is hurting you while you are still in love with them, is a even harder task. You did a terriffic job getting your point accross to the reader.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written in the fact it does pertain to the title. It could use more descriptive and emotional depth. However you did get your point accross.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with an emotional depth flowing from beginning to the end. Great title for a heartfelt song that anyone would enjoy the one they love singing to them. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Home  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well written filled with a depth of descriptive detail needed to get the point accross. Great job getting the readers attention helping look for home. Then an unexpected ending with home being ther the whole time. Perfect touch for such an emotional poem. Some people never find this answer in their own life.
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Review of I Wish  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with a depth of emotioal details flowing. I understand the sadness for what is gone, but it seems there might be more left than lonely dishes. I guess I have always held to tightly to wishes and memories. I admire this character for being able to turn loose so easily. Great job.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well written and filled with a depth of descriptive details that were needed to get the points accross to the readers. I think it could have been just as meaningful without the profanity. It was action packed with an ending that lined up with the whole story, but I wasn't expecting it to end that way. You are very talented writer as I am sure you already know. Thanks for sharing such an emotional heartfelt story. The length could have been shortened. But all the action keeps you hanging in there.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with an depth of emotion bringing out the old saying Eyes Don't Lie. Sometimes you may find eyes that you can't read because seems be nothing there. This poem was sad the character believed in love even though they knew better so it opened the door for pain,
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Review of Window  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with desriptive details in enough depth to help bring the writing to life. Such an emotional aspect; she is trying so hard not to show her feelings on the outside while her heart is breaking on the inside. I experienced this exact same breakup at Christmas, many years ago. You wrote in a way that the reader could feel the emotions as if they were really there. Great job, thanks for sharing.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Written with good content about a deep emotional subject that is too often hidden these days. You might consider brushing up on your grammer. You got the point accross, but sometimes it is hard getting the details organized. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Tattered Heart  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well written with an emotional depth that is rather sad. Good choice for a topic which you have brought out descriptively. Writing can defintely help bring out suppressed feelings, while it attempts to work on your healing process. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of A Bitter World  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow!!! You really hit the nail on the head. If people were not so selfish, they might change. They need to put God first and everything would fall into place, but so many refuse Him, just as they will be refused. You did a great job writing and bringing out points that needs to read by the whole world. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by highhopes
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, thanks I needed that!! Thanks for the generous gift. Please visit anytime.
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Review of A new day  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great job for your first poem. Thanks for sharing. One thing for sure we can all learn from the past. Lessons learned, that we have no desire to repeat. Thank God we do have a future to look forward too. Good luck using for talent of writing in the future.
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Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A story well written filled with a depth of descriptive details in reference to the topic. The emotional content flowed through, changing when necessary to keep up with the characters. A very interesting story keeping the reader going along with a even pace and then suddenly the surprise ending. That was such a great job bringing out such devotion.
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Review of Covered In Love  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow I found this to be a great romantic poem. I wish could write something with such a deep meaningful and emotional depth for the love of my life. The poem rhymns so precisely with such an even flow, yet not straying away from the intended topic. Heartfelt emotions decribed in just enough depth for the reader to feel the passion but not getting too personal. Great Job.
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Review of Respect  
Review by highhopes
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job writing about respect; something we all want, but sometimes not easily found. Well written with a depth of emotion that lets the reader know that you have been, done that. Respect is sometimes freely given and on the otherhand sometimes it has to be earned after mistrust has crept into the picture. Well put, the pain has to be put away and we can regain what was intended. Respect has to be in the foundation of any relationship. Also we should have respect for all of God's creation and His word. It all sort of flows together when we give Him control.
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