This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, A Fae Encounter.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about about fairies will love this hypnotic poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The hypnotic and haunting lure of the fairy magic.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. The pink and purple grab the reader’s attention. Nice touch.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:Putting the poem in bold would really make those colors pop.
FLOW:The rhythm of this poem gave it smooth movement from beginning to end and gently pulled the reader along.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Mantra.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about not being afraid to follow your dreams will enjoy this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:The encouragement the words suggest.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Full of hope.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
OTHER THINGS OUT OF PLACE:
FLOW:This poem moves nicely from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Nonet - A Soldier's Tears.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about soldiers and war will like this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:That you explained what a Nonet type poem is.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit sad. War is a terrible thing for anyone to witness, whether is be a soldier or a noncombatant. /c}
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. I love the shape this poem has when it was centered.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Following the Rainbow.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about exploring our world will love this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The advise given by the leprechaun.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Encouraged.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, The Spider.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about spiders and fate will enjoy this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The image your words created.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit unnerved.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. The extra spacing made this poem easy on the eyes. Thank you.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging. I don’t wish to offend or upset anyone.
I just read your wee poem, Ocean Rhapsody.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about the sea will love this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:The vivid picture your words painted.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moved smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Pocketful of Dreams.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about fairies and love will adore this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:The sweet images the words create.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Faerie Wish.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about fairies and love will adore this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The rhyme of the words.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. The two colors are eye catching.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem moves smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee tale, John“s Jar.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about strange curiosity shops will like this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:That John got what he deserved.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A sense of justice.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
His cold gray eyes meet her deep blue eyes that seemed to seer (see) right though him, all the way to his dark cold soul.
He went to his couch and sat down and flipped on the TV (comma) the news was on.
Becky sat in on (in or on needs to be removed) her couch with the quilt up around her shoulders, amazed at the turn of events.
DIALOGUE:The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee tale, The Charm Bracelet.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about strange curiosity shops and the strange items they hold will find this a delightful tale to read.
WHAT I LIKED:The strange magic within the charm bracelet.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Full of curiosity.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
She looked rather like a Gipsy, (Gypsy) her beautiful features wrapped in a veil of mystery.
DIALOGUE:The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Evil is a Concept.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about writing will love this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The twist at the end. I thought you were writing about someone.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Encouraged.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, All That Is Left.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about their moms will find this a heartbreaking tribute to a mom.
WHAT I LIKED:The emotional impact of the words.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me think of my own mom who passed in 2002 and all she did for my two brothers and me. I shed a few tears.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Hidden In the Darkness.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about darkness and the thing that lurk there shall like this tiny poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The words made it seem as if the dark was a living breathing creature.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit nervous.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
But i (I)know from experience that
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Palette of Pastels.
APPEAL:Those who like to read poetry will like this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:The words paint a vivid picture.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, The Hot-air Balloon Ride.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about hot air balloon rides will like this tiny poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The rhythm of the poem.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:This would make a great story.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Moondance.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about dancing in the rain will love this wee poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The warm fuzzy feeling it gave me as I read this poem.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Warm and fuzzy.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, The Empty Cradle.
APPEAL:Those who have lost a child will find comfort in this words.
WHAT I LIKED:All the love that came through the words.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Sad. It made me cry.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS/COMMENTS:What a beautiful and heart breaking image at the end. I‘ve never lost a child and can only image what a heartache that would be. I watched my mom go through it and it changed her. The sparkle vanished from her eyes for a very long time and she was never the same afterwards. My heart goes out to whom ever this happened to.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, ANOTHER STORM.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about storms will love this tiny poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The words create a vivid picture.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Small in this vast universe.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. The red and green grabs the reader’s attention.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, The Gift.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about not wasting time will love this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:The use of a clock to say don‘t waste your precious time for it never comes again.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Encouraged.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. The larger font made it easy on the eyes. Thanks.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
I love your handle. I picture a dragon with a feather quill writing in beautiful script.
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Image2.
WHAT I LIKED:How the dragon is giving the one warrior the once over and the warrior seems a bit leery of the dragon.
APPEAL:Those who like dragons and warriors will love this image.
The image matches the title quite well.
The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
Great job.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Boilerlady.
WHAT I LIKED:How the image catches the eye.
APPEAL:Those who like SteamPunk will love this image.
The image matches the title quite well.
The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee article, Developing a Novel Series.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about improving their writing skills.
WHAT I LIKED:The quote at the beginning by Ernest Hemingway
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Encouraged.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
5) Develop a habit of working daily on your series.
Writing one novel per year is a reasonable goal if you're serious and willing to incorporate writing into your lifestyle. This is not an overnight process, and you may have to make adjustments to other commitments and figure out what times of the day your write best -- your should be you
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee tale, Grief.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about strange things happening will find this an interesting tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:The twist at the end.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit unnerved.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
DIALOGUE:The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Echos of the past.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about dying love and hope will love this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:That this soul didn‘t give up on love.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit sad.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee tale, Hallow - what?.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about Halloween will love this wee tale with a twist.
WHAT I LIKED:The twist at the end.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Full of mischief.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SPELLING:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
DIALOGUE:The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
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