This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Dark Poet.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about dark thoughts will like this wee poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The unnerving image at the top of the poem. It grabs the reader‘s attention. I also like that you defined the uncommon words you used for those who didn‘t know what they mean.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit unnerved.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your article, How To Write an Encouraging Review.
APPEAL:Those who want help writing more detailed reviews will find this article extremely helpful.
WHAT I LIKED:The links to other websites for addition help.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Encaouraged
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand. The use of color adds a bit of flare to the article.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Shadows.
The images goes with the poem.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about facing one’s fear.
WHAT I LIKED:The rhythm of the words.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:a bit unnerved.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem flows smoothly from beginning to end.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, The Only Photo of my Sister.
APPEAL:Those who like to read poetry will find this poem intriguing.
WHAT I LIKED:It sets up a mystery to be solved.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Wishing there was more.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS?COMMENTS:This could be the beginning of a mystery tale. Why is there only one photo of her sister?
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee tale, Devil Eyes.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about things that go bump in the night will like this tiny tale.
WHAT I LIKED:You piqued my curiosity.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Wanting more.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this talewas about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Behind it stood a horrific creature, its devilish eyes glowing brightly at the sight of its next victim. -- I think you meant Behind him
DIALOGUE:The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS?COMMENTS:This has the potential of a longer tale. Who was the dead man on the porch? Does this writer’s writing always come to life? What was the creature in the rain? Did this creature kill the dead man for sport or did it have a good reason? Something to think about.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Dragon sig.
WHAT I LIKED:The fierce dragon will appears he won’t take any nonsense from anyone or anything.
APPEAL:Those who like dragons will love this image.
The image matches the title quite well. The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Monumental Failure. BRAVO! Someone else sees what really is going on in Washington.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about the GOP getting what they got coming will love this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:That you didn‘t hold your punches and told it like it is.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Proud.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Old Photos.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about old friends will love this wee poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The memories it gave me.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit sad at the thought of losing old friends.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at WA Inspiration.
WHAT I LIKED:It‘s a beautiful sunset or sunrise.
APPEAL:Those who like to sit and watch the world go by will love this wee image.
The image matches the title quite well. The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
Chapter:I just read chapter 2 of your novel, Entangled.
Title: Chapter 02-Entangled
Author: Max Griffin
APPEAL:Those who like to read about conspiracy and mystery stories will like this novel.
WHAT I LIKED:That this chapter advances the story.
Plot: The plot has been established and is moving forward.
Style & Voice: All the characters are coming through loud and clear. So far all the characters seems necessary to this tale. The writing seems to be in active voice.
Referencing: This tale is set in the modern era.
Scene/Setting: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
DIALOGUE:The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in. Did point of view change without any warnings?
Characters: The characters come across as believable. Lieutenant Detective Sam Myamoto seems like a hard working detective who wants to solve this crime, Chief Harley Sturant wants the case solve yet doesn’t want any outside help & Officer Talisha is an egger young officer looking to impress her bosses.
Grammar: My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Everything seems to be alright.
OTHER MISHAPS:The the 2nd paragraph it have Jumping Eagle. In the very next paragraph it has changed to Running Eagle. Which is it?
Showing vs. Telling: You are doing a good job of showing us the tale.
Just My Personal Opinion:This novel is starting to shape up nicely. This chapter moves the story and plot forward.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Newest Spidey Sig.
WHAT I LIKED:The creepy wee spider looks as if it won‘t take any nonsense from anyone.
APPEAL:Those who like spiders will love this signature.
The image matches the title quite well. The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is. You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Task image.
WHAT I LIKED:The boldness.
APPEAL:Those who like future looking cities will love this image.
The image matches the title quite well. The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is. You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at dogpacksig.
WHAT I LIKED:The unique design of this signature.
APPEAL:Those who like simple images will like this signature.
The image is unique yet simple. The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The words stand out nicely against the background. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee tale, The Seeing Stone.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about magical stones will like this tale.
WHAT I LIKED:It moves along at a nice pace and holds the reader‘s attention.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit sad that one cousin thought he had to kill the other one.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
DIALOGUE:The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS:
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Winged Beast.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about dragons will love this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The images your words create.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Burned.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about whimsical things will love this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The twist at the end.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:It made me smile.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, A Creature of the Night. Bravo!
APPEAL:Those who like to read about the night will love this wee poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The emotions it creates.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Alive with possibilities.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee tale, The Fun House.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about dreams and figuring out what they mean will like this tale.
WHAT I LIKED:It’s very vivid.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:A bit unnerved.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
OOPS!
This is the story of how I died and if you are reading it, this diary is only the first oart to the many puzzle pieces that linger in hidden areas around my death. -- part is misspelled.
OTHER SUGGESTIONS:This wee tale seems to be three paragraphs, yet it’s all together like it’s only one. You might want to put spaces in and indent each paragraph.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at CatWoman Signture.
WHAT I LIKED:The expressions on the different cat faces.
APPEAL:Those who love cats will find this image adorable.
The image matches the title quite well. The colors used are eye catching and appealing. The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image. The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee tale, The Legend of the Bloodstone Ring.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about mysterious rings and hidden mansion shall love this wee tale.
WHAT I LIKED:It set up mystery to be solved.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Curious to see what would happen next.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
OOPS!
A figure stepped out of the shadows into the clearing, cautiously glancing around. Well-built, well-groomed, and well-traveled, professor Waylon Sparks knew he had finally found it. -- Since professor is part of Waylon Sparks name and title, it should be capitalized. Or at least that’s way I was taught in school.
OTHER THINGS OUT OF PLACE:
DIALOGUE:The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.
POINT OF VIEW:I know who's point of view I’m in.
FLOW:This story is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload this tale with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, The Loneliness In Silence.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about being alone will like this wee poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The emotions that the words invoke.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Sad and alone.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
FLOW:This poem is told in a logical order. You didn’t overload it with a lot of foreign words and used a variety of sentence lengths.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, Love's Remains.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about broken heart will sympathize with this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The unique spacing. It draws the reader‘s attention.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Sad.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I just read your wee poem, The Window.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about daydreaming will like this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The images that the words created.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Amazed how one sees the world through a window.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
Congratulations on being published.
I just read your wee poem, Dreams.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about finding their other half will love this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The warm fuzzy feelings the words invoke.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Warm and fuzzy inside.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.
I love your middle name. It’s the same as mine except I spell it Lynn.
I just read your wee poem, When The Windchimes Sing No More.
APPEAL:Those who like to read about one’s surrounding will like this poem.
WHAT I LIKED:The pictures the words paint.
HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL:Award of my surroundings.
TITLE:Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.
FORMAT:This is easy to read and understand.
SETTING:You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.
GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION:My editing skills are not the best in the world, yet I try my best to let the author know if something looks out of place, misspelled or missing.
Seems to be alright.
Great job.
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt
Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak
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